tumhari khaamshi (by vb)

by vb on December 26, 2013, 04:32:10 AM
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Tumhaari khaamshi ne bhi, alag he rang paaya hay
Ajab sundar si tanhaai ka aalam dil pe chhaya hay

Meray tum paas ho lekin, akelaa khud ko paata hun
Nahi kuchh farq, tum men mujh men, main ne aazmaya hay

Jo hum dono ki haalat hay so hum ne dekh li jaisay
Na he tum ne suna hay kuch na he men ne sunaaya hay

Meray wajdaan men kuchh is tarah say ghul chukay ho tum
Mujhay lagta nahi hum men koi apna paraaya hay

Shab-e-ghum ki na-jaanay ibteda ya inteha hay ye
Thaka haaraa koi pachham men taaraa timtimaya hay




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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2013, 04:37:55 AM »
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just superb marhabaa marhabaa
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2013, 04:54:59 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2013, 05:14:20 AM »
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bahut khoob....

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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2013, 05:57:01 AM »
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Bahut badhiya VB jee
Meray tum paas ho lekin, akelaa khud ko paata hun
Nahi kuchh farq, tum men mujh men, main ne aazmaya hay

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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2013, 06:36:00 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Sir, Dheron daad..
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2013, 08:05:52 AM »
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wha wha vb ji bhut khub
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2013, 01:37:34 PM »
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waah waah VB jee behad khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2013, 04:35:00 PM »
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Nice creation vb ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2013, 07:31:44 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Bahut khoooooooooooob.... Dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2013, 08:42:53 PM »
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pazeeraai ka buhat shukriya...
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«Reply #11 on: December 26, 2013, 10:31:59 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: December 27, 2013, 12:46:34 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: December 30, 2013, 07:21:42 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob vb ji.. Usual Smile
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bahut bahut khoob vb ji.. Usual Smile
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