udaasi hay k barhti jaa rahi hay (by vb)

by vb on April 05, 2014, 12:01:25 AM
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ek kaavish .......



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Rag-e-jaaN men utarti jaa rahi hay
Udaasi hay, k barhti jaa rahi hay

Teri yaadon ka sooraj charh raha hay
Ufaq men shaam dhalti jaa rahi hay

Ziaya-e-partav-e-khur teray rukh tak
Faqat asmaa badalti jaa rahi hay

Tasavur k sulagtay bazoovon men
Koi moorat pighalti jaa rahi hay

Burhapa muskuraataa aa raha hay
Javaani haath malti jaa rahi hay

Tujhay haaroon k jeeton hijr ka dukh
Mohabbat khel banti jaa rahi hay

Nigaahon men teri soorat hay taabaaN
Badan say jaaN nikalti jaa rahi hay

Tera ajmaal-e-hayrat barh raha tha
Main samjha baat banti jaa rahi hay

Hazaaron haif meri shaairi par
Tujhay bad-naam karti jaa rahi hay

Mujhay khaamosh pa kar wo ye samjhay
Meri haalat sambhalti jaa rahi hay

Numood-o-bood say ghaafil hayaati
Khumoshi say guzarti jaa rahi hay

Wohi ik shab-guzeeda sham-e-turbat
Sar-afganda hay, jalti jaa rahi hay

Sar-e-baazaar vb kay dukhon par
Mohabbat ben karti jaa rahi hay

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Mohabbat ben karti jaa rahi hay
JunooN ko aaina dikhla rahi hay

Burhaapa nakhvat aalooda hua ku
Javaani haath ku phela rahi hay

Bhula daalaa hay us ko main ne, aye dil!
Wo jis ki yaad tujh ko aa rahi hay

Shakeeb-aamoze hay meri khumoshi
Tumhaari yaad ko sehla rahi hay

Andhera, saa’at-e-mo-ooda jaanooN
Ya teri zulf-e-shab-gooN chha rahi hay

Teri oqaat kya, baad-e-bahaari
Kabhi purva, kabhi pachhwa rahi hay

Khoo-vay nakhcheer hay sehra-nivardi
Isay kis ki kabhi parvaa rahi hay

Dar-e-yazdaaN say koovay mehvishaN tak
Niyaaz-e-zindagi, kya kya rahi hay

Wohi khud-gharz duniya kay taqaazay
Mohabbat, ishq ko samjha rahi hay

Meri jaaN, main maroon teri bala say
Tujhay kya hay, jo too ghabra rahi hay

Khuda hafiz dabistaan-e-sukhan ko
Hamaari shaayari murjha rahi hay

Meray jazbaat bilkul mar chukay hen
Ye kaavish qaafia-pemaa rahi hay

Parhi ho ge ghazal vb ki tum ne
Tumhari chashm-e-nam batla rahi hay

*=======*

Tumhaari chashm-e-num batla rahi hay
Kay ye iqraar bus dhoka dahi hay

Hamen kia ishva-pardaazi say matlab
Jisay andesha-e-amr-o-nahi hay

Kharrad say poochhta rehta hoon akser
JunooN men kya ghalat hay kya sahi hay

Mohabbat hay tujhay apni anaa say
Yehi sachaai hay, haq-payvahi hay

Saba thi too, tu main khaar-e-mugheelaaN
Mujhay thukra dia too ne, sahi hay

Tujhay bhi yaad aati hay hamaari
Magar iqrar say pehlu-tahi hay

Faqat nerang-saazi hay haveeda
Ghazal kya khoob vb ne kahi hay

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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2014, 12:20:40 AM »
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Bahut khubsurat ashaar hain ,
khubsurti se piroye gaye hain .
Is peshkash par dheron daad aur mubarakbad.
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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2014, 01:25:07 AM »
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wah wah wah bohut hi umda peshkash
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2014, 02:16:08 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 05, 2014, 02:35:44 AM »
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ek kaavish .......




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Rag-e-jaaN men utarti jaa rahi hay
Udaasi hay, k barhti jaa rahi hay

Teri yaadon ka sooraj charh raha hay
Ufaq men shaam dhalti jaa rahi hay

Ziaya-e-partav-e-khur teray rukh tak
Faqat asmaa badalti jaa rahi hay

Tasavur k sulagtay bazoovon men
Koi moorat pighalti jaa rahi hay

Burhapa muskuraataa aa raha hay
Javaani haath malti jaa rahi hay

Tujhay haaroon k jeeton hijr ka dukh
Mohabbat khel banti jaa rahi hay

Nigaahon men teri soorat hay taabaaN
Badan say jaaN nikalti jaa rahi hay

Tera ajmaal-e-hayrat barh raha tha
Main samjha baat banti jaa rahi hay

Hazaaron haif meri shaairi par
Tujhay bad-naam karti jaa rahi hay

Mujhay khaamosh pa kar wo ye samjhay
Meri haalat sambhalti jaa rahi hay

Numood-o-bood say ghaafil hayaati
Khumoshi say guzarti jaa rahi hay

Wohi ik shab-guzeeda sham-e-turbat
Sar-afganda hay, jalti jaa rahi hay

Sar-e-baazaar vb kay dukhon par
Mohabbat ben karti jaa rahi hay

*=======*

Mohabbat ben karti jaa rahi hay
JunooN ko aaina dikhla rahi hay

Burhaapa nakhvat aalooda hua ku
Javaani haath ku phela rahi hay

Bhula daalaa hay us ko main ne, aye dil!
Wo jis ki yaad tujh ko aa rahi hay

Shakeeb-aamoze hay meri khumoshi
Tumhaari yaad ko sehla rahi hay

Andhera, saa’at-e-mo-ooda jaanooN
Ya teri zulf-e-shab-gooN chha rahi hay

Teri oqaat kya, baad-e-bahaari
Kabhi purva, kabhi pachhwa rahi hay

Khoo-vay nakhcheer hay sehra-nivardi
Isay kis ki kabhi parvaa rahi hay

Dar-e-yazdaaN say koovay mehvishaN tak
Niyaaz-e-zindagi, kya kya rahi hay

Wohi khud-gharz duniya kay taqaazay
Mohabbat, ishq ko samjha rahi hay

Meri jaaN, main maroon teri bala say
Tujhay kya hay, jo too ghabra rahi hay

Khuda hafiz dabistaan-e-sukhan ko
Hamaari shaayari murjha rahi hay

Meray jazbaat bilkul mar chukay hen
Ye kaavish qaafia-pemaa rahi hay

Parhi ho ge ghazal vb ki tum ne
Tumhari chashm-e-nam batla rahi hay

*=======*

Tumhaari chashm-e-num batla rahi hay
Kay ye iqraar bus dhoka dahi hay

Hamen kia ishva-pardaazi say matlab
Jisay andesha-e-amr-o-nahi hay

Kharrad say poochhta rehta hoon akser
JunooN men kya ghalat hay kya sahi hay

Mohabbat hay tujhay apni anaa say
Yehi sachaai hay, haq-payvahi hay

Saba thi too, tu main khaar-e-mugheelaaN
Mujhay thukra dia too ne, sahi hay

Tujhay bhi yaad aati hay hamaari
Magar iqrar say pehlu-tahi hay

Faqat nerang-saazi hay haveeda
Ghazal kya khoob vb ne kahi hay

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vb saheb,
           bahut hi umda ghazal kahi hai, main yoindia shayri group ke qanoono'n se waqif nahi hoon, ye bhi nahi malooom ki rau dene ka ikhtiyar bhi hai ki nahi, baharhaal apni taraf se rau pesh kar raha hoon........................
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2014, 08:13:59 AM »
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EXCELLENT DAAD DAAD DAAD
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2014, 03:07:53 AM »
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bahut khoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooob vb ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2014, 10:52:22 AM »
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Janaab, ghazal padh kar mere muNh se waah nikla aur muNh khula ka khula rah gaya. Masha Allah kya andaaz hai likhne ka, meri dua hai k ye barqaraar rahe, phale phoole.
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2014, 10:53:16 AM »
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Janaab, ghazal padh kar mere muNh se waah nikla aur muNh khula ka khula rah gaya. Masha Allah kya andaaz hai likhne ka, meri dua hai k ye barqaraar rahe, phale phoole. Rau jaisi nawaazish choti lagti hai aapke kalaam ko, phir bhi ayk pesh karta huN.
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2014, 04:10:28 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2014, 06:05:28 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat ashaar hain ,
khubsurti se piroye gaye hain .
Is peshkash par dheron daad aur mubarakbad.
Mohtaram janab Hassan Siddiqui Sahab!

Hosla afzai par saraapa sipaas hen...

ahqar
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2014, 06:06:26 PM »
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wah wah wah bohut hi umda peshkash

Mohtaram janab jeet jainam Sahab!

nawazish...

ahqar
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2014, 06:07:21 PM »
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Bohat Khub!

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Mohtarma Shireen Hakani sahiba!

shukar guzaar hen aap kay...

ahqar
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2014, 06:08:38 PM »
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vb saheb,
           bahut hi umda ghazal kahi hai, main yoindia shayri group ke qanoono'n se waqif nahi hoon, ye bhi nahi malooom ki rau dene ka ikhtiyar bhi hai ki nahi, baharhaal apni taraf se rau pesh kar raha hoon........................

Mohtaram Syed Mohd Mahzar sahab!

inayat hay aap ki... hamaray liyay aap ki hosla afzaai hi bohat hay... or us par sipaas guzaar hen...

dua go
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2014, 06:09:24 PM »
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EXCELLENT DAAD DAAD DAAD

Mohtaram saini sahab!

buhat shukriya aap ka...

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