Waadey Karney Waaley Kab KahaaN...........masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on September 05, 2012, 11:41:18 AM
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Rooj thoraa saa jakham khaate hai, rooj thoraa saa muskuraate hai.
Jitnee tasalliyaaN miltee hai, ham utnaa hee toot jaate hai.
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Kee jab shohrat ke gharaano me kadam rakhkhaa to ye jaanaa.
Praaye kuch nahee kahte, deeye apne bujhaatey hai.
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Dulhan unhe banaa kar pyaar se ghunghat uthaate hai.
Khawab me es tarah se jeetey hai, ham hakeekat hee bhol jaate hai.
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Gulaab saa thaa apnaa pyaar, naa khataa unkee hai naa meree.
Phool to phool hai aakhir murjhaa hee jaate hai.
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Ae dil tu aas kiyooN rakhtaa hai unke laut aane kee.
Waadey karney waaley kab kahaaN waadey nibhaatey hai.
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Hamaare lab nahee khulte to bas unkaa ghar bachaaney ko.
Warnaa raatoN ke kisse hamey bhee khoob yaad aate hai.
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"Unhe dil se nikaal ke jiyuN" ye kaise mumkin hai "Massom".
Jin gharo me loog nahee rahte we  tootke  gir jaate hai.
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2012, 11:54:00 AM »
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Rooj thoraa saa jakham khaate hai, rooj thoraa saa muskuraate hai.
Jitnee tasalliyaaN miltee hai, ham utnaa hee toot jaate hai.
.
Kee jab shohrat ke gharaano me kadam rakhkhaa to ye jaanaa.
Praaye kuch nahee kahte, deeye apne bujhaatey hai.
.
Dulhan unhe banaa kar pyaar se ghunghat uthaate hai.
Khawab me es tarah se jeetey hai, ham hakeekat hee bhol jaate hai.
.
Gulaab saa thaa apnaa pyaar, naa khataa unkee hai naa meree.
Phool to phool hai aakhir murjhaa hee jaate hai.
.
Ae dil tu aas kiyooN rakhtaa hai unke laut aane kee.
Waadey karney waaley kab kahaaN waadey nibhaatey hai.
.
Hamaare lab nahee khulte to bas unkaa ghar bachaaney ko.
Warnaa raatoN ke kisse hamey bhee khoob yaad aate hai.
.
"Unhe dil se nikaal ke jiyuN" ye kaise mumkin hai "Massom".
Jin gharo me loog nahee rahte we tootkar gir jaate hai.


Wah wah kya khoob likha hai aapne massom jee. babut acche
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2012, 12:22:09 PM »
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Rooj thoraa saa jakham khaate hai, rooj thoraa saa muskuraate hai.
Jitnee tasalliyaaN miltee hai, ham utnaa hee toot jaate hai.  Applause Applause Applause :clap:Kya baat hai..bahut umda..dil ko choo gaya.
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Kee jab shohrat ke gharaano me kadam rakhkhaa to ye jaanaa.
Praaye kuch nahee kahte, deeye apne bujhaatey hai.  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Dulhan unhe banaa kar pyaar se ghunghat uthaate hai.
Khawab me es tarah se jeetey hai, ham hakeekat hee bhol jaate hai.  Applause Applause Applause ab meri baari, shikaayat karne kee..
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Gulaab saa thaa apnaa pyaar, naa khataa unkee hai naa meree.
Phool to phool hai aakhir murjhaa hee jaate hai.  Applause Applause Applause kisi na kisi ki khata hamesha hotee hai. shayad aham..
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Ae dil tu aas kiyooN rakhtaa hai unke laut aane kee.
Waadey karney waaley kab kahaaN waadey nibhaatey hai.  Applause Applause Applause ye khayaal khoob raha...
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Hamaare lab nahee khulte to bas unkaa ghar bachaaney ko.
Warnaa raatoN ke kisse hamey bhee khoob yaad aate hai. is sher pe daad dun yaa...chaliye aap par chodte hai..UMDA..CLASS
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"Unhe dil se nikaal ke jiyuN" ye kaise mumkin hai "Massom".
Jin gharo me loog nahee rahte we tootkar gir jaate hai.  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aaj to vaakai..aapne kamaal kar diyaa..ek se ek badhkar khayaalaat..mujhe to khoob bhaaye.
wah masoom bhai WAAH
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2012, 12:41:36 PM »
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bhahut khoob masoom ji..

achhe khayalato se saji ye ghazal bahut bhai hume.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2012, 02:15:52 PM »
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Masoom Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab kia kahne behad umdaa tahreer kahi hai..
umdaa taqleeq aur behad khoob khayaal... kafi achche sher
kaheN hai har ashaar meiN gazab ki gehrai hai janab... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   

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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 08:29:59 PM »
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bahut khoob masoom ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2012, 10:36:10 PM »
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bahut acha likha hai Masoom ji...
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2012, 12:06:34 AM »
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waah waah wonderful
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2012, 06:43:52 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  wah wah wah Masoom bhaai... shabd nahi mil rahe taarif ke liye itna massstt likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2012, 01:00:15 PM »
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just superb tareef ke liye alfaz kam bahut hi khubsurat aur umda qalaam...........hazaro daad aur mubarakbaad


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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2012, 04:17:47 AM »
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Wah wah kya khoob likha hai aapne massom jee. babut acche
Bahoot bahoot bahooot sukriyaa suman jee
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bhahut khoob masoom ji..

achhe khayalato se saji ye ghazal bahut bhai hume.. Usual Smile

Bahoot bahoot sukriyaa
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«Reply #12 on: September 27, 2012, 07:52:26 AM »
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Masoom Sahaab Aadaab!


Masha Allaah janab kia kahne behad umdaa tahreer kahi hai..
umdaa taqleeq aur behad khoob khayaal... kafi achche sher
kaheN hai har ashaar meiN gazab ki gehrai hai janab... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   


Bahut bahut sukriya Parwaaz bhai
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2013, 08:36:29 PM »
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Rooj thoraa saa jakham khaate hai, rooj thoraa saa muskuraate hai.
Jitnee tasalliyaaN miltee hai, ham utnaa hee toot jaate hai.
.
Kee jab shohrat ke gharaano me kadam rakhkhaa to ye jaanaa.
Praaye kuch nahee kahte, deeye apne bujhaatey hai.
.
Dulhan unhe banaa kar pyaar se ghunghat uthaate hai.
Khawab me es tarah se jeetey hai, ham hakeekat hee bhol jaate hai.
.
Gulaab saa thaa apnaa pyaar, naa khataa unkee hai naa meree.
Phool to phool hai aakhir murjhaa hee jaate hai.
.
Ae dil tu aas kiyooN rakhtaa hai unke laut aane kee.
Waadey karney waaley kab kahaaN waadey nibhaatey hai.
.
Hamaare lab nahee khulte to bas unkaa ghar bachaaney ko.
Warnaa raatoN ke kisse hamey bhee khoob yaad aate hai.
.
"Unhe dil se nikaal ke jiyuN" ye kaise mumkin hai "Massom".
Jin gharo me loog nahee rahte we  tootke  gir jaate hai.

Bahut khoob aap kay liye aapni post par do shabd likh rahi hun.

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