Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!

by abdbundeli on February 28, 2011, 11:23:49 AM

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malli

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«Reply #15 on: March 06, 2011, 11:11:59 AM »

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Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!
Jiyengey ham, bhaley hi kaheen beyhtar lagey mar jaanaa!!

Na jaaney kyaa pilaayaa hai, tumhaarey un uyoonon ney:
Nazar mein aa rahaa hai kyon na koyee, 'abd', butkhaanaa?

Uncle ji.... bahut bahut umda peshkash. aapne to last line pe gor karne ko kaha. Hum kahenge shuruwat se aakhiri line tak bahut bahut khoob raha.
Daad hazir hai uncle ji. Kabul farmayiyega.


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!

«Reply #16 on: March 07, 2011, 11:57:28 AM »

Quote from: malli on March 06, 2011, 11:11:59 AM

Uncle ji.... bahut bahut umda peshkash. aapne to last line pe gor karne ko kaha. Hum kahenge shuruwat se aakhiri line tak bahut bahut khoob raha.
Daad hazir hai uncle ji. Kabul farmayiyega.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Roja ji! Kahaan gum ho jaatee ho - itney lambey arson key liye! Has a new one been added to your family!!

- abd bundeli


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malli

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Re: Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!

«Reply #17 on: March 08, 2011, 02:23:58 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on March 07, 2011, 11:57:28 AM

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Roja ji! Kahaan gum ho jaatee ho - itney lambey arson key liye! Has a new one been added to your family!!

- abd bundeli

haha uncle ji reply PM mein rakha hai.
jawab shairy mein dene ko dil ker raha hai..... very lovely creation


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abdbundeli

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Re: Wafaa ki qasam khaatey hee, milaa hai balam harjaayee!

«Reply #18 on: March 08, 2011, 01:31:24 PM »

Quote from: malli on March 08, 2011, 02:23:58 AM

haha uncle ji reply PM mein rakha hai.
jawab shairy mein dene ko dil ker raha hai..... very lovely creation

Thanks! Yah bhi padh liyaa, wah bhi padh liyaa!
Khush raho! Aagey 'shaayaree' hi 'shaayaree' hai!

- abd bundeli


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