ye kon chaahta hay (by vb)

by vb on November 16, 2013, 03:23:36 PM
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college k daur main likha tha kabhi, kuchh aisa..


tried to re-write.....




Main chaahtaa hun meri zindagi kitaab banay
Kisay kahun k meri zindagi ka baab banay?

Usi ko parh k main har imtehaan main uteroon
Har ik jamaat main wo hi mera nisaab banay

Mera savaal na laazim hay na he mushkil hay
Isi kitaab main likh do agar jawaab banay

Main jaagtay main bhe dekhoon, tu usi ko dekhoon
Wo neend men bhe meray saath ho, khawaab banay

Ye tashnagi, ye dhoop, aablay ye dasht-e-hayaat
Main chal para hun, samandar banay, saraab banay

Hansi tu aayay gi tum ko jo parho gi ye ghazal
Ye kon chaahta hay, zindagi azaab banay

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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2013, 05:51:08 PM »
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Mera savaal na laazim hay na he mushkil hay
Isi kitaab main likh do agar jawaab banay

Main jaagtay main bhe dekhoon, tu usi ko dekhoon
Wo neend men bhe meray saath ho, khawaab banay

Ye tashnagi, ye dhoop, aablay ye dasht-e-hayaat
Main chal para hun, samandar banay, saraab banay

Hansi tu aayay gi tum ko jo parho gi ye ghazal
Ye kon chaahta hay, zindagi azaab banay

Wah wah wah aur bas waah
bahut badhiya VB jee
maza aa gaya
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2013, 06:08:30 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2013, 08:40:51 PM »
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bahut khoob vb sahab..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2013, 08:43:27 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2013, 08:55:53 PM »
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Usi ko parh k main har imtehaan main uteroon
Har ik jamaat main wo hi mera nisaab banay

Wahh!!! wahh!!! wahh!!! bahot khoob...
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2013, 02:15:09 AM »
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bohut khub
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2013, 12:46:32 PM »
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Shukriya aap sub ka....
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