Ye Unka Iqraar Thehra !!!

by deepika_divya on February 01, 2010, 10:58:25 AM
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Ak bahoot ache Dost ne Hamare jo khud bahoot ache Shayar hai Unhone mujhse Yea likhne ko kaha... Darasal Iss Ghazal Pehle 3 sher Dost ne Likhe hai aur kaha mujhse ki main aage bada kar pura karun....

Pehle 3 sher Uss Dost ne Likhe hai aur baaki ke 3 Maine.... Ab aap bataiye ki maine Unke sher ke saath Insaaf kiya hai ki Nainsaafi !



Hum Chup Hain Unka Ye Ishaar Thehra
Nazron Kaho Ye Unka Iqraar Thehra

You.n To Kuch Bhi Nahi Kehte Hain
Unse Piyaar Magar Beshumar Thehra

Uske Hi Dam se Hai  Saji Mehfil
Uske Hi Dil Pe Ikhteyaar Thehra

Socha Karde Izhaar e Mohabbat Unse
Par Dil Mera Tera Raazdaar Thehra

Mile Dost Khoo e Yaar Mea Bahoot
Par Ankhon Me Tera Intzaar Thehra

Ehsaas e Mohabbat Na hoga khatam
“Divya” Ko Tera Hi Khumaar Thehra


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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2010, 11:35:04 AM »
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Sophi ji aapne ye ghazal bahut saleeqe se mukammal ki hai. Pahle ke jo teen sher hain usi ke mizaaj ke mutabiq baaqi ke teen sher hain. Kul milaakar ghazal bahot achhi ban padi hai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2010, 01:20:53 AM »
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Ak bahoot ache Dost ne Hamare jo khud bahoot ache Shayar hai Unhone mujhse Yea likhne ko kaha... Darasal Iss Ghazal Pehle 3 sher Dost ne Likhe hai aur kaha mujhse ki main aage bada kar pura karun....

Pehle 3 sher Uss Dost ne Likhe hai aur baaki ke 3 Maine.... Ab aap bataiye ki maine Unke sher ke saath Insaaf kiya hai na Nainsaafi !



Hum Chup Hain Unka Ye Ishaar Thehra
Nazron Kaho Ye Unka Iqraar Thehra

You.n To Kuch Bhi Nahi Kehte Hain
Unse Piyaar Magar Beshumar Thehra

Uske Hi Dam se Hai  Saji Mehfil
Uske Hi Dil Pe Ikhteyaar Thehra

Socha Karde Izhaar e Mohabbat Unse
Par Dil Mera Tera Raazdaar Thehra

Mile Dost Khoo e Yaar Mea Bahoot
Par Ankhon Me Tera Intzaar Thehra

Ehsaas e Mohabbat Na hoga khatam
“Divya” Ko Tera Hi Khumaar Thehra


Divya

wah kya baat hai    sophi ji----friend ji...

ISHARON HI ISHARON ME IQRAAR KAR DIYA
HAMNE BHI BIN SOCHE HAAN KAR DIYA
UNKA HI EHSAAN THA JO APNA HAMKO SAATH DIYA
HAMNE BHI APNA UNKO DIL DE DIYA

YUN TOH AUR BHI THEY MUJHKO CHAHANEWALE
PAR UNKA HI CHEHRA MERE AANKHON ME GHAR KAR DIYA
AB KYA BATAI UNKO KI HAM UNSE PYAAR KARTE HAI
BIN KAHE HI UNHONE MERA PYAAR SWEEKAR KAR DIYA
MARTE DAM TAK HAM UNKA SAATH NAHI CHODHENGE
HAMNE NE APNA SAB KUCH USKE  NAAM KAR DIYA...


PLEASE  DEKHIYE AB KAISA HAI....
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2010, 03:58:12 AM »
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nice creation Sophi ji as well as Cara ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2010, 07:14:18 AM »
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Sophi ji aapne ye ghazal bahut saleeqe se mukammal ki hai. Pahle ke jo teen sher hain usi ke mizaaj ke mutabiq baaqi ke teen sher hain. Kul milaakar ghazal bahot achhi ban padi hai. Nice creation.

Thank you so so Much !
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2010, 07:47:33 AM »
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wah kya baat hai    sophi ji----friend ji...

ISHARON HI ISHARON ME IQRAAR KAR DIYA
HAMNE BHI BIN SOCHE HAAN KAR DIYA
UNKA HI EHSAAN THA JO APNA HAMKO SAATH DIYA
HAMNE BHI APNA UNKO DIL DE DIYA

YUN TOH AUR BHI THEY MUJHKO CHAHANEWALE
PAR UNKA HI CHEHRA MERE AANKHON ME GHAR KAR DIYA
AB KYA BATAI UNKO KI HAM UNSE PYAAR KARTE HAI
BIN KAHE HI UNHONE MERA PYAAR SWEEKAR KAR DIYA
MARTE DAM TAK HAM UNKA SAATH NAHI CHODHENGE
HAMNE NE APNA SAB KUCH USKE  NAAM KAR DIYA...


PLEASE  DEKHIYE AB KAISA HAI....


Bahoot Khoob Cara ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2010, 07:50:44 AM »
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nice creation Sophi ji as well as Cara ji

Thank you so much Hasmi ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2010, 07:51:04 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
behad khoob likha hai Divya ji,awesome
and Cara ji aapne bhi acha likha  Applause Applause Applause

Thank you soooooooo Much Kaash ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2010, 06:10:41 PM »
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Kamaal ke likhti hai aap Sophi ji,bahut khoobsurati se aapne apne dil ke baat likhi.really touched,great work.Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2010, 10:03:47 AM »
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Kamaal ke likhti hai aap Sophi ji,bahut khoobsurati se aapne apne dil ke baat likhi.really touched,great work.Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank you so so so so Much Madhu ji !
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2010, 10:30:40 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!!

Aapke saath-saath apke uss dost ko bhi daat dena chahunga..bahut khoob likha hai aap dono ne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: February 09, 2010, 10:34:31 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!!

Aapke saath-saath apke uss dost ko bhi daat dena chahunga..bahut khoob likha hai aap dono ne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Thank you so so so so Much Khwaish ji... and thank you uss Dost ki taraf se bhi.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2010, 08:23:09 AM »
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Ak bahoot ache Dost ne Hamare jo khud bahoot ache Shayar hai Unhone mujhse Yea likhne ko kaha... Darasal Iss Ghazal Pehle 3 sher Dost ne Likhe hai aur kaha mujhse ki main aage bada kar pura karun....

Pehle 3 sher Uss Dost ne Likhe hai aur baaki ke 3 Maine.... Ab aap bataiye ki maine Unke sher ke saath Insaaf kiya hai na Nainsaafi !



Hum Chup Hain Unka Ye Ishaar Thehra
Nazron Kaho Ye Unka Iqraar Thehra

You.n To Kuch Bhi Nahi Kehte Hain
Unse Piyaar Magar Beshumar Thehra

Uske Hi Dam se Hai  Saji Mehfil
Uske Hi Dil Pe Ikhteyaar Thehra

Socha Karde Izhaar e Mohabbat Unse
Par Dil Mera Tera Raazdaar Thehra

Mile Dost Khoo e Yaar Mea Bahoot
Par Ankhon Me Tera Intzaar Thehra

Ehsaas e Mohabbat Na hoga khatam
“Divya” Ko Tera Hi Khumaar Thehra


Divya

Bohot khoob Divs, you have written very well..Very nice work indeed.
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2010, 08:54:10 AM »
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Bahut hi accha likha gaya hai dear...

and cara ji .... bahut khoob  Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2010, 09:28:06 AM »
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Bohot khoob Divs, you have written very well..Very nice work indeed.

Thank you so Much Talat di.. Thanks from the Friend too.. And love to see you back !
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