ZAALIM......(K_A)

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                     HUAA ZAKHMI YEH DIL TERI ADAA SEY ZAALIM,
                     HUAA QATL YEH JAAN TERI  JAFAA SEY ZAALIM,

                
                     AATI HAI BAHAAR NIKALTAA HAI JAB TU GHAR SEY,
                     KHILTAA HAI CHAMAN BHI TEREY RAZAA SEY ZAALIM,

                
                     ASAR ITNAA TERAA KHO GAYAA CHAAND JAANEY KAHAAN,
                     MILTAA HAI CHHUP KAR WOH  AB SAMAA SEY ZAALIM ,


                     KHOOB LOOT TAA HAI APNI MAKKARI SEY JAHAAN KO,
                     KI SAAREY TABAAH HAIN TERI WAFAA SEY ZAALIM,

            
                     SAJTI HAI MEHFIL TERI TAARIKION MAIN KHAMOSH,
                     ROSHNI BHI DARTI HAI TERI KHAFAA SEY ZAALIM....!!!      

                
                    
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2009, 11:16:39 PM »
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                     HUAA ZAKHMI YEH DIL TERI ADAA SEY ZAALIM,
                     HUAA QATL YEH JAAN TERI NIGAAH SEY ZAALIM,

                 
                     AATI HAI BAHAAR NIKALTAA HAI JAB BHI TU GHAR SEY,
                     KHILTAA HAI CHAMAN BHI TEREY TUFAIL MAIN ZAALIM,

                 
                     ASAR ITNAA HAI TERAA KHO GAYAA CHAAND JAANEY KAHAAN,
                     KAHKASHAN AB TUJHKO MAHTAAB SAMAJHTEY HAIN ZAALIM,


                     KHOOB LOOT TAA HAI APNI WAFAA SEY TU ISS JAHAAN KO,
                     KI SAAREY FIDAA HAIN TERI DAGABAAZI PER ZAALIM,

           
                     SAJTI HAI MEHFIL TERI TAARIKION MAIN KHAMOSH,
                     ROSHNI KI TALAB NAHIN HAI JAB TAK TERAA WAJOOD ZAALIM....!!!

Wah wah bahut khoob KA ji Nice Ghazal  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2009, 12:17:44 AM »
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Wah Khamosh ji really touching n beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation,excellent
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2009, 01:47:10 AM »
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very very very nice
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2009, 11:42:53 AM »
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Nice one Khamosh Ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2009, 11:46:19 AM »
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                     HUAA ZAKHMI YEH DIL TERI ADAA SEY ZAALIM,
                     HUAA QATL YEH JAAN TERI NIGAAH SEY ZAALIM,

                 
                     AATI HAI BAHAAR NIKALTAA HAI JAB BHI TU GHAR SEY,
                     KHILTAA HAI CHAMAN BHI TEREY TUFAIL MAIN ZAALIM,

                 
                     ASAR ITNAA HAI TERAA KHO GAYAA CHAAND JAANEY KAHAAN,
                     KAHKASHAN AB TUJHKO MAHTAAB SAMAJHTEY HAIN ZAALIM,


                     KHOOB LOOT TAA HAI APNI WAFAA SEY TU ISS JAHAAN KO,
                     KI SAAREY FIDAA HAIN TERI DAGABAAZI PER ZAALIM,

           
                     SAJTI HAI MEHFIL TERI TAARIKION MAIN KHAMOSH,
                     ROSHNI KI TALAB NAHIN HAI JAB TAK TERAA WAJOOD ZAALIM....!!!

                 
bahut khub likha h apne khamosh ji                     
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2009, 01:33:55 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob KA ji Nice Ghazal  Thumbs UP


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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2009, 01:34:35 PM »
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Wah Khamosh ji really touching n beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation,excellent


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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2009, 01:35:13 PM »
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very very very nice
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2009, 01:35:55 PM »
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Nice one Khamosh Ji


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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2009, 01:37:09 PM »
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KYAA KHOOB KAHAA AAPNEY RISHI
                     HUAA ZAKHMI YEH DIL TERI ADAA SEY ZAALIM,
                     HUAA QATL YEH JAAN TERI NIGAAH SEY ZAALIM,

                 
                     AATI HAI BAHAAR NIKALTAA HAI JAB BHI TU GHAR SEY,
                     KHILTAA HAI CHAMAN BHI TEREY TUFAIL MAIN ZAALIM,

                 
                     ASAR ITNAA HAI TERAA KHO GAYAA CHAAND JAANEY KAHAAN,
                     KAHKASHAN AB TUJHKO MAHTAAB SAMAJHTEY HAIN ZAALIM,


                     KHOOB LOOT TAA HAI APNI WAFAA SEY TU ISS JAHAAN KO,
                     KI SAAREY FIDAA HAIN TERI DAGABAAZI PER ZAALIM,

           
                     SAJTI HAI MEHFIL TERI TAARIKION MAIN KHAMOSH,
                     ROSHNI KI TALAB NAHIN HAI JAB TAK TERAA WAJOOD ZAALIM....!!!

                 
bahut khub likha h apne khamosh ji                     
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2009, 03:40:04 PM »
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                     HUAA ZAKHMI YEH DIL TERI ADAA SEY ZAALIM,
                     HUAA QATL YEH JAAN TERI NIGAAH SEY ZAALIM,

                 
                     AATI HAI BAHAAR NIKALTAA HAI JAB BHI TU GHAR SEY,
                     KHILTAA HAI CHAMAN BHI TEREY TUFAIL MAIN ZAALIM,

                 
                     ASAR ITNAA HAI TERAA KHO GAYAA CHAAND JAANEY KAHAAN,
                     KAHKASHAN AB TUJHKO MAHTAAB SAMAJHTEY HAIN ZAALIM,


                     KHOOB LOOT TAA HAI APNI WAFAA SEY TU ISS JAHAAN KO,
                     KI SAAREY FIDAA HAIN TERI DAGABAAZI PER ZAALIM,

           
                     SAJTI HAI MEHFIL TERI TAARIKION MAIN KHAMOSH,
                     ROSHNI KI TALAB NAHIN HAI JAB TAK TERAA WAJOOD ZAALIM....!!!

                 
                     






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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2009, 11:40:04 AM »
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