Zindagi Bhar Woh Safar Karta Raha......

by khwaish on August 08, 2009, 04:16:51 AM
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«Reply #45 on: August 13, 2009, 04:56:11 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 13, 2009, 04:42:28 PM
Mujhe Umeed Bhi Hai Aur Yakeen Bhi Hai Ke Iss Topic Par Aap Bhi bahut Acha Likh sakte ho..Aapke Kalaam Ka intezaar Hoga..

Aur Teh Dil se Shukriya Aapka.. Usual Smile

Apki kavita parne ke baad yah gana man mai aa gaya.. abhi wo he post karne ja rahi hu... Kalam aor dil ne sath diya to khud kuch likhne ki koshish jaroor hogi..

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

dil mein yaadon ke nashtar se toota kiye
ek tamanna kaleja masalti rahi
chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

badnaseebi sharaafat ki dushman bani
saj sanwarke bhi dulhan na dulhan bani
teeka maathe pe ek daag banta gaya
mehendi haathon se shole ugalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

khwaab palkon se gir kar fanaah ho gaye
do qadam chal ke tum bhi juda ho gaye
meri haari thaki aankh se raat din
ek nadi aansuon ki ubalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

subah maangi toh gham ka andhera mila
mujhko rota sisakta savera mila
main ujaalon ki nakaam hasrat liye
umr bhar mom ban kar pighalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

chand yaadon ki parcchaiyon ke siwa
kucch bhi paaya na tanhaiyon ke siwa
waqt meri tabaahi pe hansta raha
rang taqdeer kya kya badalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

dil mein yaadon ke nashtar se toota kiye
ek tamanna kaleja masalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi (nm)
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«Reply #46 on: August 13, 2009, 05:00:32 PM »
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Quote from: Shayara on August 09, 2009, 08:12:56 AM

Zindgi ki sachchai ko ayaan karti hai aapkii ye ghazal.

Bohot Khoob Khwaish Ji

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Shayara Ji..
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«Reply #47 on: August 13, 2009, 05:04:02 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 09, 2009, 08:34:08 AM
Buland hosla or pukhta irade ki baat hai, bohot khoob khwaish ji, or digar ahbaab ne bhi achhe kalaam pesh kiye..

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Randeri Ji..

Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko Apna Waqt Diya..Aapka Teh dil se Shukriya.. Usual Smile

Aap bhi kuch likhte to Chaar Chaand Lag Jaate..
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«Reply #48 on: August 13, 2009, 05:11:07 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on August 13, 2009, 04:45:52 PM
lajwaab celmira ji......bahut khub likha aapne Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Pooja dear
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«Reply #49 on: August 13, 2009, 06:46:44 PM »
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wah wah wah bahut bahut bahut hi khoob Pooja ji.. wah


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«Reply #50 on: August 14, 2009, 05:56:43 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 10, 2009, 11:04:50 AM

Waah waah bohot hi khoob Khwaish Dost  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Humesha ki tarah kuch sochne ko majboor kar dene waali shayari....Bohot bohot khoob Dost.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat Dost!!!

Aapke Comments Ka Intezaar Saa Tha..Bas,Ek Koshish Thi ke Zindagi se Juudi Kuch Baatein ke Sakoon..Aapne Iss Kalaam Ko padha Aur Saraha,Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #51 on: August 14, 2009, 07:05:40 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 10, 2009, 11:37:48 AM

Jo Aankhon Main Apni, Khwaab Basa Ke Chalte Hain,
Raah Ki Dushwariyon Se Na Qadam Unke Thakte Hain

Hauslon Ka Sahara Hota Hain Jin Ke Paas, Ae Dost,
Raah Ke Pathar Bhi Unke Raaste Se Hat Te Hain

Aadmi Aur Insaan Ka Farq Jin Ko Mil Jaaye,
Wahi Insaaniyat Kar Parcham Buland Karte Hain

Zindagi Ki Unchh Neech Se Ho Jaate Hain Jo Wakhif,
Wo Kahan Phir Kisi Gehraayi Se Dara Karte Hain !!

Jitni tareef Karoon,Kam Hi Hogi talat Dost!!!

Bahut bahut Bahut Khoob Dost..Bahut Hi Gehre Aur Ispire karne wale Ashaar Hai yeh..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch Hi der Mein,Main Yahan Par Kuch likhne Ki Koshish Zaroor Karunga.

Thankyou Dost!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #52 on: August 14, 2009, 07:16:42 AM »
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first ofirst of all thanks from my side for ur beautiful reply ..and ur poem is also awsome dear.... sunny sunny sunny sunny shine as future poet....
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«Reply #53 on: October 03, 2009, 05:53:09 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on August 12, 2009, 07:16:15 AM
Wah Bahut Khoob, Har baar ki tarah ek aalag hi topic, aur insaan ko aage bhadne ka kitna pyaara kalam diya hai..really a gud work u done..

Shally.

Bahut bahut Shukriya Shally!!!

 Par Aapki Kalam Ko bhi Yahan Par Chalna Chaahiye... Usual Smile
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«Reply #54 on: January 29, 2010, 08:59:29 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on August 13, 2009, 03:57:41 PM
bahut khub likha hai aapne khwaish ji......zindagi k safar ko bahut khoob byaan kiya hai aapne.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Seedhi raah use munaasib nahi thi
Tedhi raah par hi chalna tha use...
Chal k giraa,gir-gir k sambhla....
Khuch iss tarah se wo har pag bharta rha..

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja,Aapne Apna Waqt Diya,Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka..

Aur Aapne Bhi Acha Likha.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #55 on: April 06, 2010, 11:35:00 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 04:39:09 PM
is thread per ajj najar parri... wah ek se bad kar ek sabhi ne kamaal ka likha hua hai... Good work yo-team..

Khwaish ji apki yah lines behad pasand aai:

Khud Ki Khaamiyon Ko Nazar-Andaaz Karne Wala!!!
Auron Ko Hi Kyon Humesha Parakhtha Raha.....

Uske Jeene Ka Andaaz Hi Kuch Yuh Hai!!!
Zindagi ko Jeene Ki Koshish Mein Pal-Pal Woh Marta Raha....

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooooo Much Pooja.. icon_flower
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«Reply #56 on: August 08, 2010, 11:41:44 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 13, 2009, 04:56:11 PM
Apki kavita parne ke baad yah gana man mai aa gaya.. abhi wo he post karne ja rahi hu... Kalam aor dil ne sath diya to khud kuch likhne ki koshish jaroor hogi..

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

dil mein yaadon ke nashtar se toota kiye
ek tamanna kaleja masalti rahi
chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

badnaseebi sharaafat ki dushman bani
saj sanwarke bhi dulhan na dulhan bani
teeka maathe pe ek daag banta gaya
mehendi haathon se shole ugalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

khwaab palkon se gir kar fanaah ho gaye
do qadam chal ke tum bhi juda ho gaye
meri haari thaki aankh se raat din
ek nadi aansuon ki ubalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

subah maangi toh gham ka andhera mila
mujhko rota sisakta savera mila
main ujaalon ki nakaam hasrat liye
umr bhar mom ban kar pighalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

chand yaadon ki parcchaiyon ke siwa
kucch bhi paaya na tanhaiyon ke siwa
waqt meri tabaahi pe hansta raha
rang taqdeer kya kya badalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi

dil mein yaadon ke nashtar se toota kiye
ek tamanna kaleja masalti rahi

chaand apna safar khatm karta raha
shama jalti rahi raat dhalti rahi (nm)



Gaana To bahut Acha Share Kiya Hai Aapne Pooja Par Aapke Poetry Ka Abhi intezaar Hai.. icon_flower
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