Khoobsurat Ek Main Bhi, Safar Karta (Shihab)

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                         Khoobsurat  Ek  Main  Bhi  , Safar Karta
                         Sang Mere Kaash Woh Gar , Basar Karta.
                        

                         Chubne Na Deta Kante Uske Peron Men
                         Har  Qadam Pe Hazir Apna , Jigar Karta.
                          

                         Is Qadar Kar Deta Khudko Diwana Uska
                         Ki Wohi Aata Nazar , Rukh  Jidhar Karta.
                          

                         Mehak  Uthta  Mere Dil Ka  , Kona Kona
                         Muhabbat Bhari Gar Wo , Ik Nazar Karta
                        

                         Woh  Kabhi  Aata  Zara Si Dair  Mein To
                         Khud Ko Bada Hi Main , Be-Sabar Karta.
                          

                         Beshaq Na Karta Pyaar  Mujhey , Magar
                         Kaash Kabhi To Woh Uski , Qadar Karta.



 
                                             ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2011, 09:54:21 PM »
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Wow waise ishq mein bhi baddiya likhte ho aap Shihab ji,lovely n mindblowing creation.superb Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2011, 02:57:37 AM »
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Bahut Khoob , Sundar peshkash hai aap ki
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Manish Kumar Khedawat
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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2011, 09:25:02 AM »
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nic one shihab zi Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2011, 09:36:41 AM »
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kya khub likha shihab ji.. Bahut badhiya peshkash rahi aapki..

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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2011, 10:09:54 AM »
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                         Khoobsurat  Ek  Main  Bhi  , Safar Karta
                         Sang Mere Kaash Woh Gar , Basar Karta.
                         

                         Chubne Na Deta Kante Uske Peron Men
                         Har  Qadam Pe Hazir Apna , Jigar Karta.
                         

                         Is Qadar Kar Deta Khudko Diwana Uska
                         Ki Wohi Aata Nazar , Rukh  Jidhar Karta.
                           

                         Mehak  Uthta  Mere Dil Ka  , Kona Kona
                         Muhabbat Bhari Gar Wo , Ik Nazar Karta
                         

                         Woh  Kabhi  Aata  Zara Si Dair  Mein To
                         Khud Ko Bada Hi Main , Be-Sabar Karta.
                         

                         Beshaq Na Karta Pyaar  Mujhey , Magar
                         Kaash Kabhi To Woh Uski , Qadar Karta.



 
                                             ~Shihab~

Bhuat Badiya Peshkash Shihab ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2011, 05:22:03 AM »
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ohhoooo bhai ..itna sab karte aap uske liye ...sach me jaankar bhtttttttttt achcha laga...yunhi chahte rehna use...aur dua hai wo bhi aapko isi trah chahhe....ek behad pyaar bhari peshaksh...sirf pyaar pyaar aur bht sara pyaarrr dikah mujhe isme.....keep it up bro.....
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2011, 12:52:37 AM »
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Mohabbat Aur Dard Se Bhari Aapki Yeh Peshkash
Hume Behad Behad Aur Behad Pasand Aayi Shihab Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2011, 12:24:22 PM »
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                         Khoobsurat  Ek  Main  Bhi  , Safar Karta
                         Sang Mere Kaash Woh Gar , Basar Karta.
                         

                         Chubne Na Deta Kante Uske Peron Men
                         Har  Qadam Pe Hazir Apna , Jigar Karta.
                         

                         Is Qadar Kar Deta Khudko Diwana Uska
                         Ki Wohi Aata Nazar , Rukh  Jidhar Karta.
                           

                         Mehak  Uthta  Mere Dil Ka  , Kona Kona
                         Muhabbat Bhari Gar Wo , Ik Nazar Karta
                         

                         Woh  Kabhi  Aata  Zara Si Dair  Mein To
                         Khud Ko Bada Hi Main , Be-Sabar Karta.
                         

                         Beshaq Na Karta Pyaar  Mujhey , Magar
                         Kaash Kabhi To Woh Uski , Qadar Karta.



 
                                             ~Shihab~


ACHA KHYAAL HAI
 
Applause Applause Applause Applause .
ZARA DOOSREY SHER PE PHIR SE GHAUR KAR LEIN. SHAYAD JIGAR SE QADAM KO SAHARAA NAHIN MILTA HAI. BURI LAGI MERI BAAT TO DARGUZAR KARIYE GAA
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2011, 01:09:13 PM »
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Sabse Pahle To Bahut Shukariya Khamosh Ji
Ki Aap Yahan Aaye Aur Nazar E Karam Farmai
Aur Bua Lagne Waali Kay Baat Hai Isme Bhala
Aapne Apne Dil Ki Baat Rakhi Yeh Jankar Khushi Hui
Aur Waise Bhi Aap YehMere Fayde Ke Liye Hi To Keh Rahe Hain
Aur Janab Jigar Se Murad Meri Yahan Dilse Hai Aur Mera Yeh
Maan Na Hai Ki Dil Hi Ek Aisi Cheez Hai Jo Insan Se Jo Chahe
Karwa Sakta Hai Hausla Bhi Isme Hai Bujdili Bhi Khair Aap
Jauhri Hain Aapne Kaha Woh Sahi Hi Hoga Shayad...Maafi Chahta
Hun Yeh Meri Kam Ilmi Ki Wajah Se Hua Hai..Koshish Karunga Gar
Isse Sudhar Saka To...Aapka Tahe Dilse Mashkoor Hun Main Ki
Galtiya Hone K Bawajood Aapne Meri Nakaam Si Koshish Ko Is Qadar
Muhabbaton Se Nawaza Aur Apna Qimti Waqt Diya..Bahut Shukariya
Islha Ke Liye..Yun Hi Karam Banaaye Rakhiyega...

ALLAH Pak Aapko Chust, Mast Aur Swast Rakhe

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~


bahut bahut shukriya shihab sb izzat dene ke liye main is laayaq to nahin . ye sab ka mokhtaleef khyaal hota hai. main bhi aisi bahut atpata sa likh deta hoon ki logon ki ungliya uthi hain. kyon ki hum sab kabhi kabhi iss baat ko hazam nahin kar paatey ki falaan sher ki ye line ya wo line durust nahin hai. par ye likhne wale ki soach hoti hai wo kis maqsad se kisi lafz ko istemaal kiya hai. huzoor main to iss sher-o-shiri main bilkul hi bachcha hoon.
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2011, 02:16:50 PM »
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Haye..
Apki iss kalam ne Rahim ko loot liya Shihab bhai..
Main bata nahin sakta akhri shaer kitni gehrayi tak dil main jagah kargaya..
Waise hamesha apki kalamon ki main izzat karta hoon mager aj yeh izzat kayi
zada barr gayi..
 'Kash kabhi woh qadar karta'
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Aur bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut daad meri orre se..
Allah apko sada khush rakhe..

Maine iss kalam main, mohobat toh beshumar mehsoos ki mager dard us'se bhi zada..Jab koi dil se likhta hai aur dusra dil se parrta hai, toh alag hi ehsaas hota hai..
Tabhi mujhe yeh kalam bahaut pasand aya..
Aur dobara kahunga, especially akhri ashaar..
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Sada Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2011, 06:15:12 PM »
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kya baat hai sahihab ji...aap to chhaa gaye ji....sabne itna khuch keh diya k mai soch mein pad gayi k mai kya kahu iss rachna ki taarif mein....sab khuch smaya hai apki iss rachna mein...usse paane ki khwaish kahu ya na pa sakne ka dard...ya ek pal mein sab khuch milne ki khushi...shayad jin bhawnao k saath hum ye klaam padhege wahi rang ham paayege yha....best creation.....bahut bahut bahut bahut.......khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause..........
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2011, 11:55:45 AM »
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kya kahne shihab ji.....
Bht hi khoobsurat peshkash.....
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«Reply #13 on: October 31, 2011, 06:04:20 PM »
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                        Khoobsurat  Ek  Main  Bhi  , Safar Karta
                         Sang Mere Kaash Woh Gar , Basar Karta.  Applause Applause
                        

                         Chubne Na Deta Kante Uske Peron Men
                         Har  Qadam Pe Hazir Apna , Jigar Karta.  Applause Applause Applause Applause
                          

                         Is Qadar Kar Deta Khudko Diwana Uska
                         Ki Wohi Aata Nazar , Rukh  Jidhar Karta.  Applause Applause Applause
                          

                         Mehak  Uthta  Mere Dil Ka  , Kona Kona
                         Muhabbat Bhari Gar Wo , Ik Nazar Karta Applause Applause Applause
                        

                         Woh  Kabhi  Aata  Zara Si Dair  Mein To
                         Khud Ko Bada Hi Main , Be-Sabar Karta.  Applause Applause Applause
                          

                         Beshaq Na Karta Pyaar  Mujhey , Magar
                         Kaash Kabhi To Woh Uski , Qadar Karta.



 
                                             ~Shihab~
Vaah Vaah Shihab sahab
Chote (lekin gahre) chote ehsaaso ko bahut hi khoobsurat lafjo me pesh kiya hai apne. dil khush ho gaya.
Minblowing gajal Sir.
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«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2011, 07:03:48 AM »
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