कुछ न पूछूँ, न कुछ कहूँ उससे.......सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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कुछ न पूछूँ न कुछ कहूँ उससे
रंजो-ग़म सारे बाँट लूँ उससे

बाद मुद्दत के जब मिलूँ उससे
कोई अच्छी ग़ज़ल सुनू उससे

जब वो बाहों में मेरी आ जाए
इक सबक प्यार का पढ़ूँ उससे

जो नहीं ऐतबार के क़ाबिल
दूर ही दूर मैं रहूँ उससे

जिसके एहसान में दबा हूँ मैं
किस तरह से भला लडूँ उससे

'ले तेरे पास आज आ ही गया'
जोशे-उल्फत में ये कहूँ उससे

हमक़दम दोस्त है, 'रक़ीब' नहीं
फ़ासला रख के क्यों चलूँ उससे
                
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«Reply #1 on: September 30, 2011, 01:18:46 PM »
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Raqeeb saheb,khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai.Maqta to bahut hi khoob hai.Muarak ho.
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2011, 02:34:41 PM »
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बहुत उम्दा अशआर हैं भाई मेरी दिली मुबारकबाद क़बूल करें

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2011, 03:24:31 PM »
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Satish ji,Bahut achhe ashaar kahe hain.Khaas taur se 4th sher aur maqta bahut pasand aaye.Daad qubool karein.HASAN
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2011, 04:32:42 AM »
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Qais Ji,

Hausala aafzai ka
bahut bahut shukriya...

Raqeeb
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2011, 08:24:39 AM »
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कुछ न पूछूँ न कुछ कहूँ उससे
रंजो-ग़म सारे बाँट लूँ उससे

बाद मुद्दत के जब मिलूँ उससे
कोई अच्छी ग़ज़ल सुनू उससे

जब वो बाहों में मेरी आ जाए
इक सबक प्यार का पढ़ूँ उससे

जो नहीं ऐतबार के क़ाबिल
दूर ही दूर मैं रहूँ उससे

जिसके एहसान में दबा हूँ मैं
किस तरह से भला लडूँ उससे

'ले तेरे पास आज आ ही गया'
जोशे-उल्फत में ये कहूँ उससे

हमक़दम दोस्त है, 'रक़ीब' नहीं
फ़ासला रख के क्यों चलूँ उससे
               
     --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'




jiske ehsaan mein daba hoon main,
kis tarah se bhalaa ladoon usse



bahut khoob satish ji

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2011, 09:16:50 AM »
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sksaini4 ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Aapki tabeeyat ab kaisi hai?

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2011, 12:51:03 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allaah janab waah kia umdaa gazal kahi hai aapne...
Waah janab wah Dil khush kar diyaa aapki is umda gazal ne..

Behad our asar pur lutf aur pur asar khayaaloN se saji aapki
yeH gazal Masha Allaah bahut umdaa rahi...

Dil ki gehraai se hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #8 on: October 01, 2011, 03:41:51 PM »
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 Applause

कुछ न पूछूँ न कुछ कहूँ उससे
रंजो-ग़म सारे बाँट लूँ उससे

बाद मुद्दत के जब मिलूँ उससे
कोई अच्छी ग़ज़ल सुनू उससे

जब वो बाहों में मेरी आ जाए
इक सबक प्यार का पढ़ूँ उससे

जो नहीं ऐतबार के क़ाबिल
दूर ही दूर मैं रहूँ उससे

जिसके एहसान में दबा हूँ मैं
किस तरह से भला लडूँ उससे

'ले तेरे पास आज आ ही गया'
जोशे-उल्फत में ये कहूँ उससे

हमक़दम दोस्त है, 'रक़ीब' नहीं
फ़ासला रख के क्यों चलूँ उससे
               
     --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'



Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2011, 04:40:10 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2011, 08:41:26 AM »
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Sheba Ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2011, 08:57:54 AM »
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Satish Ji Bahut Ache Ashaar  Bahut Khoob Applause Applause Applause
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ParwaaZ Ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Behetreen comments hote hain aapke.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2011, 05:40:41 AM »
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usha rajesh ji,

Jawab dene aur hausala aafzai
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #14 on: October 09, 2011, 04:42:21 AM »
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Sanjeev Ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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