गुलाब/Gulaab.............................................SAINI

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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2012, 04:05:46 PM »
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Waah waah bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai Saini jee, maza aa gaya padh kar. Ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #16 on: July 24, 2012, 04:20:09 PM »
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Haath  rachwaa  kar  hinaa  se jab dikhaaye the mujhe.
Mujhko  din  meN  tab  nazar  aaye  the do-do aaftaab.

kya khoobsurati se likha hai aapne dr. jee. too good  icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #17 on: July 24, 2012, 08:19:48 PM »
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ख़ाब  में  भेजे  किसी ने टोकरी  भर के गुलाब |

देख  कर  मेरी तबीयत हो गयी  है  लाजवाब ||

 
जब तलक उनके तसव्वुर में न  बैठूँ  दो  घड़ी |

जाने क्यों लगने लगे  है हर तसव्वुर ही अज़ाब ||
 

देखते ही  देखते  मदहोश  हो  जाता   हूँ   मैं |

है  भरी नैनों में तेरे किस जहाँ  की  ये  शराब ||
 

हाथ रचवा कर हिना से जब   दिखाए   थे  मुझे |

मुझको दिन में तब नज़र आये थे दो-दो आफ़ताब ||
 

देख नाख़ूनों की  रंगत  छुप  गया झट से हिलाल |

ज़ुल्फ़ सरकाने लगे माथे  से  जब  अपने जनाब ||
 

आशिक़ों  में  दीद  की दीवानगी  को  देख  कर |

हट गयी चेहरे से ख़ुद ही शर्म  के  मारे निक़ाब ||
 

आदतन हालाकि मै को  वो   कभी  छूता  नहीं |

पर तेरी आँखों से पी जाता है ‘सैनी ’ बेहिसाब ||


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Khaab  meN  bheje  kisee  ne  tokree  bhar ke gulaab.
Dekh  kar  meree  tabeeyat  ho  gayee  hai  laajwaab.
 
Jab  talak  unke  tasavvur  meN n baithooN do ghadee.
Jaane  kyoN  lagne  lage  hai har tasavvur hee azaab.

Dekhte  hee  dekhte  madhosh  ho  jaataa  hooN  maiN.
Hai bharee nainoN meN tere kis jahaaN kee ye sharaab.

Haath  rachwaa  kar  hinaa  se jab dikhaaye the mujhe.
Mujhko  din  meN  tab  nazar  aaye  the do-do aaftaab.

Dekh naakhoonoN kee rangat chhup gayaa jhat se hilaal.
Zulf   sarkaane   lage  maathe  se  jab  apne  janaab.

AashiqoN   meN  deed  keee  deewaangee  ko   dekh kar.
Hat  gayee  chehre  se khud hee sharm ke maare niqaab.

Aadtan  haalaaki  mai  ko  vo  kabhee chhootaa naheeN.
Par  teree  aankhoN se pee jaataa hai ‘saini’behisaab.

Dr.Surendra Saini
 


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«Reply #25 on: July 25, 2012, 10:06:43 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 24, 2012, 06:58:19 AM
ख़ाब  में  भेजे  किसी ने टोकरी  भर के गुलाब |

देख  कर  मेरी तबीयत हो गयी  है  लाजवाब ||

 
जब तलक उनके तसव्वुर में न  बैठूँ  दो  घड़ी |

जाने क्यों लगने लगे  है हर तसव्वुर ही अज़ाब ||
 

देखते ही  देखते  मदहोश  हो  जाता   हूँ   मैं |

है  भरी नैनों में तेरे किस जहाँ  की  ये  शराब ||
 

हाथ रचवा कर हिना से जब   दिखाए   थे  मुझे |

मुझको दिन में तब नज़र आये थे दो-दो आफ़ताब ||
 

देख नाख़ूनों की  रंगत  छुप  गया झट से हिलाल |

ज़ुल्फ़ सरकाने लगे माथे  से  जब  अपने जनाब ||
 

आशिक़ों  में  दीद  की दीवानगी  को  देख  कर |

हट गयी चेहरे से ख़ुद ही शर्म  के  मारे निक़ाब ||
 

आदतन हालाकि मै को  वो   कभी  छूता  नहीं |

पर तेरी आँखों से पी जाता है ‘सैनी ’ बेहिसाब ||


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Khaab  meN  bheje  kisee  ne  tokree  bhar ke gulaab.
Dekh  kar  meree  tabeeyat  ho  gayee  hai  laajwaab.
 
Jab  talak  unke  tasavvur  meN n baithooN do ghadee.
Jaane  kyoN  lagne  lage  hai har tasavvur hee azaab.

Dekhte  hee  dekhte  madhosh  ho  jaataa  hooN  maiN.
Hai bharee nainoN meN tere kis jahaaN kee ye sharaab.

Haath  rachwaa  kar  hinaa  se jab dikhaaye the mujhe.
Mujhko  din  meN  tab  nazar  aaye  the do-do aaftaab.

Dekh naakhoonoN kee rangat chhup gayaa jhat se hilaal.
Zulf   sarkaane   lage  maathe  se  jab  apne  janaab.

AashiqoN   meN  deed  keee  deewaangee  ko   dekh kar.
Hat  gayee  chehre  se khud hee sharm ke maare niqaab.

Aadtan  haalaaki  mai  ko  vo  kabhee chhootaa naheeN.
Par  teree  aankhoN se pee jaataa hai ‘saini’behisaab.

Dr.Surendra Saini
 


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«Reply #29 on: July 26, 2012, 05:17:55 PM »
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KHAAB MEN JO AA GAYI TOKRI BHAR KE  GULAB
“saini ji “AAPNE BANA DEE  EK GAZAL LAJAWAB
SHARAM KE MARE HAT GAYI CHEHRE SE NIQAAB
BINA PIYE HI PEE GAYE ANKHON SE BEHISAB
HAM BHI KHO GAYE KHAYAALON MEN JANAJ
AUR DETE HAIN SAIN JI AAPKO DAD PE DAD BE-HISAAB
SATH  ARZ HAI KI KABOOL PHARMYEGA NACHEEZ bansi KA AADAB
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