चले आओ/chale aao.........................SAINI

by sksaini4 on February 15, 2012, 06:32:18 AM

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«Reply #15 on: February 17, 2012, 04:10:55 AM »

Usha ji bahut bahut shukriya


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Re: चले आओ/chale aao.........................SAINI

«Reply #16 on: February 17, 2012, 05:02:16 AM »

Saahil ji shukriya


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Re: चले आओ/chale aao.........................SAINI

«Reply #17 on: February 17, 2012, 05:35:59 AM »

Bahuut achi kaveeta likhi hai saini ji. Badhaai sweekar ho. Kinti ek baat samajh na aai ke niche likhe sher me 'tere' ke saath 'chale aao' kaise aa gaya. chala aa hona chahiye. kuchh spasht karen to kirpa hogi.
तेरे एहसास की गरमी की अब मुझको ज़रुरत है |
बढ़ी ठंडक हवाओं में चले आओ चले आओ ||


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Re: चले आओ/chale aao.........................SAINI

«Reply #18 on: February 17, 2012, 06:10:48 AM »

razu bhai
namaste;
aapne meree ek ghaltee kee taraf jo ishaaraa kiya hai uske liye main bahut aabhaaree hoon aap ek jaagrook insaan hain maine jeevan men ab tak jitnee bhee daad paayeen hai un sabke muqaable aapke is sawaal kaa paldaa bhaaree hai. maine sher ko badal diyaa hai kripyaa padh kar fir reply zaroor karen. aapkaa kotee kotee dhanyawaad