तुम भी तो कभी आजमाओ खुद को ..

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on August 27, 2013, 07:14:03 PM
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मुझसे कहते हो भूल जाओ मुझको ..
तुम भी तो कभी आजमाओ खुद को ..

खुद से ही न उठ जाए भरोसा मेरा ..
इतना भी न झूठा बनाओ मुझको ..

ख़ुशी बिगाड़ देती है आदत सबकी ..
गम ही बेहतर है कोई बताओ उन को ..

कर दी नीलामी हमने भी दिल की ..
आखिरी रात है दुल्हन सा सजाओ इस को ..

जड़ें सूखी है तभी पत्ते भी सूखे हैं ..
छत से पहले नीव तो बनाओ इस की ..

नया दिल टूट ही जता है अक्सर ..
"मुसाहिब " इतना न सताओ खुद को ..
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2013, 07:32:06 PM »
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वाह.....वाह....क्या बात है.....बहुत खूब.......ढेरों दाद........
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2013, 07:42:29 PM »
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अती सुंदर
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2013, 08:07:12 PM »
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मुझसे कहते हो भूल जाओ मुझको ..
तुम भी तो कभी आजमाओ खुद को ..

waaaaaaaaaah.......

खुद से ही न उठ जाए भरोसा मेरा ..
इतना भी न झूठा बनाओ मुझको ..

kya baat hai....

ख़ुशी बिगाड़ देती है आदत सबकी ..
गम ही बेहतर है कोई बताओ उन को ..

Bahut khooooob.....

कर दी नीलामी हमने भी दिल की ..
आखिरी रात है दुल्हन सा सजाओ इस को ..

is sher par ek rau....

जड़ें सूखी है तभी पत्ते भी सूखे हैं ..
छत से पहले नीव तो बनाओ इस की ..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

नया दिल टूट ही जता है अक्सर ..
"मुसाहिब " इतना न सताओ खुद को ..

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaaah bahut bahut khoob likhe ho musaahib ji...Is khoob kalam par hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2013, 08:34:57 PM »
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कर दी नीलामी हमने भी दिल की ..
आखिरी रात है दुल्हन सा सजाओ इस को .

just excellent sir
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2013, 09:12:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2013, 02:38:09 AM »
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waah waah Musahib jee, bahut hi khoob, waise kaafi dinoN baad nazar aae haiN, aate rahiye.
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2013, 03:24:07 AM »
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वाह.....वाह....क्या बात है.....बहुत खूब.......ढेरों दाद........
Bahut Bahut Shukriya..
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2013, 03:26:04 AM »
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waah waah Musahib jee, bahut hi khoob, waise kaafi dinoN baad nazar aae haiN, aate rahiye.
Bahut bahut Shukriya Iftakhar Sahab...bas ulajh gaya tha kuch zindagi ki uljhano me...fir hazir hu janab aap sab ke sath ..
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2013, 03:26:55 AM »
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कर दी नीलामी हमने भी दिल की ..
आखिरी रात है दुल्हन सा सजाओ इस को .

just excellent sir

Thanks A Lot..
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2013, 03:27:41 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dhanyawaad Sir..
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2013, 03:34:01 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaaah bahut bahut khoob likhe ho musaahib ji...Is khoob kalam par hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaad...

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया जनाब ...
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2013, 03:39:11 AM »
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अती सुंदर

धन्यवाद सर ..
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2013, 10:04:32 AM »
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waah waah waah
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2013, 01:39:59 PM »
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waah waah waah

Thanks Sir...
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