दुश्मन बराबरी का न मिल पाएगा कोई....'परम'

by Anaarhi on July 30, 2013, 11:55:17 AM
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हर वक़्त हम को चाहिए इक रहनुमा कोई,
ख़ुद ही समझ में आएगा कब रास्ता कोई.

अपने ही दम पे आप सफीनः चलाइए,
होती नहीं जनाब मुआफिक हवा कोई.

मिट्टी को मेरी आँख ने मिट्टी ही कह दिया,
कुम्हार की नज़र ने कहा , है  घङा कोई.

पत्ता अगरचे उङने लगे आसमान में,
तो है हवा में,  इल्म न उसमें बढ़ा कोई.

ख़्वाबों में हैं सभी यहाँ आँखें खुली लिए,
क्यों मान लें कि दिन है, कहाँ है जगा कोई.

कर लो तमाम शह्र से ही दोस्ती "परम",
दुश्मन बराबरी का न मिल पाएगा कोई.

"परम"
३०/०७/२०१३

रहनुमा = पथ-प्रदर्शक
सफीनः = नाव,
मुआफिक = अनूकूल
कुम्हार = मिट्टी के बरतन बनाने वाला
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2013, 12:35:40 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2013, 12:50:00 PM »
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waah waah param ji... bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2013, 01:26:40 PM »
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bahut khoob.........
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2013, 02:09:19 PM »
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I salute your this nice ghazal God bless u dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2013, 02:25:42 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2013, 04:53:08 PM »
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हर वक़्त हम को चाहिए इक रहनुमा कोई,
ख़ुद ही समझ में आएगा कब रास्ता कोई.

अपने ही दम पे आप सफीनः चलाइए,
होती नहीं जनाब मुआफिक हवा कोई.

मिट्टी को मेरी आँख ने मिट्टी ही कह दिया,
कुम्हार की नज़र ने कहा , है  घङा कोई.

पत्ता अगरचे उङने लगे आसमान में,
तो है हवा में,  इल्म न उसमें बढ़ा कोई.

ख़्वाबों में हैं सभी यहाँ आँखें खुली लिए,
क्यों मान लें कि दिन है, कहाँ है जगा कोई.

कर लो तमाम शह्र से ही दोस्ती "परम",
दुश्मन बराबरी का न मिल पाएगा कोई.

"परम"
३०/०७/२०१३

रहनुमा = पथ-प्रदर्शक
सफीनः = नाव,
मुआफिक = अनूकूल
कुम्हार = मिट्टी के बरतन बनाने वाला

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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2013, 06:41:18 PM »
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बहुत बहुत खूब
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2013, 01:49:33 AM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Param jee, excellent, jitni taa'reef karuN kam hai. Poori ki poori ghazal shaandaar hai, mujhe behad pasand aai, bahut achha message diya hai, sirf 4th sher thoda samajh meiN nahiN aaya, maqte ka sher to zabardast hai, maza aa gaya. Meri taraf se dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye par Rau baad meiN de paauNga. YuN hi likhte rahiye aur bazm ko raushan karte rahiye.
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2013, 08:54:56 PM »
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Given the Rau.
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2013, 09:13:43 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2013, 09:14:45 PM »
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waah waah param ji... bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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Tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon Mohammad Tauhid Sahab
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2013, 09:15:23 PM »
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bahut khoob.........
Thanks Miru ji
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param saaheb ek behad umda ghazal pe meri taraaf se dilli daad qubool farmaayeN... aur maqte ka attitude to bas subhaan-aalah... maza hi aa gaya, likhte rahiye saaheb...
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«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2013, 09:47:23 PM »
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I salute your this nice ghazal God bless u dheron daad
Sir S K Saini ji,
Namaskaar,

Sir You are always there to encourage student like me. The way You appreciated this is much more than this work deserve.

I am thankful to you from the depth of my heart.

Regards
Paramjit



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