बनाते बनाते ही टूटा है शायद--'परम'

by Anaarhi on October 16, 2013, 01:16:28 PM
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बनाते बनाते ही टूटा है शायद,
ये आईना भी मेरे दिल सा है शायद.
banaate banate hi toota hai shayad,
ye aaeena bhi mere dil saa hai shayad.

लबालब तो अक्सर ही रहता था दरिया,
तेरे लम्स ने बाँध तोङा है शायद.  (लम्स - स्पर्श)
labaalab to aksar hi rehta tha dariya,
tere lams ne baanDh toDhaa hai shayad.

ज़माने ने घोली है लफ़्जों में स्याही,
दिखा कोइ मासूम चेहरा है शायद.  
zamaane ne gholi hai lafzoN mein syahi,
dikha koi maasoom chehra hai shayad.

नज़र भी न बदली न बदली ये दुनिया,
तो मेरा नज़रिया ही बदला है शायद.
nazar bhi n badli n badli ye dunya,
to mera nazariyaa hi badlaa hai shayad.

हुआ मन भी दीवार का सीला सीला,
पलस्तर का दिल भी उखङता है शायद.
huaa man bhi deewaar ka seela seelaa,
palastar ka dil bhi ukhaDhtaa hai shayad.

बदल डाला है उसने उनवाने हस्ती,
कि दुश्मन को वाचक बनाया है शायद.
badal daala hai usne unwaan e hasti,
ki dustman ko reader banaya hai shayad.

क़सम वक़्त बे वक़्त खाते हो अपनी,
"तुम्हें ज़िंदगी पर भरोसा है शायद."
qasam waqt be waqt khaate ho apni,
"tumhe zindgi par bharosaa hai shayad.

बशर के लहू में नमक ही नमक है,
ज़मी तेरा पानी ही ख़ारा है शायद.
bashar ke lahoo mein namak hi namak hai,
zamee tera paani hi khaara hai shayad.

'परम' लांघ भी ले कभी मेरी चौखट,
ये घर तेरे रस्ते में पङता है शायद.
'param' laanGh bhi le kabhi meri chaukhat,
ye ghar tere raste mein paDtaa hai shayad.

"परम" 15/10/2013

'परम' खुल सके शेर मुझ पर न तेरे,
यूँ आसां बहुत ही तू कहता है शायद.
'param' khul sake sher mujh par n tere,
yooN aasaaN bhut hee tu kehtaa hai shayad.
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«Reply #1 on: October 16, 2013, 01:58:56 PM »
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waah waah bahut hee khoob
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wha wha bhut khub
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वाह वाह क्या बात है.!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 16, 2013, 04:05:02 PM »
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क़सम वक़्त बे वक़्त खाते हो अपनी,
"तुम्हें ज़िंदगी पर भरोसा है शायद."
qasam waqt be waqt khaate ho apni,
"tumhe zindgi par bharosaa hai shayad.

बशर के लहू में नमक ही नमक है,
ज़मी तेरा पानी ही ख़ारा है शायद.
bashar ke lahoo mein namak hi namak hai,
zamee tera paani hi khaara hai shayad.
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wah wah waah param ji
क़सम वक़्त बे वक़्त खाते हो अपनी,
"तुम्हें ज़िंदगी पर भरोसा है शायद."
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waah waah waah bahut bahut khoob Param jee, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareN.
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2013, 06:39:26 PM »
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Param Jee Aadaab...!

Kia kahne janab waaH bahut khoob bade hi khoobsurat aur gehre ashaaroN bhari kalaam pesh ki hai aapne...

Amuman sabhi ashaar behad khoob lage hume... par in quoted ashaaroN ke kia kahne jee....

Waah in khoob ashaaroN par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN shirtak karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...


labaalab to aksar hi rehta tha dariya,
tere lams ne baanDh toDhaa hai shayad.

nazar bhi n badli n badli ye dunya,
to mera nazariyaa hi badlaa hai shayad.

bashar ke lahoo mein namak hi namak hai,
zamee tera paani hi khaara hai shayad.


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