मुझे अँधेरे में बेशक में बिठा दिया होता

by Ram Krishan Rastogi on September 26, 2015, 01:37:20 PM
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मुझे अँधेरे में बेशक बिठा दिया होता
अगर चराग की तरह जला दिया होता

न रौशनी कोई आती मेरे तसब्बुर में
जो अपने आप को मैने बुझा दिया होता

बहुत शहीद थे या रब मेरे बजूद के जख्म
मुझे सलीब पर दो पल सुला दिया होता  

हर गम जाहिर ना हॉता इन आंसुओ से
अगर इस पर कोई पर्दा गिरा दिया होता

ये शुक्र है मेरे पास तेरा गम तो रहा
वरना जिन्दगी भर को रुला दिया होता  
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2015, 06:23:45 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2015, 07:53:32 PM »
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Kya baat hai ..,....very nice
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2015, 08:54:18 PM »
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Ram Krishan jee atee khoobsurat likhaa hai aapne, dheron daad w/ RAU.
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2015, 08:52:23 AM »
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पूजा जी बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2015, 08:53:38 AM »
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शिखा जी बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2015, 08:55:40 AM »
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श्री सुरिन्द्रण जी राऊ देने के लिए बहुत शुक्रिया और दिल से कबूल किया
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2015, 09:56:51 AM »
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मुझे अँधेरे में बेशक बिठा दिया होता
अगर चराग की तरह जला दिया होता

न रौशनी कोई आती मेरे तसब्बुर में
जो अपने आप को मैने बुझा दिया होता

बहुत शहीद थे या रब मेरे बजूद के जख्म
मुझे सलीब पर दो पल सुला दिया होता 

हर गम जाहिर ना हॉता इन आंसुओ से
अगर इस पर कोई पर्दा गिरा दिया होता

ये शुक्र है मेरे पास तेरा गम तो रहा
वरना जिन्दगी भर को रुला दिया होता 



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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2015, 10:14:55 AM »
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जनाब,आदिल बेचैन जी ,बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2015, 10:59:45 AM »
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Shri jeet Jainam ji shukriya
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