रौशनी के सामने .

by yati_om on October 08, 2009, 10:01:00 AM
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दीपमाला सज  गयी हर देहरी  के  सामने.
अब अमावस क्या टिकेगी रौशनी के सामने .

मानता हूँ है बहुत काली,बहुत जिद्दी मगर
एक तीली  ही बहुत है  तीरगी के सामने.

चाहता है और ज्यादा ,और ज्यादा जोड़ना
लक्ष्य शायद अब यही है आदमी के सामने.

सब धुरंधर सर झुकाए हैं खड़े दरबार में
वक़्त ऐसा आ गया है द्रोपदी के सामने.

ध्यान फिर रखता नहीं है क्यूँ बुजुर्गों का कोई
जबकि आना है यही दिन हर किसी के सामने.

       ओमप्रकाश 'यती'
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2009, 11:13:13 AM »
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Yati ji aapke last line dil ko chu gayee .bahut achi soch hai,kamaal ke likha aapne.keep it up.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2009, 08:50:05 AM »
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madhuvesh ji,
        mera sher aapko achchha laga,dhanyavad.

                                         'yati'   
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2009, 04:37:47 PM »
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Nice Gazal Omprakash ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: October 10, 2009, 06:18:17 PM »
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Nice and excellent Omparkash ji Applause Applause Applause
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