... Faydo ...

by Just_Hate_Love on February 25, 2006, 11:09:59 AM

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Just_Hate_Love

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This is my first try in gujarati ...
I havent wrote before but when i saw this forum i couldnt stop myself ...
After all i am Gujarati ...
Hope you all will like it ...

Sawar vagar ni ek raat maangu chhu,
Sitara snehni varsaat maangu chhu,
Na hoy ant jeno pralay sudhi,
Bas evi ek mulaqat maangu chhu ...


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munnabhaiboleto

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Re: ... Faydo ...

«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2006, 01:21:35 PM »

Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

although i am not gujrati but this poem sounds kind of like hindi, very nice poem GOOD JOB!!!


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Pooja

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... Faydo ...

«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2006, 07:05:54 AM »

yah to meri samjh mai bhi aa gai....Apko mulkat jaldi naseeb ho, yah dua rahegi..


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Just_Hate_Love

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... Faydo ...

«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2006, 09:27:15 AM »

Thanks both of you very much for appreciating my work ...


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niraj_191

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... Faydo ...

«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2006, 08:20:15 AM »

Bahuj saras jhl,mane khub gamyu...
this is also my first try in gujrati..

dago dau tane evu maru kam nathi
pan maf karu tane evi haiya ma ham nathi
etlo salgyo chhu hu tara prem ma
ke have koi mane salgave evo koi dam nathi


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Just_Hate_Love

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... Faydo ...

«Reply #5 on: March 09, 2006, 03:12:14 PM »

Wah !!! Maja aavi gai Niraj ...
Bahut mast chhe ...


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mehulb

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Re: ... Faydo ...

«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2007, 10:11:50 AM »

have hu tane bhuli java mangu chu,
fari yaad naa aavish kyare evi dua mangu chu,
banavi rakhi che mara hraday maa ek kabra mein,
tari badhij yaado ne ema dafan kari nakhva mangu chu.[/quote]