वक़्त लगता है, हर मकान को घर होने तक !

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वक़्त लगता है, हर मकान को घर होने तक !
देखना है, कि, क्या हुआ है सहर होने तक !!

खूब ग़ालिब ने कहा था फ़िराक़ में तुझसे :
'कौन जीता है, तेरी ज़ुल्फ़ के सर होने तक' ?
 
सच है, मीठे फलों के वज़न से झुके हैं दरख़्त !
तिफ्ल-ए-बुलबुल को तो रुकना ही है पर होने तक !!

मैं पियूँगा, मगर, बस, इतना बता दे, साक़ी !    
मैं जियूं क्यों, तेरे उयूँ का असर होने तक ?

दौरे परवाज़ हूँ; क्या ये भी न देखूं, रहबर !
'रहेगी नीचे ज़मीं, पूरा सफर होने तक' ?

मुझे उमीद है, 'अबद', तुम्हारे नक़्शे क़दम,  
मिलेंगे मुझको रोज़, सामने दर होने तक ?
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2016, 05:22:48 PM »
वक़्त लगता है, हर मकान को घर होने तक !
देखना है, कि, क्या हुआ है सहर होने तक !!

खूब ग़ालिब ने कहा था फ़िराक़ में तुझसे :
'कौन जीता है, तेरी ज़ुल्फ़ के सर होने तक' ?
 
सच है, मीठे फलों के वज़न से झुके हैं दरख़्त !
तिफ्ल-ए-बुलबुल को तो रुकना ही है पर होने तक !!

मैं पियूँगा, मगर, बस, इतना बता दे, साक़ी !   
मैं जियूं क्यों, तेरे उयूँ का असर होने तक ?

दौरे परवाज़ हूँ; क्या ये भी न देखूं, रहबर !
'रहेगी नीचे ज़मीं, पूरा सफर होने तक' ?

मुझे उमीद है, 'अबद', तुम्हारे नक़्शे क़दम,   
मिलेंगे मुझको रोज़, सामने दर होने तक ?
- abd bundeli




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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2016, 07:50:09 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: June 05, 2016, 06:14:57 PM »
abd ji....... no words for such a wonderful creation .. its always apleasure to read ur works.... thanx for giving such wonderful poems..
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2016, 12:34:11 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2016, 06:18:06 PM »

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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2016, 06:19:23 PM »
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Sps ji!
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2016, 06:21:12 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2016, 06:22:10 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2016, 06:23:59 PM »
abd ji....... no words for such a wonderful creation .. its always apleasure to read ur works.... thanx for giving such wonderful poems..

That's your kindness!Thanks a lot!
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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2016, 06:25:27 PM »
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Jnyana91 ji!
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