बेटी की विदाई - ग़ज़ल

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नये रिस्तों से बंधन, कुछ बेगाने हो गये,
अनजाने अपने हुए, अपने अनजाने हो गये।

जिस आंगन को महसूस किया, अपनापन के भाव से,
नया किस्सा क्या मिला, सब फसाने हो गये।

एहतमाम जिन चीजों का किया, शिद्दत से अब तलक,
मेरे लिए वो ही सब, नजराने हो गये।

चेहरा देखूं मां का या भाई की देखूं शकल,
मेरे लिए आज सब क्यों मनमाने हो गये।

बाबूल कैसी ये रीत, बनाई तुमने 'अयुज'
कि सारे अपने ही पराये, क्यूँ न जाने हो गये।

                         
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2016, 08:47:30 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Bahut achhe bhaav hai...

Ghazal me meter, matra ya bahar hoti hai bas uska khayal rakhe...  Or maza aayega...
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2016, 12:54:55 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2016, 11:09:49 PM »
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bahut umdah ehsaas hai waah.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2016, 06:09:17 AM »
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नये रिस्तों से बंधन, कुछ बेगाने हो गये,
अनजाने अपने हुए, अपने अनजाने हो गये।

जिस आंगन को महसूस किया, अपनापन के भाव से,
नया किस्सा क्या मिला, सब फसाने हो गये।

एहतमाम जिन चीजों का किया, शिद्दत से अब तलक,
मेरे लिए वो ही सब, नजराने हो गये।

चेहरा देखूं मां का या भाई की देखूं शकल,
मेरे लिए आज सब क्यों मनमाने हो गये।

बाबूल कैसी ये रीत, बनाई तुमने 'अयुज'
कि सारे अपने ही पराये, क्यूँ न जाने हो गये।

                         


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