मुझ से बिछड़

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मुझ  से  बिछड़  कर , मुझ  को  रुला  कर  उदास  था
मेरी  तरह  वो  खुद  को  जला  कर  उदास  था
ऐसे  अजीब  दर्द  के  पहरे  थे  चार  सू
अब  के  वो  मेरे  शहर   में  आ  कर  उदास  था …
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2013, 04:08:14 AM »
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Quote from: ManishTiwari on July 24, 2013, 02:36:24 AM
मुझ  से  बिछड़  कर , मुझ  को  रुला  कर  उदास  था
मेरी  तरह  वो  खुद  को  जला  कर  उदास  था
ऐसे  अजीब  दर्द  के  पहरे  थे  चार  सू
अब  के  वो  मेरे  शहर   में  आ  कर  उदास  था …

naaaaaice-MT
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Waah Waah Kya Bat Hai
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2013, 05:10:25 AM »
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Quote from: ManishTiwari on July 24, 2013, 02:36:24 AM
मुझ  से  बिछड़  कर , मुझ  को  रुला  कर  उदास  था
मेरी  तरह  वो  खुद  को  जला  कर  उदास  था
ऐसे  अजीब  दर्द  के  पहरे  थे  चार  सू
अब  के  वो  मेरे  शहर   में  आ  कर  उदास  था …

very good,sir
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2013, 09:32:55 PM »
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thanks all frnz
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