मुझ से बिछड़

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मुझ  से  बिछड़  कर , मुझ  को  रुला  कर  उदास  था
मेरी  तरह  वो  खुद  को  जला  कर  उदास  था
ऐसे  अजीब  दर्द  के  पहरे  थे  चार  सू
अब  के  वो  मेरे  शहर   में  आ  कर  उदास  था …
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2013, 10:38:14 PM »
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मुझ  से  बिछड़  कर , मुझ  को  रुला  कर  उदास  था
मेरी  तरह  वो  खुद  को  जला  कर  उदास  था
ऐसे  अजीब  दर्द  के  पहरे  थे  चार  सू
अब  के  वो  मेरे  शहर   में  आ  कर  उदास  था …

naaaaaice-MT
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Waah Waah Kya Bat Hai
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2013, 11:40:25 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2013, 06:30:33 AM »
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Quote from: ManishTiwari on July 23, 2013, 09:06:24 PM
मुझ  से  बिछड़  कर , मुझ  को  रुला  कर  उदास  था
मेरी  तरह  वो  खुद  को  जला  कर  उदास  था
ऐसे  अजीब  दर्द  के  पहरे  थे  चार  सू
अब  के  वो  मेरे  शहर   में  आ  कर  उदास  था …

very good,sir
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thanks all frnz
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