A heart touching story...

by brokenbyluv on November 16, 2009, 02:20:15 AM
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One old man was sitting with his 25 years old son in the train.

Train is about to leave the station.

All passengers are settling down their seat.

As train started young man was filled with lot of joy and
curiosity.

 

He was sitting on the window side.

He went out one hand and feeling the passing air. He
shouted, "Papa see all trees are going behind".

 

Old man smile and admired son feelings.

Beside the young man one couple was sitting and listing all
the conversion between father and son.

 

They were little awkward with the attitude of 25
years old man behaving like a small child.

 

Suddenly young man again shouted, "Papa see the pond
and animals. Clouds are moving with train".

 

Couple was watching the young man in embarrassingly.

Now its start raining and some of water drops touches the
young man's hand.

 

He filled with joy and he closed the eyes.

He shouted again," Papa it's raining, water is
touching me, see papa".
 

Couple couldn't help themselves and ask the old man.

"Why don't you visit the Doctor and get treatment for your son."

Old man said,
 

" Yes, We are coming from the hospital as Today
only my son got his eye sight for first time in his life"......


NOT MINE...


 


Moral: "Don't draw conclusions until you know all the facts"......
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2009, 11:58:21 AM »
Really beatiful.. n heart touching! Hope on day we all will understand the feelings of unabled and start giving them support then hurting their feelings..
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2009, 03:25:26 PM »
Bahut Hi sweet story likhi hai thnx for sharing this story
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2009, 06:22:31 PM »

thnx alot ana ji n rishi ji for reading...rishi ji ye story maine nhi likhi hai..bus share ki hai...
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2009, 06:27:26 PM »
...nice sharing BBL...loved reading it...
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2009, 06:30:52 PM »

thnx alot jhl ji...
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«Reply #6 on: November 16, 2009, 06:41:21 PM »

thnx alot ana ji n rishi ji for reading...rishi ji ye story maine nhi likhi hai..bus share ki hai...

Geet JI I know very well tabhi to meine sharing likha tha
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«Reply #7 on: November 16, 2009, 06:49:54 PM »

ok ji...
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«Reply #8 on: November 16, 2009, 06:52:37 PM »
Ok frnd
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2009, 02:17:56 PM »
really heart touching....this story giving a lesson to all of us....
thanx for sharing bbl ji
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2009, 03:29:26 PM »

Geet-di very inspiring story...
Kaash hum is "moral of the story " ko jeevan mai uttar pate.....before taking any action sab angle se soch paate...
Yahi hai "ANEKAANWAAD KA SIDHANT" the very vital part of
Jain Darshan and Philosophy...propegated by Lord MAHAVEER The 24th thirthankar of jains....
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«Reply #11 on: November 17, 2009, 06:06:21 PM »
thnx nikhaar ji n koyal u both have said verry well... Applause Applause
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