A Love Story

by bobby.soni on November 20, 2004, 01:41:22 AM
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starts from here

it starts like this

10th class



As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl next to me. She

was my so called "best friend". I stared at her long, silky hair, and

wished she was mine. But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.

After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had
missed

the day before and handed them to her. She said "thanks" and gave me a

kiss on the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know that I don't


want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't
know

why.



11th class



The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was in tears,

mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart. She asked me
to

come over because she didn't want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next
to

her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine. After
2

hours, one Drew Barrymore movie, and three bags of chips, she decided to


go to sleep. She

looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to

tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I
love

her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.



Senior year



The day before prom she walked to my locker. "My date is sick" she

said; he's not going to go well, I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade,


we made a promise that if neither of us had dates, we would go together

just as "best friends". So we did. Prom night, after everything was
over,

I was standing at her front door step! I stared at her as she smiled at
me

and stared at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine, but she

isn't think of me like that, and I know it. Then she said "I had the
best

time, thanks!" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I
want

her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm
just

too shy, and I don't know why.



Graduation Day



A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I could blink, it was

graduation day. I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel up
on

stage to get her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't notice


me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone

went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as I hugged

her. Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said, "you're my best


friend, thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I

want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but
I'm

just too shy, and I don't know why.



A Few Years Later



Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is getting married now.

I watched her say "I do" and drive off to her new life, married to
another

man. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn`t see me like that, and I
knew

it. But before she drove away, she came to me and said "you came!". She

said "thanks" and kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her


to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just
too

shy, and I don't know why.



Funeral



Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my

"best friend". At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in

her high school years. This is what it read:

I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn't notice me like that,

and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don't want
to

be just friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.
I

wish he would tell me he loved me!

I wish I did too... I thought to my self, and I cried.







i love u

i love u

i love u

i love u

i love u

i love u

i love u

i love u

i love u



So do u believe in love or not, try to understand what others r trying to say

pls send this link to ur frens ....just to let them think whether they love someone or not




Forever urs

bobby
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2004, 05:51:55 AM »
wowowow!! beautifull and very touching!!!!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2004, 10:27:04 AM »
wow bobby
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2004, 11:20:46 AM »
yes its a very touching story! kabhi koi chance miss mat karo! kya pata kal ho na ho!

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bobby.soni
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2004, 02:39:05 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
yes its a very touching story! kabhi koi chance miss mat karo! kya pata kal ho na ho!

 Usual Smile



Yes meena i do agree with u, its very heart touching, and after that chance u will ever get that chance.

phir mile na mile woh pal " bobby"
apne pyaar ka iqraar kar aaj hi

woh hanseen lamhe ho na ho kal bhi
pal do pal ki zindagi guzar le aaj hi

bobby
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bobby.soni
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2004, 02:41:24 AM »
thanx meena, pooja and nishita for appreciating my article

i m thankful to all of u who appriciated, and gave me support


Shayad har kisi ki life mein kabhi na kabhi aisa lamha, aisa pal aata hai jab usee lagta hai ki woh kisi ko chahta hai. Tab us time hum yahi sochte hain ki shayad attraction hai par kabhi kabhi ye attraction hi pyaar ki pehli seedi hota hai.  

  At that point of time we dont understand what it is, is it attraction or it is love.

One thing i want to say this to all of u that we cant distinguish between these two simple words :- attraction and love .

But jo bhi ho agar lagta hai ki hum sahi hain  then we should say that

this topic and suggestions will never come to end so now i m finishing

bobby
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2004, 03:33:16 PM »
well said!

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bobby.soni
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«Reply #7 on: November 23, 2004, 09:36:51 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
well said!

 Usual Smile




but what i think is its not easy to judge whether other person loves u or not, or she / he just likes u.

And its also not possible to judge what true love is, and other person's love is true to u or not.
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immi
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«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2004, 09:42:13 PM »
Wow, very touchy .... Bobby!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: November 24, 2004, 05:11:07 PM »
Quote from: "bobby.soni"
Quote from: "Meena"
well said!

 Usual Smile




but what i think is its not easy to judge whether other person loves you or not, or she / he just likes you.

And its also not possible to judge what true love is, and other person's love is true to you or not.


definitly its not! but jab tak aab batayenge nahin samen wale ko yah usko yeh baat ka mehesoos nahin karwyenge ke what u fell for him/her to kaise chalega. baki haan-na me jawab dena samne wale ke haath me hota hai phir. aur if its really true or not is ur destiny.
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«Reply #10 on: November 24, 2004, 05:21:27 PM »
Lamhe MOVI mai ek jagah Anupam khair kahta hai: If you love someone, then just tell him/her. uske bad khud se yah shikayat nahi rahegi, ki kash maine kaha hota!!!!

So thumb rule: AGAR APP KISI KO PAYAR KARTY HAI, THEN DON'T HIDE, JUST GO AND TELL HIM/HER Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: November 24, 2004, 05:23:32 PM »
exactly pooja..!! bol do..saare raaz khol do... then atleast u wont feel tht u neva tried ..!! fir wo haan bol ena bole uski marzi..

After all u cant force neone to love u..!
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«Reply #12 on: November 24, 2004, 05:30:54 PM »
yeh pooja and nishita wohi to maien bhi kaha
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«Reply #13 on: November 29, 2004, 06:42:25 AM »
It was cool by everyone.
And specially Bobby.
Thts 4 u all.

Perfect love is not phone calls and stolen kisses,
its the silent smiles in memory of your sweetheart.
Perfect love is not a grand wedding but,
spending a lifetime together.
Perfect love is not fight-kiss & make-up,
its loving the one who annoys the hell out of you.
So now tell do you love someone perfectly?


Reply soon.......
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«Reply #14 on: November 29, 2004, 04:01:09 PM »
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