A Touching Love Story.............Rishi

by Rishi Agarwal on October 28, 2009, 09:02:46 PM
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10th Grade:-

       As I sat there in English class,
       I stared at the girl next to me.
       She was my so called 'best friend'.
       I stared at her long, silky hair,
       and wished she was mine.
       But she didn't notice me like that,
       and I knew it. After class,
       she walked up to me and asked me for
       the notes she had missed the day before.
       I handed them to her.She said 'thanks'
       and gave me a kiss on the cheek.




      I want to tell her, I want her to know
       that I don't want to be just friends,
       I love her but I'm just too shy,
       and I don't know why.


11th grade:-


        The phone rang. On the other end,




        it was her. She was in tears,;     
        mumbling on and on about how
        her love had broke her heart.
        She asked me to come over
        because she didn't want to be alone, So I did.
        As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her
        soft eyes, wishing she was mine.
        After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie,
        and three bags of chips,
        she decided to go home.
        She looked at me, said 'thanks'
        and gave me a kiss
        on the cheek..I want to tell her,
        I want her to know that
        I don't want to be just friends,
        I love her but I'm just too shy,
        and I don't know why.


Senior year:-

        One fine day she walked to my locker.
        'My date is sick' she said,
        'hes not gonna go' well,
        I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade,
        we made a promise that
        if neither of us had dates,
        we would go together just as 'best friends'.
        So we did.
        That night, after everything was over,
        I was standing at her front door step.
        I stared at her as She smiled at me
        and stared at me with her crystal eyes.
        Then she said- 'I had the best time, thanks!'



       
        and gave me a kiss on the cheek.;     
        I want to tell her,
        I want her to know
        that I don't want to be just friends,
        I love her but I'm just too shy,
        and I don't know why.



Graduation:-

        A day passed, then a week, then a month.
        Before I could blink, it was graduation day.
        I watched as her perfect body
        floated like an angel



 
        up on stage to get her diploma.
        I wanted her to be mine-but
        she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it.
        Before everyone went home,
        she came to me in her smock and hat,
        and cried as I hugged her.
        Then she lifted her head from my shoulder
        and said- 'you're my best friend,
        thanks' and gave me a kiss on the cheek.
        I want to tell her,
        I want her to know
        that I don't want to be just friends,
        I love her but I'm just too shy,
        and I don't know why.


Marriage:-

        Now I sit in the pews of the church.
        That girl is getting married now.
        and drive off to her new life,
        married to another man.



 
        I wanted her to be mine,
        but she didn't see me like that,
        and I knew it.
        But before she drove away,
        she came to me and said 'you came !'.
        She said 'thanks' and kissed me on the cheek.
        I want to tell her,
        I want her to know
        that I don't want to be just friends,
        I love her but I'm just too shy,
        and I don't know why.



Death:-


        Years passed, I looked down at the coffin
        of a girl who used to be my 'best friend'.
        At the service, they read a diary entry
        she had wrote in her high school years.
        This is what it read:
        'I stare at him wishing he was mine,
        but he doesn't notice me like that,
        and I know it.
        I want to tell him,
        I want him to know that
        I don't want to be just friends,
        I love him but I'm just too shy,
        and I don't know why.
        I wish he would tell me he loved me !
        .........'I wish I did too...'


        I thought to my self, and I cried.

        HOPE ALL THE LOVERS WILL LEARN A LESSON FROM THIS STORY...


 
Rishi Agarwal
 

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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2009, 02:38:48 PM »
very touching and beautiful story.thanx for sharing Rishi ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2009, 10:49:29 AM »
very touching and beautiful story.thanx for sharing Rishi ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thnx Madhu Ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2009, 10:57:10 AM »
bohot hi piyaari story hai rishi ji
thanx 4 sharing
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2009, 11:18:07 AM »
bohot hi piyaari story hai rishi ji
thanx 4 sharing

Thnx Ehsaas JI
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2009, 05:52:31 PM »
its really very nice & hrt touching story...!!!!  Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2009, 06:24:19 PM »
its really very nice & hrt touching story...!!!!  Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause


Thnx Palakh JI
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2009, 11:30:45 AM »
SPEECH LESS !!!!

NO MORE WORDS TO PEN ....

REGARDS,
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2009, 02:47:07 PM »
SPEECH LESS !!!!

NO MORE WORDS TO PEN ....


Thnx Jo apka ye story bahut acchi lagi
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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2009, 03:55:33 PM »
Very good one indeed Rishi Ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 05, 2009, 03:58:31 PM »
Very good one indeed Rishi Ji

Thnx Rajesh Ji
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