FEAR - A DISLOYAL LOVE

by asif biswas on September 01, 2010, 08:38:51 AM
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KAHANI TO AAPNE BAHOOT SI PADHI HOGI LEKIN KABHI YE NAHI PADHA HOGA KI AGAR AAP KISI SE BEWAFAAI KARE TO USKA ANJAM KYA HOGA KYA BITEGI USPAR JISKO AAPNE DHOKHA DIYA YA FHIR KYA HOGA AAPKA KABHI SOCHA HAI TO SUNIYE EK AISI KAHANI JO HAI KISI KO DHOKA DENE KA ANJAAM .

EK SUNSAAN RAAT CHARO TARAF JUNGLE HI JUNGLE AADHI RAAT KA SAMAY AUR BAHOOT HI KHATARNAK AUR SUNSAAN JAGAH HAWAO KI GATI AISI LAG RAHI HAI KI SAB KO UDHA LE JAAYEGI KUCH BOLNA CHAHTI HAI KISI HAADSE KE BAARE MEIN TABHI SANNATE KO CHIRTI HUYI EK CAR GUZAR RAHI HOTI HAI CAR MEIN BAITHA EK LADKA HAI JO APNE MEIN HI GUM HAI AUR APNE DOST SE BAAT KAR RAHA HAI LADKA KEH RAHA HAI ARE YAAR TUNE TO KAHA THA KI ISS SADAK SE MAT JAA DEKH MAIN TO YAHA SE GUJAR RAHA HOO  MUJHE TO KOI DAR NAHI LAG RAHA UDHAR PHONE PAR SUN MAINE TUJHE KAHA THA NA KI US RAASTE SE MAT JAA TO PHIR TU JAA KYUN RAHA HAI TERA DIMAG KHARAB HO GAYA KYA CAR MEIN BAITHE LADKE NE KAHA DEKH YAAR TUNE JAISE KAHA THA KI ISS JAGAH KE BAARE MEIN MUJHE AISA KOI PRET SHAITAN KUCH NAHI DIKH RAHA TERI WO PRET AATMAO WALI KAHANI JHOOTI LEKIN YAAR MAINE TO BAHOOT LOGO SE SUNA HAI US JAGAH KE BAARE MEIN KI WAHA KISI AURAT KA SAAYA BHATAK TA HAI PHONE MEIN USKE DOST NE KAHA CAR WALE LADKE NE BOLA DEKH AISA KUCH NAHI HAI IT’S JUST A FAKE STORY MAN TABHI CAR MEIN BAITHE LADKE NE KAHA YAAR TUJHE BAAD MEIN CALL KARTA HOO AUR PHONE DISCONNECT KAR DIYA TABHI USE EK LADKI DIKHAYI DI  TO LADKE NE SOCHA KAHI SANJAY SACH TO NAHI BOL RAHA THA NAHI NAHI SHAYAD KOI FASS GAYI HOGI ISS SUNSAN RAASTE MEIN AUR SOCHNE LAGA AREE WAHA ITNI RAAT GAYE AUR WAAH THANK YOU BHOOT TUMHARE DARR KE KAARAN YAHA KOI AATA JAATA NAHI  AB TO MERA JUGAD HO GAYA AUR USNE GAADI ROKI AUR USE KAHA AAPKO KAHI JAANA HAI TO USE REHSMAYI AURAT NE KAHA HOO WAHA US GHATI KE PAAS US LADKE NE KAHA AISI SUNSAAN JAGAH HAI PAR AAPKA GHAR HAI TO US AURAT NE KAHA HAA MUJHE AISI JAGAH PASAND HAI FHIR US LAKDE NE US AURAT KO GAADI MEIN BITHAYA AUR LADKE NE USSE POOCHA KI AAP KA NAAM KYA HAI AUR AAP AISI JAGAH MEIN KAB SE REH RAHI HAI TO US AURAT NE KAHA MERA NAAM ROSEY HAI AUR MAIN YAHA BAHOOT SAALO SE REH RAHI HOO LAKDE KO THODA AJIB SA LAGA KI WO LADKI BAHOOT ATAK ATAK KE BOL RAHI THI LADKE NE POOCHA KI AAP MUJHE INDIA KI TOH NAHI LAG TI I MEAN AAP FOREIGHNER HAI US AURAT NE KAHA HAA MAIN 30 SAAL PEHLE YAHA AAYI THI  JAGAH NA MILNE PAR MAIN AISI JAGAH MEIN REHNE LAGI  LAKDE NE KAHA OH HO CHALIYE KOI TO YAHA KI JAGAH PE WISHWAS KARTA HAI KI ISSS JAGAH MEIN AISA KUCH NAHI HAI ROSEY NE KAHA WHAT DO YOU MEAN? LADKE NE KAHA ARRE AP KO NAHI PATA MERA DOST INFACT SHEHRO KE BHI LOG KEHTE HAI KI ISS JAGAH PAR KISI PRET KA SAAYA MANDRATA HAI AURAT BAHOOT DER TAK CHUP RAHI FHIR USNE KAHA HMM SAHI KAHA UN LOGO NE YAHA US PRET KA SAAYA HAI LAKDE NE POOCHA KISKA SAAYA MATLAB AURAT NE KAHA BAHOOT SAAL PEHLE KI BAAT HAI LEKIN LADKE NE BICH MEIN BAAT KAAT KAR KAHA DEKHIYE MAIN IN SAB PE WISHWAS NAHI KARTA AUR HASKAR KAHA KI AAP AKELI REHTI HAI YAA KOI AAPKE SAATH HAI AURAT NE KAHA HAI NA YE KHOOBSURAT WAADIYA LADKE NE KAHA YE HORRIFIC JAGAH YAHA TOH MAIN EK SECOND BHI NAHI REH PAOONGA AISI AJIB JAGAH MEIN TO SIRF JAANVAR HI REH SAKTE HAI AURAT KO GUSSA AA GAYA ACCHA AAP BILKUL AATMAO SE NAHI DARTE LADKE NE KAHA NAHI ROSEY NE KAHA AAP NE KABHI PYAR KIYA HAI LADKE NE KAHA HAA MERI KAAFI GIRLFRIENDS REH CHUKI HAI PAR U KNOW MAIN TO BAS APNA KAAM NIKALTA HOO AURAT NE KAHA ACCHA TAB TO AAP KO PATA HI HOGA KI PYAR MEIN KABHI APNA FAAYEDA NAHI DEKHNA CHAHIYE LADKIYO PE BBURI NAZAR DEKHNA GALAT HI HOTA HAI LADKE NE KAHA OH CMON MAIN NAHI MAANTA YE SAB BEKAAR HAI AURAT NE KAHA AGAR MAAN LIJIYE KI JIS PRET KE BAARE MEIN AAPKA DOST KEH RAHATHA AGAR WO AAPKE SAAMNE AA JAAYE TO LADKE NE KAHA MAIN TAB BHI NAHI DAROONGA AUR HASTE HUYE GAADI CHALANE LAGA TABHI USE GAADI KE ANDAR LAGE SHISHE MEIN US LADKI KA FACE NAHI DIKHA TO LAKDE NE GHABRATE HUYE AURAT KO DEKHA  TO AURAT NE KAHA KYA HUA AAP TO DARTE NAHI HO LEKIN AB DAROGE AUR MAROGE AUR LADKE KE EK CHIKH KE SAATH GAADI SIDHE GHATI KE PAHAD SE GIR GAYI AUR EK AWAJ GUNJI AR FHIR SAB PEHLE KI TARAH SHAANT HO GAYA SHEHER MEIN EK NAYA ACP AAYA NAAM THA USKA KASHIF USE COMMISSIONER NE APPOINT KIYA AUR KAHA SO ACP KASHIF TUM SS ALIGARH ME NAYE HO SOAAJ SE HI CASE START KAR DO KASHIF NE SALUTE KARKE KAHA YES SIR AUR APNI KURSI PE BAITHA TABHI APNE HAVALDAR KO KAHA KYUN RAMU AAJ KOI PEHLA CASE NAHI AAYA RAMU NE KAHA SAAHAB KAB KYA HOTA HAI KISI KO PATA HI NAHI CHALTA TABHI EK LADKA BHAGTE HUYE POLICE STATION MEIN AAYA AUR KAHA SIR MERA EK DOST KAL RAAT SE GAAYAB HAI KASHIF NE KAHA TUMHARA NAAM KYA HAI USNE BOLA SANJAY SIR MERA DOST KAL SHEHER SE BAHAR JAA RAHA THA MAINE USE MANA KIYA KI TU US KOLA GHADI SE MAT JAA PAR USNE MERI BAAT NAHI MAANI AUR THODE DER BAAD USNE APNA MOBILE SWITCH OFF KAR DIYA KASHIF NE KAHA HO SAKTA HAI KI WO ABHI RAASTE MEIN HO TO SANJAY NE KAHA SIR AAP NAHI JAANTE US JAGAH SE GUJRA WO NAHI BACHA KASHIF NE KAHA WHAT NONSENSE AAKHIR US JAGAH MEIN AISA KYA HAI TO SANJAY NE KAHA SIR WAHA EK PRET KA SAAYA HAI JO HAR KISI KO RAAT KE SAMAY US JAGAH PE HO USSE MAAR DETI HAI RAMU NE KAHA SIR YE SACH KEH RAHA HAI WAHA JO BHI GAYA WAAPAS NAHI LAUTA RAAT KE SAMAY SIR AAP ISS SHEHER MEIN NAYE HAI PAR YAHA KE NIVAASI KYA BADE SE BADA BUSINESSMAN BHI USS JAGAH SE GUJARNE KE LIYE DARTA HAI WAHA BAHOOT HAADSE HO CHUKE HAI KOI NAHI BACHA KASHIF NE SOCHTE HUYE KAHA CHALO AB ISS KOLA GHARI KE BAARE MEIN JAANTE HAI YAHA AISA KYA HUA THA. 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REENA NE KAHA I HEARD THAT YOU PROMOTED FOR ACP’S PLACE KASHIF NE KAHA HAA REENA NE KAHA MUJHE BOLA TAK NAHI PHONE PE KI TUM YAHA ISS NAYE SHEHER MEIN AAYE HO KASHIF BOLA CHALO JALDI SE RESTAURANT CHALTE HAI KASHIF NE GAADI NIKALI AUR DONO RESTAURANT PAHOOCHE KASHIF NE KAHA MAIN EK MINUTE MEIN AATA HOO AUR TOILET KI OR CHALA GAYA TABHI KASHIF KO CALL AYA AUR CALL FOREINSIC LAB SE THA DOCTOR NE KAHA KI MUJHE PALAK KI LAASH MEIN BAHOOT KUCH MILA HAI TUM KAL LAB AAKE USKI REPORTS DEKH LENA RAAT KO KASHIF KO SAPNA AAYA USE AJIBO GARIB DRISHYA DIKH RAHE THE JO USKE KAAN MEIN GUNJ RAHE THE HELP HELP KEH RAHE THE KASHIF KI AANKH KHULI AUR SIR PE  PASINA DEKH KAR USE LAGA YE SAB USE KYA DIKHA USKI SAMAJH MEIN NAHI AAYA AUR USNE BAAT KO WAHI RAFA DAFA KAR DI AGLE DIN WO REPORT DEKHNE GAYA DOCTOR NE BATAYA KI ISKI DONO AANKHEN AISE KHULI HUYI HAI JAISE ISNE KOI BAHOOT DARAVANI CHIZ DEKH LI HO AUR YE MUH JO KULHA HAI ISKA MATLAB ISNE CHILLANE KI KOSHISH KI KASHIF BOLA YE MAAJHRA KYA HAI KUCH SAMJH MEIN NAHI AA RAHA WAHA KOI NA KOI TO HAI JO IN SAB KO MAAR RAHA HAI MUJHE US JAGAH E BAARE MEIN PATA LAGANA HOGA TABHI EK RING BAJI AUR KASHIF KO KAHA POLICE WAALO NE KI SIR FHIR EK HAADSA HUA HAI IS BAAR EK LADKI KI DEATH HUYI HAI AUR USKE SAATH EK 7 SAAL KA BACHA HAI JO ABHI THIK HAI PAR BAHOOT DARAA HUA HAI KASHIF NE KAHA MAIN ABHI AATA HOON KASHIF KE HOSPITAL JAATE HI WAHA PE RAMU NE KAHA SIR YE BACHA PURI TARIKE SE SAHI SALAMAT HAI AUR LADKI MAR CHUKI HAI KASHIF NE DEADBODY DEKHI TO WO PURI TARIKE SE KHARAB THI TABHI JUNIOR INSPECTOR NE KAHA SIR ISKE PET MEIN DHAR DHAR SHISHE GHUSAYA GYA HAI AUR WO CHOTA LADKA EK KISSAN KA BETA HAI SIR US LADKI KI DEADBODY DEKHKAR WO CHILLAYA AUR SHEHER MEIN PAHOOCH KAR USNE HUMHE KHABAR DI KASHIF BOLA MUJHE US LADKE SE MILNA HAI  KASHIF NE US LADKE KO CHOCLATE DIYA AUR KAHA KYA TUM JAANE TE HO KISNE KIYA US LADKI KA KHOON HAA UNCLE MAINE USKO NA USKO PED PAR JHULTA DEKHA LEKIN MAINE USE NAHI DEKHA JISNE USE MAARA KAASHIF NE US BACCHE SE BAHOOT JAANNE KI KOSHISH KI LEKIN BACCHE NE WAHI BATAYA JO USNE DEKHA KASHIF NE APNE HWALDAAR KO KAHA KI YE MAAJHRA KYA HAI DIN PAR DIN KHOON HOTE HAI AUR SARKAR KUCH NAHI KARTI RAMU NE KAHA SAAHAB YE KITNE SAALO SE CHAL RAHA HAI PATA HI NAHI CHALTA HAR POLICE WALA TO DARKE MAARE WAHA INVESTIGATION NAHI KARTA LEKIN KASHIF NE KAHA MAIN TO WAHA JAA KE HI RAHOONGA AUR PATA LAGAAONGA KI YE MAJHRA KYA HAI GHAR AAKAR KASHIF THODA DHILA PAD GAYA THA AUR JALDI SO GAYA WAHI FHIR SE USE SAPNE MEIN DIKHA JO USNE USS DIN DEKHA THA TABHI KASHIF EK CHIKH NIKALI AUR WO BAHOOT DARR GAYA USSE LAG RAHA THA KI JAROOR ISS CASE MEIN MUJHE KUCH NA KUCH TO LAGTA HAI MUJHE PATA LAGANA HI HOGA TABHi POLICE COMMISSIONER KA RING BAJTA HAI AUR USKE BAAD COMMISSIONER KASHIF KO APNE OFFICE BULATA HAI AAGE KI KAHANI AGLE POST MEIN
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2010, 12:11:57 PM »
A very good story Asif Ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2010, 07:26:20 AM »
COMMISONER KE OFFICE MEIN JAATE HI KASHIF NE PUCHA JI SIR KAHIYE AAPNE MUJHE BULAYA COMMISSIONER HAA KASHIF MAINE SUNA HAI KI TUM EK PURANE CASE MEIN KAM KAR RAHE HO WAHI KHOLA GADHI WALA CASE KASHIF BOLA YES SIR MUJHE BHI EK BAAT AJEEB LAGI US JAGAH KE BAARE MEIN KI LOGO KA KEHNA HAI KI WAHA PE EK AATMA BHATAKTI HAI JO HAR KISI INSAAN KO MAR DETI HAI COMMISSIONER BOLA DEKHO KASHIF MAIN JAANTA HOO KI HUM IN SAB PAR WISHWAS NAHI KARTE LEKIN LOGO KE KHAUF AUR IS SHEHER KE LOGO NE MAAN LIYA HAI KI WAHA KISI KA SAAYA BHATAK TA HAI MERI MAANO TO TUM YE CASE KO YAHI REHNE DO KASHIF KO YE BAAT SUNTE HI EK JHATKA LAGA KI YE SIR KYA KEH RAHE HAI KASHIF NE KAHA KI SIR AAP PLS AISA MAT KAHIYE HUM POLCE WAALE HAI SIR HUMHE HAR CASE SOLVE KARNA CHAHIYE AGAR HUMNE IS CASE PE DHYAN NAHI DIYA TOH LAAKHO MASUMO KI JAAN CHALI JAAYEGI HUMHE PATA LAGANA HOGA KI YE MAJHRA KYA HAI US JAGAH KA COMMISSIONER NE KAHA US JAGAH KE BAARE MEIN BAHOOTO NE PATA LAGAYA LEKIN KOI NA SURAKSHIT RAHA SAB KI SAB KO EK HI CHIZ MILI WHO THI MAUT AB MAIN TUMHARE BHALE KE LIYE KEH RAHA HOO AAGE TUMHARI MARZI KASHIF NE KAHA SORRY SIR BUT MAIN YE CASE PE AAGE KAM KAROONGA COMMISSIONER NE KAHA JAISE TUMHARI MARZI AUR WAHA SE KASHIF NIKAL GAYA AUR SIDHE SHAAM KO CAFÉ PAHOOCHA REENA NE PUCHA KI KYA BAAT HAI KASHIF NE KAHA KUCH NAHI WHO COMMISSIONER NE KAHA KI AB AUR IS CASE MEIN KAAM MAT KARO REENA NE KAHA AAKHIR AISA IS CASE MEIN KYA HAI KASHIF BOLA KYA TUM BHOOT PRET PE WISHWAS KARTI HO REENA NE KAHA ZYADA NAHI KASHIF NE BOLA KI YAHI IS CASE KI MORAL OF THE STORY HAI KYA TUM KHOLA GADHI KE BAARE MEIN JAANTI HO REENA BOLI NAHI PAR SUNA HAI WOH MANHUS JAGAH HAI WAHA HAMESHA KISI NA KISI KHOON HO JAATA HAI KASHIF BOLA MAIN USI CASE PE KAAM KAR RAHA HOO PATA LAGANA CHAHTA HOON KI WAHA KOI TO KHOONI CHUPA HUA HAI JO SHEHER MEIN DEHSHAT FAILANA CHAHTA HAI REENA BOLI JAB COMMISSIONER MANA KAR RAHE HAI TO MAT PADO IS CASE MEIN KITNO NE KOSHISH KI PAR KOI SUCCESSFUL TO NAHI HUA KASHIF BOLA MAIN YE CASE LADOONGA AUR WAHA SE CHALA GAYA AUR RAAT KO SOCHTE SOCHTE KAB KASHIF KI AANKH LAGI USE PATA HI NAHI CHALA NIND MEIN USE WAHI SAPNE PARESHAAN KAR RAHE THE SUBAH OFFICE JAATE HI KASHIF SIT PE BAITHA KAL RAAT KE SAPNE KE BAARE MEIN SOCH RAHA THA RAMU NE KAHA KYA HUA SIR AAJ AAP BAHOOT DARE DARE KYUN HAI EKDUM SE KASHIF NE KAHA SUNO KYA MERE SE PEHLE KISI NE US CASE MEIN KAAM KIYA THA RAMU BOLA JI SIR KARNE WAALE TO BAHOOT THE LEKIN KOI BACHA NAHI KASHIF BOLA TUMHE KAISE PATA RAMU BOLA SIR MAINE KITNO KO IS CASE MEIN AATE AUR JAATE DEKHA AISE HI EK SIR THE UNKA NAAM RAJENDRA UNKI DEATH TO PAGALPAN MEIN HO GAYI WO TO IS CSE KI JAD TAK GAYE THE LEKIN PATA NAHI CHALA KI AAKHIR UNKE SAATH HUA KYA THA KASHIF BOLA KYA TUM MUJHE WO SAARI FILES DIKHA SAKTE HO JISME KHOLA GADHI WALA CASE LADA GAYA HAI RAMU NE HASTE HUYE KAHA JI SIR FHIR EK SAATH SAARE BUNDLE FILE KE NIKALE RAMU NE AUR KAHA PATA NAHI KAB KHATAM HOGA YE CASE KASHIF BOLA MERE SE PEHLE AUR KISI NE NAHI PATA LAGAYA RAMU NE KAHA SIR DAR KE MAARE TO SAB POLICE WAALE TO KOI TEHKI KAAT HI NAHI KAR RAHE AUR YE CASE EK LAWAARIS AUR BENAAM CASE BANKAR REH GAYA HAI AUR MEDIA WAALO NE TO PURE SHEHER KO DARRA DIYA HAI KI WAHA SAAYA HAI JO HAR KISI KO MAAR DETA HAI JO WISHWAS KARTA HAI WO DARTA HAI AUR JO NAHI WO MARTA HAI KASHIF NE KAHA MAIN YE CASE LADOONGA AB MAI N ISS JAGAH JAAUNGA TO BE CONTINUED….
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 07:31:55 AM »
 Ramu ne kaha sir aap ek baar phir soch lo waha jaana khatre se khali nahi hai kashif ne kaha hum police wale hai hamara kaam hi khatron ka kaam hota hai ab aise hath hath pe rakhke bethkar kisi aur khoon ka intezaar kare ye mujhay kabhi manjoor nahi chalo ab mujhe ek files files do kashif ne saari files check hi tab use ek file haath laga usme kuch us jagah ke baare mein usme likha tha Robert szatyr aur  aage padhne ki koshish ki lekin kashif ko kuch nahi samajh mein aaya kashif ne kaha are ye aage ki writing samajh mein kyun nahi aa rahi ramu bola bahoot purani files hai sir dimag kharab ho jaayega fhir bhi nahi jaldi milega kashif ne kaha chalo main waha jaane ki tayyari kar leta hoo aur usne commissioner ko phone karke kashif ne chutti ki appeal ki to commissioner ne kaha thik hai tum iss case ko handle kar sakte ho lekin agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to kyunki main tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta it’s your wish to handle this case not mine otherwise I told you agar tumhe ab bhi jaana to tum jaa sakte ho go ahead kashif ke muh se bas itna nikla thankyou sir aur agle din apna bag pack karne laga piche se use reena ne pakad liya ek chillane ke saath kashif ne kaha u almost killed me reena ne kaha to kya ho gaya police ho tum itne mein dar gaye kashif bola dekho kuch dino se mujhe ek ajeeb sa dar lag raha hai reena ne kaha dar are u joking? Pehle to bahoot nidar bana karte the ab kya ho gaya kashif bola pata nahi jab se ye saya prêt aatma wala case dekh raha hoo tab se aisa ho raha hai reena ne kaha kya tum ab ye case handle karoge kashif ne kaha karoonga mujhe ye case bahoot hatkar lag raha hai  mujhe lag raha hai ki us jagah kuch na kuch to hua hai jisse hum ekdum pare hai so what do u mean? Reena ne kaha kashif ne bola main ab jaa raha hoo mujhe ab waha rehna hoga reena boli ye kya bol rahe ho waha use ghati mein jaoge nahi tum waha mat jao waha se koi nahi laut ke aata kashif bola pls don’t stop me  main waha se aa jaunga tum chinta mat karo reena boli wo jagah khatarnak hai waha kuch nahi hai tum waha mat jao lekin kashif ne gadh mein bag rakha aur waha se nikal gaya reena udaas ho gayi aur dar rahi thi kashif ko khone ka gadhi apni tez gati se le jaate hi kashif ne jald hi aligarh chodke maut ke raasto mein aana shuru kar diya tabhi gadhi ka breakfail ho gaya kashif ko ajib ajib awaje aane lagi tabhi kashif ki gadhi ek zordar takkar maari ped ko aur sidhe kashif maut ke phahad se gir gaya kya ab kashif bachega ya mar jaayega aur fhir wo saaya kashif ko bhi nahi chodega kiska hai woh saaya kun maar raha hai wo sabko jaane ke liye padte rahiye fear – a disloyal love stay tuned!
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 09:23:53 AM »
Aage jab kashif ki car khai mein gir rahi thi to wo puri tarah kashif ke dimag ye tha ki ab wo nahi bachega wo sapne ka dar usko baar baar dikh raha tha pal mein sab badalta chala gaya kashif ki aankhen band hone lagi aur kuch pal mein hi sab khatam ho gaya aakhir ek baar fhir us saaye ki jeet ho gayi tabhi kashif ki aankh khuli usne apne aapko ek chote se ghar mein paaya kashiif ne socha aakhir wo yaha pahoocha kaise tabhi saamne se ek budhe ko aate dekh wo thoda dar gaya tabhi budhe se aadmi ne use kaha ki abhi bahoot jagah chotte aayi hai tumhe tum abh I puri tarike se theek nahi huye h tumhe abhi kaafi aaram karna hai kashif ne kaha pls main yaha kaise aaya? Us budhe aadmi ne muskuraya aur kaha main jaanta tha kit um yahi question poochoge chalo main bata hi deta hoot um jab khai se gir rahe the to tum khai ke bich me atak gaye the aur tumhari gadhi khai se niche gir gayi kashif ne kaha lekin aap yaha aisi jagah kaise rehte ho maine to suna hai ki ye khola gadhi mein to sirf ek saaya bhatak ta hai jo kisi ko bhi yaha aane nahi deta budhe aadmi ne thoda sa muh bannaya aur kaha haa rehta hai bahoot purana saaya yaha rehta hai lekin wo bichari to sirf apne dushman ko doondh rahi hai jab koi kisi ke saath dhokha kare to wo kaise zinda reh sakta hai kashif bola aapko kaise pata us saaye ke baare mein itna kuch aur aap sheher se itni dur yaha kya kar rahe ho budha aadmi ne haste huye kaha kya karu ye ujaad wadiya kuch kehna chahti hai mujhe kehti hai ki insaan hi sab ki musibat hai un shaitano se dur hi rehna chahiye jo aapko kahi ka nahi chodte kashif bola dekhiye baba main kuch samajh nahi paa raha hoo mujhe aap saaf saaf bataiye ki yaha kuch hua tha kya aap itni sunsaan jagah par bina kisi dark e kaise rehte hai aapka koi hain nahi ya aap us saaye ko jaante hai ? kashif ne sawaalo ki bochar kar di budhe aadmi par budhe aadmi ne kaha sab sawaalo ke jawaab tumhe bina kisi pareshaani ke mil jaayenge tum itna kuch kyun jaanna chahte ho yaha koi aata jaata nahi mujhe kis baat ka darr hoga ki koi jaanwar ya koi chiz mujhe maar degi meri zindagi to waise bhi usi din khatam ho gayi thi jab wo haadsa mere saath gatha kashif ko kuch samjh mein nahi aa raha tha ki naa jaane wo kaha aa gaya tabhi kashif ne us budhe aadmi ko kaha ki ab main wapis kaise jaunga budhe aadmi ne kaha yaha bahoot khatra hai aur yaha kahi jaana bhi mat kashif ne kaha main yaha us saaya ka pta lagane aaya tha main acp kashif hoo aur main us saaya ka pata isliye lagana chahta tha ki main jaan saku ki akhir hai kaun jo har masumo ko maar deta hai job hi is rasste se guzar raha hai main jaanke hi rahoonga budhe aadmi ne kaha jaisi tumhari marzi lekin ab tum hi wo insaan ho jisse usko aas hai warna ye jagah ek narak aur bhi khoon nadiya bahayega aur badbadate huye wo ghar ne nikal gaya kashif ne kaha ab kya karun sab kuch to gadhi mein thi sab to jal gaya hoga ye main kaha aake fas gaya lekin us saaye ne mujhe kyun nahi maara meri toh kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha ki kya ho raha hai lekin main pata lagana hoga aise beithe rehne se kaam nahi chalega naahi wo kisi ko contact kar sakta tha aur naahi kisi se baat kar sakta kashif ne apna mobile check kiya mobile kaam nahi kar rahi thi kashif ko har jagah bebassi lag rahi thi tabhi wo ghar se nikal ke baba ko khojne laga kashif mann hi mann mein keh raha tha arre ye baba kaha chala gaya itne jaldi jaroor iss baba ko hi kuch pata hoga lekin mujhe ab bhi yaha aise rehne se kuch nahi mil sakta main us saaye ko dhund kar hi rahoonga aur nikal chala apni talaash mein kadakti dhup door door tak koi nahi bas kashif ko yeh dart ha ki wo kis mayajaal fas gaya hai naah isse pehle kabhi wo bhoot palit pe wishwas karta tha aur naahi kabhi uske saath kuch hua fhir ye kaisa darr tha jo use harpal daraye jaa raha tha tabhi aadhe raaste mein hi kashif bebass hokar gir padha pyaas aur bhukh ki wajah se wo ab uth bhi nahi sakta tha use har jagah bas wo saaya hi nazar aa raha ki kab wo use maar de kashif uthne ki koshish karta lekin ek pal mein hi waapsa gir jaata chaliye ab dekhte hai aage kya kahani mod laayegi to be continued….
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2010, 08:26:33 AM »
Kadakti dhoop men kashif puri tarike se se phool ki tarah murjha raha tha ki tabhi uski aankhen band ho gayi lekin wo apne aapko jagane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin koi faayeda nahi ho raha tha kyunki wo puri tarah se ek lachaar ghayal tha aur wo apne sharer ko zyada der tak jhel nahi paaya aur ek wahi behosh ho gaya uske mann mein chal raha tha ki wok aha aa gaya kaisi ajeeb situation mein fass gaya tabhi use apne saamne ek badi hi purani haveli dikhi use laga shayad ab uske har sawaal ka jawab mil sakta hai usne apne aapko uthane ki koshish ki lekin uuth nahi paa raha tha tabhi saamne se ek ladki ko aate dekh wo thoda ghabraya ki kahi ye wahi saaya toh nahi aur darr se fhir behosh ho gaya jab wo utha toh usne apne aapko ek haveli ke andar purane rayiz jaise dikhne wale bed par apne aapko paaya tabhi saamne se ek ladki aayi aur usse kehne lagi ki aap yaha kaise fass gaye iss jagah par to koi aata jaata nahi kashif ne bola nahi wo darasal main ek case ko handle karne ke liye us khooni ko dhund raha hoo jo har masoom ko mar deta hai jo yaha aata hai lekin aap aur ye mahal to maine pehle nahi dekha ek jor se hasne ke baat ladki ne kaha ki ye mahal tab se yaha hai jab Andrews aur lohana aaye the kashif bola ye log kaun hai ladki ne kaha are aap ko nahi pata unhone hi toh ye mahal banaya tha sheri logo se dur iss jagah par koi nahi aata jaata tha isliye unhone socha kyun na yaha hi banaye kashif bola kit oh aap yaha aisi sunsaan jagah pe kaise reh rahi ho aur aap jaroor us budhe aadmi ko jaanti hogi jisne mujhe bachaya tha khai se girne ke liye wo ladki thodi sochi aur kaha kaun bhudha aadmi main to kisi ko nahi jaanti jo yaha rehta ho kashif ne socha ki jaroor kuch to gadbad hai ab use savdhani se hi pata lagana hoga fhir tabhi kashif ne kaha ki aap yaha akeli rehti hain ya aap ke saath koi aur bhi rehta hai ladki ne kaha nahi koi nahi rehta main yaha akele hi har jagah sair karti hoo tabhi andhera hogaya kashif ne kaha kya aap ke paas phone hai mujhe baat karni hai nahi wo disconnect hai kashif ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab uske saath kya ho raha hai usne socha ki jo karna hai ab use hi karna hoga usne haveli ke chakkar lagane shuru kar diye lekin usko dur dur tak kuch nahi mila tabhi wo ladki ne ki aap khane ke liye niche aa jaaye kashif ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki ek to ye ladki akele is veeran jagah mein akeli kya kar rahi hain iska koi aage piche nahi kashif niche table par gaya waha lambe dining table ke saamne waale sit par wo beth gaya aur udhar wali sit pe wo ladki kahana ke baad kashif ne kaha khana bahoot hi accha tha thanks keh kar usne kaha ki arre aap ke paas bahoot kitabe hain aap ye sab pad chuki hain us ladki ne kaha haan pad chuki hoo tabhi to ye sab tni purani hai accha main toh puchna hi bhul gaya ki aapka naam kya hai oh mera naam rosey fernandes hai main yaha 30 saal pehle aayi thi apne baap ke saath lekin kuch hi dino mein unka swargvaas ho gaya kashif ne kaha aap to mujhe foreighner lagti ho aap kaha ki ho rosey ne kaha main new Zealand ki ho aur main yaha akele hi rehti hoo kashif ne kaha aap hindi accha ol leti ho rosey ne kaha thanks waise aap ki koi girlfriend nahi hai kya kashif ne kaha nahi sirf ek friend hai abhi maine kuch socha nahi hai aap ke paas to love books bahoot saare hai wow kashif ne rosey se kaha rosey ne kaha waise aap jaise ladke ki koi premika nahi accha nahi lagta kashif ne kaha pyar karne waale ko pyar dhundhna nahi padta use khud pe khud mil jaata hai rosey ne kaha aur agar wo pyar bewafaai kare tab kya karna chahiye kashif ne kaha pehle par ko samjhna chahiye usko jaanna chaiye andhe pyar mein kuch nahi milta rosey haskar jaane lagi apne kamre mein kashif ko ek bhayanak awaaje aane lagi kashif ne jaise khidki mein dekha toh piche se uske kandhe pe haath rakha kashif ne gharbrakar piche mudhke dekha to piche rosey khadi thi usne usse kaha ki khoonkar jaanwar hai iss jungle mein kabhi bhi hamla kar dete hai behtar hai ki aaap bahar mat jaiye kashif ne kaha lekin aap yaha akele darti nahi rosey ne kaha nahi main to yaha kab se reh rahi hoo mujhe kis baat ka darr kashif ne kaha kashif apne kamre mein chala gaya usse kuch to ho raha tha aur wo behosh hone laga rosey uske paas aayi aur uske baalo par haath firane lagi aur kab usse madhur Milan karne lagi kashif ko pata hi nahi chala kashif ne kaha ye kya kar rahi hai aap rosey ne kaha aap ne mera dil jeet liya hai ab aaj ki raat main apke saath bita sakti hoo aur pal mein hi raat katne lagi to be continued….
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2010, 08:49:34 AM »
Agle din jab kashif utha to oose yakin nahi ho raha tha ki kal raat usne kya kar daala usne us ladki ko dekha wo gayab thi oose kuch samajah mein nahi aa raha tha wo jis kaam ke liye aaya tha oose khud kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha lekin wow aha se ab bhi jaa nahi sakta tha kashif ne us ladki ko dhundha par wo oose kahi nahi milli wo jis jagah mein 2 din se tha wo mahal oose daravana khandar lag raha tha kashif ne socha ki kyun naa os ladki ko aur us baba ko dhundha jaaye ki ye dono yaha aise kasie reh sakte hai inhe khoon baare mein kuch nahi pata aur itna kuch ho gaya kashif bahar gaya idhar udhar talaashne laga lekin oose kahi bhi koi nazar na aaya ki ye sab aakhir ho kya raha hai aisi ajeeb jagah mein wo kaise bach gaya tabhi kashif ko wo budha mila usne usko pakda aur kaha dekho baba mujhe jaanna hai ki aap ko kaun ho aur wo ladki kaun thi jo ek foreigner hai jisse main kal raat us mahal mein mila ye sab ho kya raha hai budhe aadmi ne kaha tum bahoot kismet waale ho ki tum uski manshaa puri kar sakte ho wo kab se tumhare intezaar ke liye bhatak rahi thi ab jaake use wo insaaf milega kashif bola main jaanta hoo aap jaante ho us ladki ko jiska naam rosey hai hawaye tez hone lagi us budhe aadmi ne kaha haa jaanta hoo wo bichari ko to bas apna insaaf chahiye jise tum hi de sakte ho kashif ne sunke kaha kaisa insaaf aakhir wo rosey kaun hai ek prêt? Ya koi khooni hai wo aise mahal mein mujhe tumse bahoot kuch puchna hai us aadmi ne kaha tumhare saare sawaalo ke jawaab tumhe wahi milenge tumhe waha jaana hoga us mahal mein tab jaake tum oose insaaf dila paoge kashif ne kaha lekin mujhe waha kuch nahi mila tha us budhe aadmi ne kaha ki bahar se dikhta hai wo hota nahi aur jo hota hai wo dikhta aur ek lambi hassi ke saath wo budha pal mein gayab ho gaya kashif ne socha oh nahi ye to ek aatma hai mujhe pata lagana hoga ki ye majhra kya hai nahi to bahoot masoom is shaitan se mare jayenge lekin kashif ko darr tha us mahal mein wapis jaane ka par sab kuch to wahin pe mil sakta tha kashif ne himmat jutakar wapis wo mahal mein gaya waha sab khdiki darwaaje aise khule the jaise kuch bol rahe ho andheri raat ho rahi thi charo taraf andhera baaki jagaho par sirf aur sirf mitiyo ke putle jo aise lag rahe the ki kuch bol padenge kashif andar ghusa aur idhar udhar checking karne laga jaate jaate use ek gufa dikhi jaha wo unki gehraayio mein chala hi jaa raha tha tabhi ek tez sawar ke saath ek kitaabo ka gucha uske saamne gira kashif bahoot ghabraya hua tha tabhi usne usse khola usme gothic religion ke baare mein likha tha kashif ne aage padhne ki koshish kit oh usme likha tha rosey loves Robert kashif ko kuch yaad aane laga tabhi kashif ne kaha arre ye to wahi insaan hai jiska naam maine apne case files mein padha tha aakhir ye majhra kya hai tabhi kashif ko rone ki awaj sunayi di kashif bhagta bhagta upar gaya chat par waha ek ladki ro rahi thi kashif uske paas gaya aur wo ladki ke kandhe par apna haath rakha aur jaise usko dekhna chaha wo ladki ne apna chehra dikhaya aur kaha pls help me pls help me aur zor zor se chillane lagi kashif buri tarah darr gaya aur haveli ki chat se gir gaya aur sidhe kuye mein gir gaya kashif thode der ke liye behosh ho chukha tha tabhi oose apne saamne ek ladki laash dikhi jise dekhkar kashif ghabraya aur kuye se nikalne ki koshish ki aur nikalne bad usne chain ki saans li lekin wo puari tarike se ghayal tha tabhi saamne ek ladki khadi hui kashif ne kaha who are u? why do you everybody who crosses this highway? Why? Tabhi ladki ne kaha it was a very long story of my life a love who betrayls with me that person ever cheat my life he destroyed my life kashif ne kaha I know you are a foreigner but why u killing everyone? Rosey says that I was a gothic my friends and I came here when there’s no one lives that time I was very depressed because my father forgood me because I m not his real daughter my mother died when I was born but my dad never cares me and I came with my friends to India to live in this strange place but my friends and me never worships our god we were kind of godless people scares from us and me I was finding my love that time a man came my life I fall in love with him but what I know that he will kill me he rapes me with my friends and also killed me because he knew that if he leaves me I can do anything I can do anything with him but that merciless person kills me and drop me on this old well my body has become a victim of this killing story but no one helps me no one helps me because I was alone in my whole life to be continued….
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2010, 02:19:12 AM »
And now I was just become a spell who walks on this house and kills everyone who comes to cross this highway aur tabhi wo rone lagi kashif bola listen I know ki tum acchi thi tumhare saath bahoot bura hua lekin tumhare friends ka kya hua tumhari maut ke baad unhone jaroor ye sheher chod diya hoga us din rosey no no noooooooooo maine unhe maar diya tha lekin Robert jaldi hi yaha se ojhal ho gaya because he just wanted my money and he also got it he just left this old house for me kashif ne kaha tumhare saath bahoot bura hua lekin tum aise kab tak karogi kab tak un logo ka khoon bharogi tumne apne badle ki bhawana mein kitmo ko maar diya agar tum aisa hai to tum mujhe bhi maar do c’mon c’mon jab bewajah khoon bahana chahti ho to bahao main tumhe nahi rokunga rosey ne kaha no I can’t kill you because you are only person where I can trust and you can help me kashif ne kaha dekho Robert ka pata lagana toh padega lekin wo mujhe milega kaha kya wo is waqt zinda hoga rosey ne kaha he should be alive because I m only person who will kill him kashif ne bola lekin main nahi chahta kit um baqio ko nuksaan pahoochao mujhe tumhare us Robert szatyr ke baare mein pata lagana hoga ki tabhi subah ho gayi aur rosey ne kaha I gotta go now otherwise I will burn aur ek jhoke ke saath gayab ho gayi kashif ne kaha ki mujhe ab pata lagana hoga ki ye Robert szatyr kaha milega shayad isne India chod diya ho ab itne saalo pehle ki baat hai tabhi kashif mudha tum to wahi budhe aadmi ho naa mujhe jaanna hai ki ye majhra kya hai ab tum kaun ho yaha itne saalo se kyun bhatak rahe ho usne kaha bahoot lambi kahani hai beta bahoot jab maine jaana ki hamare guest house mein kuch gothic aaye main bhi unka ek guest ki tarah karne laga lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki wol log hamari memsahib ko maar denge lekin khud bhi wo nahi reh paaye aur maut ke ghaath utar gaye lekin wo Robert wo bach gaya usne hi ye saara shadyantra racha tha naahi wo memsaab ko maar ko maarta naahi wo aise bhagta kashif ne pucha ki tum to jaante hoge ki usse roka kaise jaa sakta hai jaanle ti rahegi wo sabki lekin tum unke ek worker the isliye usne tumko kuch nahi kiya lekin kya pata wo kitno ko maar de mujhe kuch soojh nahi raha ki main kya karoon mujhe kuch sochna hoga warna bahoot der ho jaayegi budhe aadmi ne kaha ek kaam ho sakta hai Robert ne uske saath bewafaai ki jisse rosey bhula nahi paayi main pata lagaunga aur wo bhi gayab ho gaya kashif bola ki mujhe raat se pehle yaha se nikalna hoga warna uski aatma fhir aa jayegi mujhe dhundte kashif ne kaha ab kya karoon aise padal chalta hoo aur wo thode der sheher mein aa gaya aur sidhe police sation aa gaya waha ramu ne dekha arre sar aap itne jaldi aa gaye kya hua aap to moina karne ke liye gaye the kashif bola mujhe Robert szatyr ke baare mein information chahiye warna bahoot der ho jaayegi  ramu ne kaha ye kaun hai sir kashif bola is case ka jad ab ise jaldi dhoondo ki ye 30 saal pehle India aaya tha ya nahi aura b kaha hai jaldi aur haa us highway ka raasta band kar do waha koi jaa naa paaye aur thodi der mein pata laga sir wo yaha India aaya tha lekin akele nahi unko dosto ke saath sir wo gothic tha ajib sa rehta tha kashif bola tumhe kaise pata bola sir ek baar wo police station aaaya tha uski car chori ho gayi thi isliye humne unki gaadi ko dhundha lekin wo humhe kahi nahi mila tha kashif bola to wo is waqt hoga kaha sir maine pata lagaya hai ki wo Switzerland bhaga tha lekin sir aisa hua kya hai us jagah kashif ne kaha waha ek haunted house hai jo bahoot saalo se band hai wahi pe h iisne ek rosey naam ki ladki ka khoon kar diya tha ab humhe isse jaldi se dhudhna hoga chalo Switzerland lekin kya pata tha ki unki baate aur bhi koi sun raha hai aur wo aur koi nahi retired ek police waala baaki ka suspension jaanne ke liye wait kare agli post ka.

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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2010, 05:56:48 AM »
Tabhi thode hi der mein wo retired police waala ek haveli ki taraf chala waha usne apni jeep roki aur andar ghus gaya tabhi saamne se ek maradana awaj mein us police officer ka naaam gunja aao jagdish jagdish aao mujhe tumhara hi intezaar tha kab se wait kar raha hoon kaha the kuch mila kya tumhe jagdish ne bhari swar mein kaha ji sir bahoot kuch haath laga mere purane station se mujhe bahoot secrets pat laga hai jo mere pure 20 saal mein mujhe pata nahi chal saka sir mujhe kuch kufiya jaankari mili hai us jagah ke baare mein so if u don’t angry may I tell u about that? Kaho kaho jagdish main kab se tumhare muhn se sunne ke liye wait kar raha tha kaho jaldi se us aadmi ne kaha jagdish bola sir aap jis jagah ko apna banana chahte hai wo jagah pe ek saaya hai kisi aurat ka aur wo har kisi ko us highway mein jaate hi maar deti hai wo kisi ko waha tikne nahi deti tabhi wo aadmi muskraya aur kaha kya tumhe wishwas hai in sab chizon par tum jaante ho meri waha kab se nazar hai main is jagah mein ek factory chalata tha meri factory se drug supplies hote the tabhi tumhare bade officer ne mujhe arrest kar liya lekin bichara ye bhul gaya ki main uska kya hashrah karoonga maine use mujhpe jhoote case ke aarop mein fasaya bichare ne bahoot koshish ki lekin use mila kya use mili mujhse uljhane ki sajaa uski wajah se mera factory band ho gaya uski wajah se mera bahoot nuksaan ho gaya lekin usko jo saja mili wo bichara ye bhul gaya ki uska parinaam kya ho ga saale ko machar ki tarah saaf kar diya aur tumhe acp ki jagah dedi kyun sahi kaha na chalo wo baate chodo nahi main kisi saaye se nahi darta na hi kisi preto se main jaanta hoo ki wo jagah par ek haadsa hua tha ek khoon hua tha waha pe lekin maine khoon ko khoon hi rehne diya main jaanta tha ki agar police officers ko pata laga to wo waha ki talaashi lenge aur us jagah ko apne giraft mein le lenge jo main nahi chahta jagdish bola lekin sir wo log jo waha mar rahe hai unka kya us aadmi ne kaha sahi hai isse waha koi aayega nahi aur fhir wo jagah meri ho jaayegi mere paas ek british ke jamane ki ghar hoga chalo agar waha koi hai to wo mere liye kaam aasan kar raha hai jagdish bola no sir abhi nahi ek naya acp kashif is case pe kaam kar raha wahi waha gaya tha aur use kuch pata chala waha ke baare mein mujhe to darr hai kahi wo apna munh na khol le ki waha laash hai lekin commissioner uski baat pe ekdum bhi nahi yakin kar raha balki use to wo chodne ke liye keh raha us aadmi ne kaha kehte hai din badal jaate hai par insaan nahi badalte ab is naye acp ko koi saboot dhudhne dene se pehle hum uske saare raaste band kar denge ha ha ha ha haa haaaa
Udhar nayi jagah Switzerland ramu ke saath pahooch gaya tha kashif ramu ne kaha badi acchi jagah hai kashif ne kaha hum yaha ghumne nahi apna case solve karne aaye hai samjhe ramu ne kaha sir agar humhe us Robert ke baare mein pata na chal paaya toh itni badi jagah mein usko dhundhna bhid mein insaan ko dhundhna jaisa hai kashif ne kaha dekho dhudhne pe to bhagwan mil jaate hai to ye insaan kya chiz hai usne ye khoon kiya hai usne apne saathio ke saath milkar humhe use pakadna hoga warna wo aatma bahooto ki jaan le legi ramu ne kaha sir maine apne gaav mein itni aurato pe ho rahi aatmao ko dekha hai lekin kabhi aisi aaatma jo ek case solve karana chahti ho kashif ne kaha dekho wo apna insaaf chahti hai main us aadmi ko aur uske dosto ko dhund ke hi rahoonga warna mere dil ko kisi ko insaaf dene ka chain nahi aa paayega tabhi phone ki ring baji kashif ne kaha haa sir kahiye main yaha pahooch gaya hoo commissioner ne kaha dekho kashif press waalo ko pata chal gaya hai kit um us bhutiya jagah khola gadhi ke case pe kaam kar rahe ho lekin main ye nahi jaanta kyun agar mere se bade ko pata chal gayi to bahoot kuch ho jaayega ab sab tumhare haato mein hai kashif ne kaha ok sir I’ll assume you commissioner ok bye ramu ko kashif ne kaha chalo usse dhundhte kaafi idhar udhar chakkar lagan eke baad kashif ko kuch nahi mila ramu ne kaha sir kyun naa hum us jagah ka pata lagaye jaha saare gothics aate hai kashif ne kaha chalo ye bhi khojte hai tabhi waha unko kuch nahi mil raha tha ki ek aurat unke paas aayi aur kahi hey are you both Indian police officers? Kashif ne kaha yes mam we came from India for a case why mam do you know something about Robert szatyr sunke us aurat ne kaha ya I seem to remember this name where I heard and rosey fernandes aurat ne sunte hi kaha wait wait which name u said kashif ne fhir se kaha mam rosey fernandes do you know this girl? Wo aurat rone lagi ramu ne kaha arre ise kya ho gaya thode der dekhne ke baad kashif ne kaha mam why are u crying? You know this girl us aurat ne kaha yes how can I forget this girl? She was my best friend we were very close friends we do drugs party and celebration together but when she was gone to India I missed her his only one father who not cared her I think he was not his real father kashif ne kaha so then you also know about Robert szatyr and his friends aurat ne kaha no about his friends I don’t know anything but about this guy I knew him rosey loves him a lot but this guy takes my friend from my eyes I know why he was loved her because rosey have many properties and money which have on her own name kashif ne kaha so you know where she lived aurat ne kaha I don’t because she always she was random everywhere kashif ne kaha but u know where this guy home I mean where he lived? Us aurat ne kaha last time I  saw him he was in a church near church gate kashif ne kaha thank you mam aur apne ramu ko kaha cmon ramu humhe ab pata lagana hoga us aurat ne kaha wait wait but she was is she right now kashif bola no mam with regret I have to say she’s dead I found her body in old well I also found that she was killed by her friends and her lover us aurat ne kaha how how could they do this how could they do this with my sister? Aur rone lagi kashif ne kaha pls control yourself but trust me I will give her justice us aurat ne kaha thank you lord bless you kashif aur ramu waha se nikal gaye kya ab kashif dhund paayega rosey ke killer ko aur uske friends ko kya mil paayegi ek bechain prêt ko insaaf ya fhir bahega kisi ka khoon ya wo aadmi kahtam kar dega kashif ke raaste padhte rahiye ek suspense horror kahani fear- a disloyal love to be continued…..
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2010, 06:46:44 AM »
Kashif ko ab behad afsos tha ki ab usko ek aurat ko hi nahi balki ek dhokha khayi hui aurat ko insaaf dilana hai ramu ne kashif ke adhyan ko thoda aur kaha sir mujhe to lagta hai ye saara majhra India mein hi kyun shuru hua us aurat ka khoon India mein hua aur ab uske boyfriend yaha aa gaya kashif ne kaha dekho ab humhe bahoot kuch pata lag raha hai Robert ne us aurat ko waha isliye maara kyunki agar wo use us sunsaan jagah pe maar deta to uska kaam aasan hota use itni nobat nahi uthani padhti who uska khoon karke uski saari property leke bhaag gaya hain na aisa hi kuch hua hoga us aurat ke saath lekin main uske khooni ko nahi chodunga ramu ne kaha sir ab humhe us aurat ne bahoot kuch bata diya hai ab lagta hai ki wo Robert humhe mil sakta hai lekin sir wo ab budha ho chukka hoga kashif ne kaha wo to hai lekin khoon karke kab tak chupa rahega ab wahi apne dosto ke baare mein bata sakta hai tabhi kashif ne kaha lo church gate aa gaye ab andar jana chahiye andar jaate hi kashif ne ek father ko dekhkar kaha shayad yahi kuch bata de chalo try karte hain sir excuse me we are Indian police officers and we solving a case so we need your help father ne kaha what help? Kashif ne kaha sir do you know Robert szatyr father says I heard many names but they all lives in Switzerland kashif ne kaha sir Robert szatyr and rosey were lovers father ne bich mein rukte hi kaha yaa yaa rosey ya I heard this name she was come with his boyfriend and always prayed for love but kashif ne kaha sir you knows which year was moving when they was come in your church ya ya 1960 approx but sometimes later I heard that they were seprated and his boyfriend Robert was become the hunt of that situation I always saw him in my church and sometimes in graveyards but why do god breaks a love couples kashif ne kaha so sir where is he now? You know father ne kaha ya he’s now a ghost hunter and always walks everywhere to catch a ghost kashif wherc can I find him? Father ne kaha you can always find that kind of person mostly finds in graveyard kashif ne kaha thank u father ne kaha go son now you can free that spell from this hell kashif ne mudhkar dekha aur fhir aage chala gaya ramu  ne kaha sir isne to bahoot jaankari dedi yani ab humhe use dhundhne ke liye kablustan jaana hoga kashif woh to hai chalo waha se woh log ek kablustan pahooche jaha bhid thi ramu ne kaha kuch ho gaya hai kya shayad koi mar gaya hoga use dhafna rahe hai kashif ne kaha chalo dekhte hai kashif ne sabko side kar dekha to ek 50 yrs ka aadmi ek laash ko kuch kar raha tha kashif ne ek aadmi se pucha what he doing ? us aadmi ne kaha he is a famous ghost hunter he taking out a spell from a dead lady kaam thode der mein khatam ho gaya aur sab chale gaye aur wo bhi jaane laga tabhi piche se kashif ne use roka aur kaha are u Robert szatyr us aadmi ne kashif ko gaur se dekha aur kaha no I m not that man kashif ne kaha I know you are that man who killed his own girlfriend rosey fernandes with his friends I know because that spell now killing everyone because she got something bad she got betrayed from you Robert ramu ne kaha jaane dijiye sir humhe jaldi dhudhna chahiye khola ghadi ke case ko bhi ko khatam karna hai us aadmi ne piche mudhkar how do you know everything about me ? ya I was that man not now and I can know hindi kashif ne kaha to aapko pata chal gaya sirf property aur paiso ke chakkar mein us ladki ka khoon kar diya aapne thode der gum rehne ke baad robert ne kaha maine nahi kiya I was not killer of her kashif ne kaha toh phir kaun tha aaj uski aatma khola gadhi mein maujud hai aur sabko jaan se maar rahi hai job hi wo jagah cross karta hai sirf tumne use maara hai uski maut ke chupne ke darr se apni nayi pehchaan bana li hai tumne lekin insaan kab tak apni galityo se bhagega Robert ne gusse mein kaha no no no no I didn’t kill her I loved her I really loved her kashif oh so wo aatma jhooth bolegi wo aaj bhi us haveli mein cheekh cheekh ke keh rahi hai ki tum uske kaatil ho sirf paiso ke liye tumne usko maar daala you are underarrest main tumhe rosey ke khoon ke jurm mein giraftaar kara hoo Robert ne kaha agar tum mujhe jail mein daalna chahte ho faasi pe chadhana chahte ho to kar do but I didn’t kill her main uska saccha pyar tha believe me main jhoot nahi bol raha aur agar tumhe wishwas nahi to main puri sachayi bataunaga kashif ne kaha toh kya woh aatma jhoot bolegi Robert ne kaha tum mere saath aao kuch hi der mein wo log ek haveli mein pahooche dono ko bithakar usne kaha meri duniya to kab ki khatam ho gayi jab rosey ka khoon ho gaya kashif ne kaha accha maan liya ki tumne usse nahi maara to woh kya jhoot bolegi ya fhir tumhare dosto ne maara robbert ne kaha rosey ke khatam hone ke baad mujhe call aaya meri mom bimar thi main apni maa ko dekhne aaya tha unhone kasam di ki tu rosey se shaadi kar le lekin jab tak main mom ko batata tab tak unki saanse tham chuki thi main bebas ho raha tha mujhe lag raha mera is duniya mein koi nahi hai main ek gothic tha to maine apne aapko ek ghost hunter bana liya aur har buri aamao aur acchi aatmao ko is duniya se muqt karne laga par rosey ki aatma waha hai main nahi jaanta tha kashif ne kaha to agar tumne rosey ko nahi maara to fhir kisne maara bolo main jawab chahta hoo Robert ne kaha is duniya mein burayi bhi koi chiz hoti hai mere dosto mein se ek ki nazar thi uspar aur wo aur koi nahi rosey ka gehra dost stewart tha usne rosey ko maarne ka socha tha kyunki wo uski saari property hadapna chatha tha main toh sirf waha rosey ke saath apne pyar ki nayi shuruat kar raha tha lekin ek din kaafi bearish ho rahi thi rosey ne mujhse kaha ki tum jaldi sheher se aa jaana main tab tak khana bana dungi main sheher gaya hua tha lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki tab tak der ho jaayegi un kamino ne milkar meri girlfriend ka gala daba diya aur fhir use pani mein faikh diya mere saath unse maarpit hui lekin un logo ne milkar mujhe khoob maara aur waha se bhaag gaye main unke piche wapis apne sheher aaya lekin main uske do dost ko maar daala shak na hone ke liye maine unki laash ko thikhane laga diya aur ek nayi pehchaan bana li kuch hi dino maine stewart ko dhundha lekin wo bhi tak pagal ho chukka tha usne mera mask pehenkar meri rosey ko maar daala aur blame mujhpe laga diya maine usko bhi police ke hawale karwana chaha par kehte hain galti se insaan nahi bhaag sakta uski death gaadi ke niche aane mein hui aur uski friend ki bhi bimar hokar usse roz sapne mein rosey dikhti thi kashif ne kaha toh phir tumne rosey ki body ko well se kyun nahi nikala Robert ne kaha tab mujhpe rosey ke kaatilo ka khoon sawaar tha kya main usse wapis dekh sakta hoo uski aatma se mil sakta hoo kyunki wo yaha nahi aa sakti kashif ne kaha lekin ab main use muqti kaise dila paunga wo to sirf tumhe hi kaatil samajh rahi hai Robert ne kaha humhe usse batana hoga aur usse muqt karane ke liye uski laash ko muqt karna hoga wo mujhe pata hai kaise karna hai lekin hum usse tab tak muqt nahi kar sakte jab tak uske dil ke maqsad pura naa ho use pyaar mein dhokha mila hai wo ye samajhti hai par asal baat kya hai ye to main hi jaanta hoo main tumhare saath waha jaunga. Ab kahani mein alag mod aa gaya hai kya ab kashif dila payega toote huye dil waali aatma ko shaanti kya bach paayegi aur masum zindagi jaanne ke liye padhte rahiye fear – a disloyal love to be continued …..
 

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«Reply #10 on: September 10, 2010, 05:17:05 PM »
Kashif ne socha bhi nahi tha ki itna kuch ho jaayega oose laga tha ki shayad rosey ka khoon Robert ne kiya hai jo ki ab uski aatma bhi yahi samajh rahi thi ab kaise wo rosey ke asli aatma ko pakad paayega kaafi sawaal umad rahe the kashif ki zehan mein tabhi ramu ne kaha sir ab lagta hai ki rosey ka khoon unhi ke dosto ne kiya tha lekin ab to wo log nahi rahe kashif ne kaha humhe commissioner ko itni information to deni padengi ramu ne kaha kya pata sir ki commissioner humhari baato pe yakeen na karein ye aatma waatma mein sir ab kaun yakeen karta hai kashif ne kaha jo bhi karna hai humhe hi karna hoga tabhi ek ring baji kashif ne kaha reena iska phone yaha ab ? haa bolo reena kaisi ho? Reena ne kaha waha jaate hi mujhe bhul gaye mujhe pata chala hai tum khola gadhi se laut aaye ho aur mujhe bataya tak nahi kashif ne kaha mujhe time hi nahi mila main abhi is case mein bahoot busy hoo main jab waha tumse milne aaonga  ab main baad mein karta hoo tabhi agli subah kashif ke ghar Robert szatyr aaya tabhi kashif ne kaha chalo Robert szatyr kashif ne kaha ki kya tumhe pakka yakeen hai ki wo aatma tumpe yakeen karegi mujhe to aisa nahi lagta kahi tumhe kuch ho naa jaye mujhe apne pyaar se milna hi hoga jisko main kitne saalo se piche chodkar aaya tha uske andar ki wo nafrat mere liye mujhe nikalni hogi kashif bola thik hai aao hamare saath udhar India mein to kuch aur hi chal raha tha jagdish aur kitni piyoge jagdish ne us aadmi ko kaha sir ab sab aapka hoga na to wo commissioner is bhut prêt pe wishwas to kabhi nahi karega lekin wo kashif ka bacha to bas is case ko solve karne mein laga hai us aadmi ne kaha aisa kuch nahi ho paayega chahe wo jitni bhi koshish karle usse kuch bhi nahi milega wo to ab ek pagal hi ban gaya hai lekin uspe nazar rakhni jaroori hai chalo ab hum commissioner ke paas jaakar wo jagah apne naam kar lete hai mera ek accha waqil hai wo us jagah ko mere naam karega aur afterall mere paas itna paisa hai ki main wo puri gathi karidh loo jagdish ne bola chaliye sir us commissioner ke paas wahi hai sab ki jad kuch hi der mein wo log commissioner ke cabin mein pahooche commissioner ne unse kaha kya chahiye us aadmi ne kaha main aapka purana dost pehchaaniye commissioner ne kaha drug dealer mere dost nahi hote us aadmi ne kaha galat pehchaana mian is sheher ka sabse paise wala amir hoo mera naam koi pukar nahi sakta jaldi mera naam walia hai to ab main aapko bata doon ki main wo khola gadhi kharidna chahta hoo uske liye main croro paisa dene ke liye tayyar hoo main wo jagah kharidna chahta hoo commissioner how dair you? Aapne mujhe kya property dealer samjha hai get out of my office otherwise main aapko rishwat den eke jurm mein andar karwa sakta hoo walia ne kaha accha mujhe never think about that main to bas aapko is bhoj se nikal raha tha chaliye as you wish main to ye jamin aap logo se chinke hi rahoonga aur waha se dono nikal gaye kashif agli subah waha pahooch gaya aur commissioner ke paas gaya aur oose saari baat kehne hi wala tha to ramu ne kaha sir commsioner ko kuch mat bataiye warna wo Robert ko pakad lega kashif ne kaha thik hai phir Robert ko wo us haveli mein leke gaya to be continued…..


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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2010, 10:36:55 AM »
Waha jaate ke saath Robert ne kaha ye jagah ab bhi waisi ujaad hai jaise yaha kuch hua ho yaha koi bechain aatma hai jo humheghur rahi hai par wo is waqt soyi hui hai kashif ne kaha lekin usne mujhe kyun nahi maara rosey tumhe bahoot pyar karne lagi hai aur tum uski bahoot help kar sakte ho chalo mujhe andar le chalo kashif ne chaliye ramu bhi saath thaw o to ye soch mein tha ki kaho kuch bura haadsa na ho jaaye uske saath tabhi andar aane ke baad Robert ne kaha chalo yaha is jagah sab baith jao kashif ab andhera hone mein bas 1 ghanta baaki hai uske baad yaha ki har chiz tumhe ek daravane bhayanak chiz dikhegi kashif ne kaha main yaha pehle bhi aa chukka hoo ab bas iss baat ka hai ki hum rosey ko muqt kar sake tabhi andhera hone ke saath charot taraf ek bhayanak awajein gunjne lagi ramu bola sir mujhe darr lag raha hai kuch ho naa jaaye kashif bola tum shaantt raho tabhi Robert now get  your one finger on this circle point and now slowly slowly close your eyes and try to call her Robert ne bola rosey fernandes tum jaisi bhi bechain aatma ho manta hoo tumhare saath dhokha hua tumhe jisne maara wo ab is duniya mein nahi hai rosey rosey I m your Robert tabhi teeno jis circle point par ungliya rakhi thi wo uske naam pe chalne lagi aur fhir Robert ne kaha kit um kaise muqt ho sakti ho fhir usne dikhaya revenge aur tabhi ek jordar awaj ke saath wo saamne aayi aur kehne lagi you you killed me you stole my entire property and now I will kill you kashif ne kaha nahi rosey Robert tumhara dushman nahi hai isne tumhe jaan se nahi maara ramu ki to haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi kashif ne kaha jo darr hum sab ke andar hai wo ab bhi majud hai hum tumhe insaaf dilana that’s all aur tum yakeen karo rosey ne kaha no nooo no he killed me I sawhis face when he was busy to killing me Robert ne kaha alright if you think that you killed every person for your revenge so you wrong maine koi bewafaai  nahi ki thi tuhe george ne maara tha lekin wo marr chukka hai uske baaki ke dost bhi khatam ho gaye baat ka yakeen karo rosey ne kaha how did I trust in you ? Robert ne kaha you must trust in me I know,you know that time when you was in home and I told you that I have to go for some works and then when I came to home I saw george who killing you I tried to save you but they also beaten me and drop me in old well when I woke I can’t find your body and that time I wanted to get revenge form them but when I was gone back in Switzerland I found that they all killed your death has not stay any person alive and I want to say that you I always love you even I  have not married anyone please please rosey don’t crying and but rosey says but I will never free from this human world kashif ne kaha ho sakti ho rosey kyunki tumhara revenge pura ho chukka hai jinhone tumhare saath galat kiya wo aaj is duniya mein nahi hai pls apne aapko is shaitani taqat se rooh ko nikalna hai hum tumhe muqt kar denge Robert ne kaha I m sorry rosey ki main tumhe insaaf nahi dila saka ab bhi time hain apne aapko is shaapit duniya se muqt kar do rosey ne kaha but how? Robbert ne kaha I will free you Robert ne kuch mantra padha aur tabhi rosey ki aatma ek botal mein samaa gayi Robert ne kaha humhe iski body ko ab jaldi se puri tariqe se dhafnana hoga jisse ye hamesha ke liye muqt ho jaayegi ki tabhi jagdish aur uske saath walia bhi wahi tha kashif ne kaha tum log kaun ho un don one kaha is sheher ke dada hai hum unhone apne gundo ko aadesh diya aur pitne lage sabko kashif ne unke dushmano ko dher kar diya lekin piche se jagdish ne aur walia ne kashif  ko goli maar di aur walia kehne laga ab is bhoot bangla ke saath saath inki bhi aatma ko hum band kar denge jagdish ne kaha sir ye botal walia oose gaur se dekha aur jhatke se ek jagah faikh diya jisse bottle toot gaya aur ek chamakdaar roshni ke saath rosey ki aatma bahar aa gayi walia aur jagdish usko dekhkar dar gaye kashif ne kaha rosey ye logo ne Robert ko maara hai oose chot pahoochayi rosey ne kaha koi humhe juda nahi kar sakta nahi kar sakta aur ek aari ke saath jagdish ka gala kaat diya aur walia bhaga bahar rosey ne kaha aur bhaag aaj tujhe pata chalega ki aatma se takkar lene ka anjaam kya hota hai aur walia ko jala diya aur uski raakh ko kuye mein daal diya rosey ne kaha le teri maut sampan hui kashif ne laash ko paani se nikala aur Robert ne kaha isse turant jala do jala do isse ye aag se bhasam ho jaayegi kashif ne sharer ko jala diya aur fhir ek cheekh ke saath rosey ek hawa mein tabdil ho gayi aur kehne lagi thank you kashif tumhara agar tum naa hote to aaj main kabhi bhi muqt naa ho paati Robert ne kaha ruko rosey tum akeli nahi ho aur chat pe chala gaya kashif ne kaha ye kya kar rahe ho Robert pls pls mat kudo apni jaan mat do Robert ne kaha ab main apne pyar ke saath jaa raha hoon mujhe koi nahi rokega aur jaise hi main mar jaao mujhe yahi pe ek smadhi bana dena aur rosey ki raakh ko bhi tumne hamari madad ki itni nahi to aaj main yaha nahi hota aur bechaini mein roz marta aur ek saans ke saath Robert upar se kud gaya aur fhir mar gaya rosey kashif ke paas aayi aur kehne lagi pata hai main tumhe kyun pasand kiya tha aur wo sab kyun kiya kyunki tum meri zindagi mein the ab main chalti hoon Robert ki aatma bhi rosey ki aatma ke saath is duniya ko chodke chali gayi aur fhir subah ho gayi aur kashif ne kaha agar main tumhare saath hota to shayad aaj hum jaroor ek love couples hote lekin jo tumhare saath hai uske liye main sharminda hoon mujhe maaf karna ki main tab is duniya mein lekin chalo tumhe apna sacha pyar to mila ramu piche se aaya bola sir kya hua Robert aur us aatma ka kashif ne kaha wo log muqt ho gaye aur sacha pyar banke chale gaye chalo yaha se chalte hai aur in sab ke baare mein commissioner ko kuch mat batana warna ho humpe wishwas nahi karega ramu ne kaha maine apn zindagi mein aise cases kabhi nahi dekhe chalo yaha se dono ki kabar banane ke baad kashif ne dono par fhool chadaya aur jaise piche mudha to us budhe ko dekha kashif ne kaha aap yaha kya kar rahe ho us budhe ne kaha ki chalo meri sahiba ko muqti to mili chalo ab main ab main bhi muqt ho gaya tumne uski aatma ko muqt kiya yahi to main chata tha barso se seva karne ke baad aaj jaake mujhe khushi mili alvida beta reena ke paas jaakar reena ko saari baat batayi aur reena bhi kashif ka haath pakadkar kahi chalo kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge? Kashif ne kaha haa aur dono ek acchi zindagi beetaane lage kashif ne sabko umeed dilaya ki waha ek aatma thi jo apne pyar se bichdi hui thi ab wo jagah khooni nahi hai sabne maana yaha tak ki commissioner ne bhi aur kaha sach mein main bhi aise aatma waatma mein wishwas nahi karta tha lekin aaj sab sunne ke baa dab wishwas hua hai kashif ne kaha sir mujhe khud wishwas nahi tha ab jaake mujhe yakeen hua hai ki sacha pyar kabhi nahi marta bewafaai karne waale ko kabhi accha jeevan nahi mil sakta commissioner ne kaha I m proud of you ki tumne ye case bhi aur ek sache pyar karne waalo ko bhi milwaya aur case ko khatam kar diya. The end love never dies
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«Reply #12 on: January 04, 2011, 07:31:55 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2015, 03:09:41 PM »
pls don't try to copy my story not even share it without my permission :nope:
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