MAYKHANA:Kaifiyaat-ae-maye

NETRAPAL

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saj jate hai din dhalte hee
chmak uthta roshan hone par
ast hone par suraj ke hee

chahal pahal hai badi idhar
kahi botal hai kahi pyale hai
kahi hai hum, kahi hampyale hai
maykhane ke char dwar hai

nahi gareeb kee nahi ameer kee
keemat hai yaha jar achal kee

nai rang koi vishesh yaha hai
bhed bahv ka kise gyan hai
kishe hosh hai kisne jana......
jana jsne, kya use hosh hai?

kahi sakee hai pyala bhartee
kahi botal haij muh se khultee
kahi nach hai kahi aashik hai
kahi shor hai kahi jeebh tak nahi hiltee

kahi josh hai nahi hosh hai
kahi hosh par josh nahi
kahi anshoo hai kahi khushi hai

kon pada hai kon khada hai
kon gaata hai kon sunta hai
bate bhot hai dekho hai sab mili juli

may khane ke char dwara hai
khulte hai sab gali gali...........

netra......


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MAYKHANA

«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2007, 05:31:46 PM »

Your subjects are nice..
Nice attempt though !


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MAYKHANA

«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2007, 07:28:53 AM »

do ghoot pilade ayee sakee in hatho se tere
toot kar ayaa hai ye aashik maykhane me tere

befayee ka mara ye ashik aya hai dawar pe tere
kyo tarsatee hai do ghoot pile de adhkhule hoto se tere

ek botal hee hai rah gayee aas is zindgee kee bakee
tere paas hai pyala, use barde sharab se 'O' Sakee

netra....


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MAYKHANA

«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2007, 11:43:58 PM »

Nice creation Netra. Keep up..

Mer jate toh sukoon mil jata
Sakhi hum to taqdeer ke mare hai
Tere mehfil main aaye hai sakhi
Hum to Dard-e-Dil ke mare hai..!!

Roja[/color]


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Pooja

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MAYKHANA

«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2007, 01:36:07 AM »

bahoot khoob Netra ji and Nice lines Roja


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NETRAPAL

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MAYKHANA

«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2007, 03:48:57 AM »

thanks roja ji and pooja ji

hai kaisee ye kashish yaha
kheech lati hai sabko pass apne
aate hai dard se dube kuch
bhool jate hai game bhee apne

sakoone-madira milta hai yahaa
khultee hai botal n jame kisee
peete hee madhosh ho jate hai
nahi rahta hai kosh wo hai kaha

kai kahne is maykhane me
bhare hai sab n koi kahli hai
kai botal kahi kahi pyale hai
anjan hokar bhee sab lagate
hai apne se sabko yaha.....

netra.....


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Pooja

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MAYKHANA

«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2007, 03:49:52 AM »

nice netra ji


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