Saaqi ye jaam thaam le ke kho gaya hoo.N mai.N

by khalidrawat on August 02, 2007, 12:09:30 PM
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Saaqi ye jaam thaam le ke khoo gaya hoo.N mai.N
aankhoo.N mai.N ik haseen ki gum ho gaya hoo.N mai.N

aaye jo zalzala bhi yahaa.n is ghari ke baad
Mujh ko na tum jagao ge gar soo gaya hoo.n maiN

Waapis palat nahi.N saka sadyoo.N ke baad bhi
Aaya abhi talak nahi.n hoo.n jo gaya hoo.N mai.N

Teh tak her ik khayal ki teri talash maiN
Kesi yaqee.N dilao.N mai.N tujh ko gaya hoo.N maiN

Mujh ko khabar nahin yaha.N kuch bhi mere habib
Urta hoo.N kin hawaoo.N main kiya ho gaya hoo.N maiN

Qadmoo.N se ye zamin hi mere nikal gaye
Urta phire jo bagh mai.N wo ho gaya hoo.N mai.N
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2007, 01:17:15 PM »
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wah wah..
is bar mujhe pura samajh aya aur bohot acha laga.
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2007, 11:52:27 AM »
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Bahoot Badiya Likha Hai Khalid Rawat Ji,..
LikhteRahiye Yunhi,..
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2007, 11:55:45 AM »
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Sharaab Dard Ki Dawaa Hai,.
Peene Se Kharaabi Nahi,.
Dil Ke Dard Se Peete Hain,.
Yun To Hum Sharaabi Nahi,.
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2007, 11:56:59 AM »
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Buhut shukriya , janasheen ji, aap ne jo ashaar likhe hain wo buhut khubsurat hain,
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2007, 12:17:29 PM »
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Shukriya Khalid Ji,..
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«Reply #6 on: March 09, 2008, 03:21:59 PM »
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Saaqi ye jaam thaam le ke khoo gaya hoo.N mai.N
aankhoo.N mai.N ik haseen ki gum ho gaya hoo.N mai.N

aaye jo zalzala bhi yahaa.n is ghari ke baad
Mujh ko na tum jagao ge gar soo gaya hoo.n maiN

Waapis palat nahi.N saka sadyoo.N ke baad bhi
Aaya abhi talak nahi.n hoo.n jo gaya hoo.N mai.N

Teh tak her ik khayal ki teri talash maiN
Kesi yaqee.N dilao.N mai.N tujh ko gaya hoo.N maiN

Mujh ko khabar nahin yaha.N kuch bhi mere habib
Urta hoo.N kin hawaoo.N main kiya ho gaya hoo.N maiN

Qadmoo.N se ye zamin hi mere nikal gaye
Urta phire jo bagh mai.N wo ho gaya hoo.N mai.N

Bohot khoob Khalid Rawat Ji !!

Bohot khoob lines hain ye:

Waapis palat nahi.N saka sadyoo.N ke baad bhi
Aaya abhi talak nahi.n hoo.n jo gaya hoo.N mai.N

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«Reply #7 on: March 09, 2008, 03:34:03 PM »
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Bohot khoob Khalid Rawat Ji..bahoot achhe....

Yeh mehfil-e-Dard-e-Gum hai kaash jaam maiN bhi  laya hota
Ham bhi tere Gam maiN shareek hote our apna gum sunaya hota
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2008, 03:39:00 PM »
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Bahut khoob Khalid Rawat ji and Harash ji...  Applause
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Pee liya karte hai jeene ki tamanna main kabhi kabhi
dagmagana bhi zaruri hai sambalne ke liye

Rakhte hai kahi paav to padte hai kahi aur
Saaqi tu zara haat to tham hamara
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«Reply #10 on: March 14, 2008, 09:17:51 AM »
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Nice One,.
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«Reply #11 on: March 16, 2008, 03:56:45 PM »
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oh very nice
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