Wo aankhen meri madhushaala

by aryasudhanshu on July 07, 2007, 12:52:19 PM
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This one is written as a tribute to my all time favourite "Madhushala" by Dr. Harivansh Rai Bachchan. I haven't really read very many poems, but this one I used to read out daily as if it was a bhajan.

No word meanings are supplied because you can appreciate my effort only if you can appreciate the epic which, by the way stands so tall that it is unreachable. If you haven't read it, you may read it here.

Took me 4 hours to write just these many lines because there were very few words that I could find that rhymed. And yet the original is an epic with these very few rhyming words. Hats off to you Dr. Bachchan.

Finally, as I always ask, please leave your comments.
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तरह तरह के पीने वाले तरह तरह की उनकी हाला
निर्लज निर्गम निर्लाभ निर्मम हर रस का छलका प्याला
नियति के सीधे रस्तों पर भटक भटक कर चलता था
ढूँढ रहा था मैं अपना रस, मिल गयी मुझको मधुशाला||

गुस्ताखी हो जाये मुझसे माफ़ करे तो अल्लाहताला
माधुरि गूंजे नित्य ही मन मे नाम उसे मय दे डाला
भक्त निरंतर करते हैं सब अपने अपने प्रभु का जाप
अधरों पर अब नाम हमेशा, ऐसी मेरी मधुमय बाला||

लगा भक्ती मे मैं अनवरत आंखों में थी प्रेम कि ज्वाला
सुध बुध खो कर दर्द भुला कर बन बैठा मैं मतवाला
नयन मधु से मूक भाव से मॅन का आंगन सींच दिया
डरता हूँ पलक झपकी खो जायेगी मधुशाला||

आंख उठा कर देख भी लूं ग़र और दूसरी साकी बाला
सुर्मायी उन आंखों से फिर पी लूं ग़र मैं पावन हाला
मत्वालेपन की हदें अगर मैं पार करूं तो क्षमा करो
हर सूरत मे ढूँढता हूँ तो सिर्फ तुम्हें मेरी प्रियतम बाला||

मेरी साकी मुझे पिलाती जग की सबसे मादक हाला
नैनों से भारती रहती है वो तो मेरे मधु का प्याला
नित्य निरंतर पीता हूँ मैं इस उम्मीद में जीता हूँ
मृत्यु अगर मिलनी हो उससे यहीं मिलूं मैं मधुशाला||

वो भी क्या जीवन जिसमे कि छुई नहीं कभी तुमने हाला
निकट नही किया अधरों के प्रेम रस का छलका प्याला
मदिरा बिना कभी हाथ लगाए हरदम मद में रहता हूँ
सौ घूँट समेटे एक अश्क में, वो आँखें मेरी मधुशाला||

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Wo aankhen meri madhushaala


Tarah tarah ke peene waala tarah tarah ki unki haala
Nirlaj nirgam nirlabh nirmam har ras ka chalaka pyaala
Niyati ke seedhe raston par bhatak bhatak kar chalta tha
Dhoondh raha tha main apna ras, mil gayi mujhko madhushaala

Gustaakhi ho jaaye mujhse maaf kare to allahtaala
Maadhuri goonje nitya hi mann me, naam use may de daala
Bhakt nirantar japte hain sab apne apne prabhu ka jaap
Adharon par ab naam hamesha aisi meri madhumay baala

Laga bhakti me main anvarat aankhon me thi prem ki jwaala
Sudh budh kho kar dard bhula kar ban baitha main matwaalaa
Nayan madu se mook bhaav se mann ka aangan seench diya
Darta hun gar palak jhapki to kho jaayegi madhushaala

Aankh utha kar dekh bhi loon gar aur doosri saaki baala
Surmayi unn aankhon se firr pee loon gar main pavan haala
Matwaalepan ki haden agar main paar karoon to kshama karo
Harr soorat me dhoondhta hun to sirf tumhe meri priyatam baala

Meri saaki mujhe pilaati jag ki sabse maadak haala
Nayanon se bharti rehti hai wo to mere madhu ka pyala
Nitya nirantar peeta hun main iss ummeed me jeeta hun
Mrityu agar milni ho usse yahin miloon main madhushaala

Wo bhi kya jeevan jisme ki chhui nahi kabhi tumne haalaa
Nikat nahi kiya adharon ke prem ras ka chalka pyaala
Madira bina kabhi haath lagaye hardam mad me rehta hoon
Sau ghoont samete ek ashq me, wo aankhen meri madhushaala


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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2007, 07:53:58 PM »
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Moved to Kaifiyat ae Maye section.

Btw, I have gone through this poem but allow me some more time to comment upon it. Will read again then will comment !
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2007, 09:14:55 PM »
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nice sharing aryasudhanshu!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2007, 09:25:44 PM »
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Thank you Usual Smile
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