Ek Ajnabi

by subh alone on August 07, 2011, 03:31:39 PM
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Yaad agaya vo din jab mila tha mai ek ajnabi se,
hua tha sor yun is dil me us ajnabi ke liye,
kaun janta tha vo ajnbi  jindgi ban jayega meri
aur mai pyar me kho jaunga us ajnabi ke
mil gaya mujhko ek sapne ki tarah,aur dur bhi chala gaya..
Kaun tha vo, kya chahta tha? Puchna chahta tha mai.
Kyu marta tha dil itna us ajnbi ke liye
Jab ki vo door ja chuka hai meri jindgi se
kyun aaj bhi dhudta hai dil us ajnabi ko
vo tha ek ajnbi,aur chala gya ajnbi bankar
Tadap kar rah gya mai us ajnbi ke liye....subh'alone'
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2011, 06:36:40 PM »
Subh Alone jee Aadaab!

Wel come to YOINDIA .. Usual Smile
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And very nice poetry ... aik kahaani sa manzar
ubhar gaya padhte padhte... Usual Smile

Keep writting .. Keep Up:)
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2011, 10:09:24 AM »
Yaad agaya vo din jab mila tha mai ek ajnabi se,
hua tha sor yun is dil me us ajnabi ke liye,
kaun janta tha vo ajnbi  jindgi ban jayega meri
aur mai pyar me kho jaunga us ajnabi ke
mil gaya mujhko ek sapne ki tarah,aur dur bhi chala gaya..
Kaun tha vo, kya chahta tha? Puchna chahta tha mai.
Kyu marta tha dil itna us ajnbi ke liye
Jab ki vo door ja chuka hai meri jindgi se
kyun aaj bhi dhudta hai dil us ajnabi ko
vo tha ek ajnbi,aur chala gya ajnbi bankar
Tadap kar rah gya mai us ajnbi ke liye....subh'alone'

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mkv
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2011, 11:33:40 AM »
likhte lahiye...adaab
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: August 14, 2011, 10:27:03 AM »
Jo akela hota hai us ke liye har koi ajnabi hota hai
Good one
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sidh QADIAN
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2011, 03:23:51 AM »
bahut vadia veere kaim aa shayeri
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