JagaaN saarii raat photo chum-chum terii

by harashmahajan on May 07, 2008, 07:34:18 AM
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JagaaN saarii raat photo chum-chum terii
Dil dii tandaaN khol gall hoon sun tu merii.

Jii nahi lagda har pal tera  khyaal satave
Jinna main O yadaN nu hoon chun chun terii

Dass hoon  tera yaar yaarii kinj nibhave
Mere dil di jag vich  bas sun tu luteri

Lage pyas na bhukhh uddiyaN nindraN saddi
Dil ander challan yadaaN dii dhooN-dhooN hanerii.

Tere bin naseebaN ch marna v okhaa
Thhakya  rabb na thhakki gallaN sun tu merii

Uthh uthh ke ratti tennu main awajaN maraaN
Dil di ganddaN khol ke la ley kum-kum merii.


Harash©
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2008, 08:56:08 AM »
HI,HARASH....
U WRITE SO NICE....
KEEP IT UP....
NICE TO READ U....
BY. K.SHAEL
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2008, 05:30:39 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on May 08, 2008, 08:56:08 AM
HI,HARASH....
U WRITE SO NICE....
KEEP IT UP....
NICE TO READ U....
BY. K.SHAEL



aapkii pasandagii ke liye bahoot bahoot shukriyaa..K.SHAEL saheb....


Harash
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2008, 02:07:53 AM »
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Tere bin naseebaN ch marna v okhaa
Thhakya  rabb na thhakki gallaN sun tu merii

Uthh uthh ke ratti tennu main awajaN maraaN
Dil di ganddaN khol ke la ley kum-kum merii]

Wah kya baat hai Harash ji, kaash mujhe punjabi main poetic lines likhna aata.
Bahut accha laga padkar. esp the above lines.... i really loved.  love4
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syednaami
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2008, 02:55:09 AM »
Aey galaan pyar diyan galaan samjhan vi na samjhe, -
Meda yaar uthe kuchh aakhe laveriyan saasan leke, -

Jithe Maran jiyan di qasmaan nal har pal aseen chakde, -
Saada pyar kadi hanju dulle te kadi hansde. -

(Syed Naami)

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Harash Paajee, mainu jeda samjh aaya likh chhodiya, tusaan di nazm vi badi changi lagi saanu. Kithe galti vekho te dasso aseen.
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2008, 04:20:50 AM »
Quote from: Roja on May 09, 2008, 02:07:53 AM
Wah kya baat hai Harash ji, kaash mujhe punjabi main poetic lines likhna aata.
Bahut accha laga padkar. esp the above lines.... i really loved.  love4


bahoot bahoot shukriyaa Roja....

Harash
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2008, 04:22:53 AM »
waah ji waah sayednaami ji...maiN tuhadda bada hi shukergujaar haN tusi sadde thread te aaye......bahoot hi sona likhya ve je tusi..


Harash

Quote from: syednaami on May 09, 2008, 02:55:09 AM
Aey galaan pyar diyan galaan samjhan vi na samjhe, -
Meda yaar uthe kuchh aakhe laveriyan saasan leke, -

Jithe Maran jiyan di qasmaan nal har pal aseen chakde, -
Saada pyar kadi hanju dulle te kadi hansde. -

(Syed Naami)

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Harash Paajee, mainu jeda samjh aaya likh chhodiya, tusaan di nazm vi badi changi lagi saanu. Kithe galti vekho te dasso aseen.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2008, 04:42:53 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai Harsh ji..

Yeh lines bahut hi kamaal ki lagi..

"Tere bin naseebaN ch marna v okhaa
Thhakya  rabb na thhakki gallaN sun tu merii"
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Rajbir
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2008, 05:30:37 AM »
Harash bro,

Superb ! Excellent ! I could feel each and every word of the poem ! Applause

@Syed

Nice reply Applause
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2008, 08:35:49 AM »
Bada hi mashkoor haaN ji tuhadda mahiyaa ji....shukriyaa


harash

Quote from: Mahiya on May 09, 2008, 04:42:53 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai Harsh ji..

Yeh lines bahut hi kamaal ki lagi..

"Tere bin naseebaN ch marna v okhaa
Thhakya  rabb na thhakki gallaN sun tu merii"
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2008, 08:37:33 AM »
Shukriyaa raj...badi muddat baad tuhadde darshan hoye ji....rabb tuhannu sukhaN ch khidaave..



Harash

Quote from: Rajbir on May 09, 2008, 05:30:37 AM
Harash bro,

Superb ! Excellent ! I could feel each and every word of the poem ! Applause

@Syed

Nice reply Applause
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pawankumar
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«Reply #11 on: May 09, 2008, 12:04:44 PM »
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syednaami
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2008, 01:44:18 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on May 09, 2008, 04:22:53 AM
waah ji waah sayednaami ji...maiN tuhadda bada hi shukergujaar haN tusi sadde thread te aaye......bahoot hi sona likhya ve je tusi..

Harash

O jee tusaan di wadyaan wadyaan merbaanoyan jee. saadi post nun tusin jeda inaam ditta aye, dil khush kita aye, paajee.
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Sonu
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2008, 05:39:32 AM »
harash ji keya baat hai yaar bahut hi changa likhya hai... damal macha rakhiya ahi ehtye sariya ney taan...

syed ji javab nahi tuhda vi....

mahiya ji.. nice lines

dostoo keep up the wonderful work
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syednaami
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«Reply #14 on: May 16, 2008, 06:28:50 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on May 09, 2008, 05:30:37 AM

@Syed

Nice reply Applause

Chacha jee, mahrbaaniyan wadiyaan, tusseen vi great ho.

Quote from: Sonu on May 16, 2008, 05:39:32 AM
harash ji keya baat hai yaar bahut hi changa likhya hai... damal macha rakhiya ahi ehtye sariya ney taan...

syed ji javab nahi tuhda vi....

Sonu Jee, tuseen pasand kitta aye, ay vi wadi gal seen, main tuhada dil nal shukriya kenda seen.
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