Khawaaban di Tittli

by Naya_Daur on May 21, 2006, 08:07:02 AM
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Raat mere khawab vich ud.dhi rahi ek tittli si
Usnu dekheya tan jehaan te chai ek masti si

har kadam utte zaamane da vichaya jaal si
kinna chir arshan te mere khawab-0-khayal si

main te tu san do sagar de kinaare
Na koi uthe pull te na hi koi kashti si

turda reha main anjaan musafir di tarah
parchawan ban naal mere,teri arzoo si...!!!
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2006, 08:30:05 AM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: May 22, 2006, 03:06:31 PM »
very nice Jeet....

main kal raat usde baare sochdi rahi
oh aaya te aa ke chala gaya
mainu apni gall kehan da mauka vi nahi ditta
apne dil di har gall kar gaya hai
oh vi sochda hai mainu jhalliyan di tarah
eh sun ke main tan kujh bol hi nahi saki
te oh zindagi bhar mera saath nibhaan da vaada kar giya hai
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2006, 02:12:14 AM »
thanks  both of you ..
Pankhuri ji tuhannu tan punjabi aaundi hai ... pher tusi kuch kyun nahi likhde :wink:

Nikki... tusi tan har war di tarah badde sohne andaz vich likhde ho

oh vi sochda hai mainu jhalliyan di tarah
eh sun ke main tan kujh bol hi nahi saki


beautiful n temptating lines...


Raat kal Taarean nal langa litti
Intezar wich tere chann na sanjh pa litti
Tu awengi jarror ehi mann bolda reha,Channiye
Assi,Shudaiyan wang TaQdeer apni,tere naam la ditti
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2006, 04:08:30 AM »
bahoot khob niki and BD JI!!
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2006, 06:00:10 AM »
Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
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Raat mere khawab vich ud.dhi rahi ek tittli si
Usnu dekheya tan jehaan te chai ek masti si

har kadam utte zaamane da vichaya jaal si
kinna chir arshan te mere khawab-0-khayal si

main te tu san do sagar de kinaare
Na koi uthe pull te na hi koi kashti si

turda reha main anjaan musafir di tarah
parchawan ban naal mere,teri arzoo si...!!!


Twade in shabda de aggy, mera her shabd phika hai... ki jawab likha, eho hi samjh nahi aa raha!!!

khawab tera, meri haqiqat naal takraya hai
boora hua ya acha, yah khayal nahi ayya hai

Masti teri vich mai v masat ho ghuman lagi
madhoshi ka nasha, aisa tera mujh per chad ayya hai

Mil kar teri chah mai baithna acha lagta hai
tu hi mera pull, tu hi meri kashti lagta hai

Rahein yah mere liye bhi anjaan sahi
sath hai tu, to muje duniya ki koi parwaah nahi!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2006, 07:21:08 AM »
ranjitey bahut sohna likhiya hai....

niky tey Pankhuri ji tusi dova ney vi bahut sohna likhiya hai...
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2006, 01:01:42 AM »
Thanks Sonu!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2006, 05:39:35 AM »
Pankhuri ji u r most welcome... ehda hi likhde rahow

Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
Thanks Sonu!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2006, 03:23:03 PM »
khawab mera ajj haqiqat nal takra gaya
pehli rutte sawaan di,ek supana koi sajja gaya

mithi mithi kanniyan de meeh ohle
sohni-sunheri dhup de chaa thale

ek mutiyar nal do pal mohabbatan de
main vaareyan wang beeta gaya

mil ke chaaya nasha unhu ajjeha
bhuleya na bhulaya koi v bol uhda

muk uhda jhape jiwe chaan di channani
roop uhda lagge jiwe pehli dhup basant di

ankhan vich chamak,bhulan vich masti da hungara
jhaanjhar de mithe bol,koke da painda lishkara

JEET aaj jiwe ,kisse hoor-pari nal takra gaya
pehli rutte saawan di,ek supana koi sajja gaya...
!!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2006, 04:53:36 AM »
Ranjitey bahut sohan likhiyaa hia...

ek cheez ton begar koye mang koye na
sohney ranjey vi ney per assa nu pasand koye na
roti pani bhave kise tame mile na mile
ohnu dekhey bina langhey mera tame koye na
jee kita rus gaye te jee kita bool paye
eh tan dosti nibhaun wala dhang koyi na
kine cherey kine naam yaadan which utrey
satch pusho kise naal hun koye sabandh koyi na
dil thodne wale te koye kase(case) ho sake
Sonu es da koyi hale parbandh koyi na.....

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Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
khawab mera ajj haqiqat nal takra gaya
pehli rutte sawaan di,ek supana koi sajja gaya

mithi mithi kanniyan de meeh ohle
sohni-sunheri dhup de chaa thale

ek mutiyar nal do pal mohabbatan de
main vaareyan wang beeta gaya

mil ke chaaya nasha unhu ajjeha
bhuleya na bhulaya koi v bol uhda

muk uhda jhape jiwe chaan di channani
roop uhda lagge jiwe pehli dhup basant di

ankhan vich chamak,bhulan vich masti da hungara
jhaanjhar de mithe bol,koke da painda lishkara

JEET aaj jiwe ,kisse hoor-pari nal takra gaya
pehli rutte saawan di,ek supana koi sajja gaya...
!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2006, 04:10:34 AM »
Thanks Sonu :D
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Style_guru
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2006, 02:26:42 PM »
The Style Guru Says.......


Too gud Bro!!!!


Kade rehnde c oh kol saade,
Ajj door kitte vasde ne,
Chale gaye saadi zindagi cho,
Dil vich hun v hasde ne,
Saade dukhan de geetan nu,
Oh sheir he dasde ne,
Asi dasiya haal tutte dil da,
Loki wah wah kar ke hasde ne........
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nikki
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2006, 04:42:13 PM »
too good all of u...n thanx Jeet

ajj fer mere khyalan di tittli kise umeed de phul te ja baithi hai
khushboo laban di koshish kardi hai
te uljhana ch pai jaandi hai
eh kiho jiha sohna phul hai jiste aa baithi hai

eh pyar da khidiya guldasta hai
jis vich aneka tarah de rang ne
par kande vi ne intzaar de
jehda koi pyar pa lainde
duniya vale usnu tahne vi ne maarde
par laggi valiya kade parvah nahi kitti
oh kadon ne duniya ton haarde
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2006, 04:54:04 PM »
good job Jeet, Sonu , style guru and niki......
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