~kismat~

by Naya_Daur on February 04, 2006, 07:06:41 PM
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Sonu
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«Reply #15 on: February 18, 2006, 03:07:17 AM »
mehrbavi jeet... thanks

asi ishq vech pagel huye teyrey
hun keo puch da hai key rata no keo nahi soye
dil khoon dey hanjoo bahanda hai jado dey sajna sadey to door huye.
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #16 on: February 27, 2006, 09:20:17 AM »
assi akhan ch raatan langande rahe
har sah nal tenu bhulaande rahe

puch le ja ke kalle kalle tarre nu
assi yaadan teriyan ch motiyan warge  hanju bahande rahe
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Sonu
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«Reply #17 on: February 28, 2006, 04:58:04 AM »
wonderful ranjit...

jeena chahundi haan per teyrey gam vech thudi asi pee vi nahi sakdey
her pel taan ahundi yaad teyri saadgi asi jee vi nai sakdey...



Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
assi akhan ch raatan langande rahe
har sah nal tenu bhulaande rahe

puch le ja ke kalle kalle tarre nu
assi yaadan teriyan ch motiyan warge  hanju bahande rahe
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nikki
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«Reply #18 on: February 28, 2006, 05:05:43 PM »
very nice both of u...

vaar mohabbat de teer da khali nahi jaanda
je hanju bahande ho tussi raata nu
tan khushk(dry) akhan naal din oh vi nahi laganda
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Sonu
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«Reply #19 on: March 01, 2006, 04:02:15 AM »
thanks nikki ji... wonderfull yaar..
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #20 on: March 01, 2006, 12:40:46 PM »
Duniyadari di bhukh ch na guvach manaa,
 eh mela 4 dina da akhir muk jana...
Tusi chan vang ambran ch raho vasde,
sada tarian da ki e kadon tut jana..(nm)

Quote from: "nikki"
very nice both of you...

vaar mohabbat de teer da khali nahi jaanda
je hanju bahande ho tussi raata nu
tan khushk(dry) akhan naal din oh vi nahi laganda


nikki ji jadon v likde ho , kamaal da likhde ho
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nikki
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«Reply #21 on: March 01, 2006, 08:34:00 PM »
Thanx Jeet n very nice again....

shikwe kardiya zindagi mukk jaani
sadiyan sadran rehniya sada adhuriyan ne

chah ke vi assin mil na paye
eh kismat diyan majboriyan ne
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Sonu
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«Reply #22 on: March 02, 2006, 04:51:39 AM »
ranjitey tey nikki bahut vadiyaa...
doveyaan ney kamal kerta...
veychrey sedey sadey bandey  di dhuti no phad key romal kerta...


kehndey waqt tan keyta
na sochya na samjhiyaa sanu
akeley-pan da deykey sanu tofa
vekha taa meyra tuta dil sariyaan no
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Pooja
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«Reply #23 on: March 04, 2006, 02:13:29 PM »
Jeet, nikki and Sonu bahoot hi acha likha hai app sabne...

Nikki aor Jeet ki shayari ki gaharai yahan parane ko milli hai.....bahoot hi acha likha hai.....Keet it up.
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #24 on: March 04, 2006, 05:28:12 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Jeet, nikki and Sonu bahoot hi acha likha hai app sabne...

Nikki aor Jeet ki shayari ki gaharai yahan parane ko milli hai.....bahoot hi acha likha hai.....Keet it up.


thnks pooja for appreciating,,
eh tan Sonu te Nikki ji hi ne,, jo vadhiya likhde ne,, main tan inha dowan de nal mashoor ho gaya han
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Sonu
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«Reply #25 on: March 05, 2006, 04:30:47 AM »
pooja ji bahut bahut shukriyaa... app bhi bahut acha likhti hia...

Quote from: "Pooja"
Jeet, nikki and Sonu bahoot hi acha likha hai app sabne...

Nikki aor Jeet ki shayari ki gaharai yahan parane ko milli hai.....bahoot hi acha likha hai.....Keet it up.
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Sonu
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«Reply #26 on: March 05, 2006, 04:38:06 AM »
pooja ji jeet da thuda jaa demag kesak gaya hai keo ki uskey ser per thudey juey jada hu gayee hia na to usko peta he nahi legta hia key vo keya likhta hai or jub kuch samjh mey na ahye to dusrey key ser per apni bat thup deyta hai....

changa bhala likhda hia tey kheynda hia key mey tan nikki ney ehnu mashoor kerta... veysey jeydey pagela dey rajey hundey ney ohna noo luki taan apey hi mashoor kerdeyndey keo ranjitey.... :lol:  :lol:  :lol: keo ki una di shiyanap luka tak pahuch key char chand jo la deyndi hia



Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "Pooja"
Jeet, nikki and Sonu bahoot hi acha likha hai app sabne...

Nikki aor Jeet ki shayari ki gaharai yahan parane ko milli hai.....bahoot hi acha likha hai.....Keet it up.


thnks pooja for appreciating,,
eh tan Sonu te Nikki ji hi ne,, jo vadhiya likhde ne,, main tan inha dowan de nal mashoor ho gaya han
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #27 on: March 05, 2006, 04:47:07 AM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
veysey jeydey pagela dey rajey hundey ney ohna noo luki taan apey hi mashoor kerdeyndey keo ranjitey.... :lol:  :lol:  :lol:


sonu,, tusi mere bhet kholi jaande ho   :evil:  :evil:  :evil:
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Sonu
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«Reply #28 on: March 05, 2006, 05:04:19 AM »
oh hoo galti hu gayee per meynu bheyd khulen di lud nahi sara no peta leg hi gaya huna hun taan key sarey pechey hat jow pagal da raja ah rahiya hia
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #29 on: March 05, 2006, 05:19:37 AM »
changi gal hai sonu,, kar lo makaul,,, :wink:

Akhaan de naal na maar mainu,
eh taan dasdi mera kasoor ki hai.

Ya taan pyaar kar laendi  ya katal kar dendi
kuch tan dasi dohaan cho uhnu manzoor ki hai?
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