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by Naya_Daur on February 04, 2006, 07:06:41 PM
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Sonu
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«Reply #30 on: March 05, 2006, 05:28:09 AM »
mmm Usual Smile na mey na makhul kro tey phir kon kro gavandi thuda na krengey hoon...

ahkhaan das deyndiyaan mey dil di gala
key rati su nahi sakiya
yaad ohdi ahundi rahi sari raat jagdi di rahi batiyaan


Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
changi gal hai sonu,, kar lo makaul,,, :wink:

Akhaan de naal na maareya mainu,
eh taan dasdi mera kasoor ki hai.

Ya taan pyaar kar laendi  ya katal kar dendi
kuch tan dasi dohaan cho uhnu manzoor ki hai?
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nikki
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«Reply #31 on: March 06, 2006, 08:41:23 AM »
Thanx a lot Pooja sis...n Jeet aapse inspire ho kar to maine likhna seekha hai.

tuhadiya raata jaag ke langdiya ne
te din udaas guzarda hai......
je ohnu iss gal da ehsaas hunda
tan dil tod-di kyon
pata hunda agar tuhade dil je zakhma da
tan ohna nu ched-di kyon
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #32 on: March 06, 2006, 09:46:15 AM »
Main akhan ch langai sarri raat,
Mainu Neend na aayi saari raat,
Moti Hanjuan te Main tolda reha,
Kitti eh kamai main saari raat,

Mass hadiyan ch main nochda reha
Mainu teri yaad ne sataya saari raat
Main akhan ch langai sarri raat,
Mainu Neend na aayi saari raat

Quote from: "Sonu"
mmm Usual Smile na mey na makhul kro tey phir kon kro gavandi thuda na krengey hoon...

ahkhaan das deyndiyaan mey dil di gala
key rati su nahi sakiya
yaad ohdi ahundi rahi sari raat jagdi di rahi batiyaan


Tuhaada tan haq hai ji,, jiwe margi makaul kar lo,, tuhannu kaun rok sakda
shair bhut hi vadiya likheya hai
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #33 on: March 06, 2006, 10:07:20 AM »

Je hanju pani hunde
tan main raud denda,

Je Pyar koi karza hunda
tan main maud denda

Kash Uhne V samjheya hunda,
Mera Dil hai Sheesha nahi
Jo dil kita te taud dita...


Quote from: "nikki"

tuhadiya raata jaag ke langdiya ne
te din udaas guzarda hai......
je ohnu iss gal da ehsaas hunda
tan dil tod-di kyon
pata hunda agar tuhade dil je zakhma da
tan ohna nu ched-di kyon
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #34 on: March 06, 2006, 10:10:55 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
...n Jeet aapse inspire ho kar to maine likhna seekha hai.


nikKi eh sab ki hai,, Mainu app tan teek tarah likhna nahi aaunda,, main kisse nu ki Inspire karna hai???

lagda tusi V es POOJA diyan gallan ch aagaye,, Pooja nu tan aadat hai , ewein tareef karn di  :evil:
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nikki
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«Reply #35 on: March 06, 2006, 10:50:49 AM »
hainnn...

tussi gussa na khaya karo
dostan da kum hunda tareef karna
tussi bas sunde jaya karo...
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Sonu
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«Reply #36 on: March 07, 2006, 04:34:41 AM »
rati hundi hai soun vastey asi nenga deti jag key
moti ahkaan vechi gavatey teyri udek tey
jeydi kamay si sadi umer bhar di
asi rol deyti teyri judayee tey...

teyri yaadaan ney sada ghar vasaya si
teyri majudgi vech langey din raat si
teyri judayaan ney sanu roltaa
hanjoya nal likhi si jo dastaan
oh teyri yadaan dey jhurukey vech rolta...

acha ji meharbani sanu izazat deyti makhul karen di...mm thik hai hoon taan puri chut hai makhul karendi phir bach naa kheyna... sonu keo bachey di jaan kad-di paye hia

thanks... tusi vi bahut vadiya likhiya hai...


Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Main akhan ch langai sarri raat,
Mainu Neend na aayi saari raat,
Moti Hanjuan te Main tolda reha,
Kitti eh kamai main saari raat,

Mass hadiyan ch main nochda reha
Mainu teri yaad ne sataya saari raat
Main akhan ch langai sarri raat,
Mainu Neend na aayi saari raat

Quote from: "Sonu"
mmm Usual Smile na mey na makhul kro tey phir kon kro gavandi thuda na krengey hoon...

ahkhaan das deyndiyaan mey dil di gala
key rati su nahi sakiya
yaad ohdi ahundi rahi sari raat jagdi di rahi batiyaan


Tuhaada tan haq hai ji,, jiwe margi makaul kar lo,, tuhannu kaun rok sakda
shair bhut hi vadiya likheya hai
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Sonu
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«Reply #37 on: March 07, 2006, 04:36:33 AM »
jeet ... nikki ji... wonderful...

jeet pooja ji ney sahi keya key tusi suna likhdey heygey hu.. tarif ohdi hi keti jandi hai jeyda changa likhda hia...

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "nikki"
...n Jeet aapse inspire ho kar to maine likhna seekha hai.


nikKi eh sab ki hai,, Mainu app tan teek tarah likhna nahi aaunda,, main kisse nu ki Inspire karna hai???

lagda tusi V es POOJA diyan gallan ch aagaye,, Pooja nu tan aadat hai , ewein tareef karn di  :evil:
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #38 on: March 07, 2006, 06:50:50 PM »
Quote from: "nikki"
hainnn...

tussi gussa na khaya karo
dostan da kum hunda tareef karna
tussi bas sunde jaya karo...


nice one nikki:D

n thanks SONU for appreciating
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Sonu
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«Reply #39 on: March 09, 2006, 03:37:43 AM »
u r welcome ranjitey...  

Quote from: "burniing_desiires"
Quote from: "nikki"
hainnn...

tussi gussa na khaya karo
dostan da kum hunda tareef karna
tussi bas sunde jaya karo...


nice one nikki:D

n thanks SONU for appreciating
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nikki
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«Reply #40 on: March 25, 2006, 03:10:26 PM »
Thanx Jeet n Sonu..

je meri kismat changi hundi tan oh mainu mil jaanda
main vi pyar ch geet likhdi...te oh mainu apne sher padh ke sunada
shayad eh rab nu manzoor nahi si
assin tan dono chalde rahe ikathe rahan te
saada tan koi kasoor nahi si
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Sonu
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«Reply #41 on: March 25, 2006, 10:45:56 PM »
Your welcome Nikki...

eh khail ney sarey rab dey rachey huye
kesey nu dukh tey kesey nu sukh deynada hia
kasoor sara apney dila da hai jeyda kadi dhup tey kadey chav veykhda hia
nahi sochda jado pyar vech peyndha hia
ki chnaga tey ki mada hai oh taan bus dil di gal nu hi manda hai...

 
Quote from: "nikki"
Thanx Jeet n Sonu..

je meri kismat changi hundi tan oh mainu mil jaanda
main vi pyar ch geet likhdi...te oh mainu apne sher padh ke sunada
shayad eh rab nu manzoor nahi si
assin tan dono chalde rahe ikathe rahan te
saada tan koi kasoor nahi si
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nikki
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«Reply #42 on: March 25, 2006, 10:56:21 PM »
thanx once again Sonu n very well said...so true..n nice..

chalo jo usne likhe ne oh vi maan lawange
par yaar di bewafayi maar davegi
je ohne pyar de badle pyar na ditta
tan saanu tan usdi judayi maar davegi

hun ho ke jhalli pyar ch
ikaliyan riha nahi jaanda
kivein samjhavan uss nadaan nu
jo sabb kujh jaanke vi kujh vi samajhna nahi chahunda
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Sonu
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«Reply #43 on: March 25, 2006, 11:02:11 PM »
Nikki thanks... wonderful ... bahut sohna likha hia nikkyeh...

rab dey baney nu asi men key jindgi gujari vey
dil tey likhi si jeydi khani hanjuya nal mitani vey
hun sanu milan daa chaa reh gaya bus usnu
jindgi dey vekhney hun nazarey ney
oh ahvey yea na ahvey hun bus dila dey chaa laney ney..

Quote from: "nikki"
thanx once again Sonu n very well said...so true..n nice..

chalo jo usne likhe ne oh vi maan lawange
par yaar di bewafayi maar davegi
je ohne pyar de badle pyar na ditta
tan saanu tan usdi judayi maar davegi

hun ho ke jhalli pyar ch
ikaliyan riha nahi jaanda
kivein samjhavan uss nadaan nu
jo sabb kujh jaanke vi kujh vi samajhna nahi chahunda
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nikki
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«Reply #44 on: March 25, 2006, 11:09:12 PM »
superbbb Sonu...bahut vadhiya likhiya tussi...

eh chaa dil vich hi mukk jaane
je oh aaya na

saadiyan sadhran te paani fir jaane
je ussne apna banaya na

main kismat nu dosh vi nahi de sakna
je usne apne muhon keh ke sunaya na..

je hai pyar tan aake keh jaave
kite awen na nikki usdi rah takdi reh jaave

fer na akhin dasiya nahi si
maran ton pehlan mera rah takiya nahi si
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