````Pyar Di vanjali````

by Naya_Daur on March 17, 2006, 04:50:51 PM
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Naya_Daur
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Ek main howa,Ek tu howe
Kidre door jaun da mera jee karda

teriya khulle zulfan de naag
mere muh uthe kundli maar baithe hon
tere pat de sirhanne sau ke
tere supna laen da mera jee karda

tere surkh bulan nu main taki jawa
Is de nasheele rass da main anand maana
tu mere seene lag  shrmaundi howe
tenu gal la ke,ajj duniya bhulaun da mera jee karda

Assi ek duje nu bas takde hoyie
kisse hor di na koi pher hosh rawe
Ajj teriyan akhan ch akhan pa ke
pyar di vanjali vajaun da mera jee karda...!!!


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xxxxx ajj apne hosh gawaye
 JEET jad   pyaar di vanjali vajaye
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xxxxx-her name
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2006, 06:39:29 PM »
Jeet maine pahli baar koshish ki hai Punjabi mai likhane ki, apki shayri se shabd chura rahi hu,  shayad pasand aye apko:

Le chal mitra, ajj tere hawale khud nu kita
Ghair ke julfo mai tujko, ajj payaar da hanera kitta

Gudguddi tan de her ang nu siharan de jandi hai
Jad v tu bulan nu, mere pet de naal, thirkan dita

Kanpkapaty lub aor bikharti yah saanse
Jud v mere chahre nu, tu apne hatha vich lita

Parr di thundi chah, aor pahlu  mai tum ho sanam
Tere payaar di vanjali ch kho jaane da jee hai karda!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2006, 06:53:33 PM »


duniya toh kidre uhla karke,
tere layi ek swarg banawa

bas teri yaadan di khusboo howe har passe
main baaghi te tu phull ban jawe

meriyan khushian tenu lag jaan
te tere athroo mere ban jawe

Ajj JEET aaisi vanjali vajawe
tere dukhan de sagar saare,
uhnu lag jawe...!!!


bhut sohna likheya hai,, Pooja,, very nice,,!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2006, 07:04:36 PM »
Shukariyan!!! Abhi to bakiyion ne nahi parri… pata hai Veer ji ne parr kar hansna hai  :evil:

Magar mai bhi pichy hutne wali nahi.. :lol:  ek koshish aor: :oops:

aise vanjali vajaan di koi lorr nai
kar ke gla dukhain di, dil torr nai

teri bahon mai sawrg sara hai
meet mere tu dil da barra hi payaara hai

hanju kadi v teri ankh to na aye
teri her musibat, mere bhaga (kismat) nu lag jaaye

sunadi rahan bas ek mai tanu, sari duniya du bhulaye
dorri aau main tere pass, jab bhi tu yah vanjali vajaye!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2006, 07:15:56 PM »
je 2 post hor kar dittiyan ,pooja,,tusi tan punjab de ranjhean nu agg la deni aa,, :wink:

rajbir bhaji di chinta na karo,, uh is section vich nahi aaunde


Main ranjha tera Jogi,
tere pyaar de naashe vich doobeya han

Tu je sukhi hain tan main sukhi
Nahi tan zindagi toh main russeya han

Na kar gallan Jhalliyan wali
Teri preetan de vich main baajeyan han

Meri vanjali vajdi hai sirf tere waaste
tere har sukh dukh nal main vasseya han

main ranjha tera jogi
tere pyaar de nasheyan ch doobeyan han...!!!



preetan  de vich baajeyan = bonds of love with you
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Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2006, 07:18:43 PM »
Pooja ate Jeet

Bahut vadiya likhiya e !

Pooja darr nai te khul ke likh jeeven dujiyan nu hosla dindi hain !

Bahut vadiya koshish hai :D

Tuhade dona da Veer
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2006, 07:23:45 PM »
Quote from: "Rajbir"
Pooja ate Jeet

Bahut vadiya likhiya e !

Pooja darr nai te khul ke likh jeeven dujiyan nu hosla dindi hain !

Bahut vadiya koshish hai :D

Tuhade dona da Veer


bhajji,,tusi,, punjabi section,, KAMAL HO GAYI AJJ TAN,, tusi kiwe ajj edar da rah bhul gaye  :lol:
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2006, 07:28:18 PM »
Tusi torch jalayi...asi tuhade piche piche aa gaye :D
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2006, 07:32:26 PM »
ha ha :D ,, jaddon da forum baneya,,uddon di ithe aag layi aa,, lagda usse agg di garmi aaj tuhaade kol poonchi aa,, torch da tan ehwein bahana jeha maarde tusi Puzzled !
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2006, 07:36:34 PM »
Thanks Veer ji, apki hi wait thi…koshish ki hai aor kar rahi hu… kaya karu adat se majboor hu  :oops:

Jeet app aise hi jhoothi tareef na kare, pata hai kitani achi Punjabi likh rahi hu… wahan baithy hans rahe hogy meri Punjabi per :oops:  Puzzled !  :

Mai heer teri ranjhna, dil tere aggy haar baithy
To preeta di vajan lagya vanjali, mai ta tan man nissar kar bathy

Sun ke tere dil di gla, khushi de hanju nikal gaye
Mai tere waste pagal, te is jhalli de bhag khul gaye

Teri vanjali te rahe haq mera, aor koi hun chah nahi
Le chal manu apni galiyan vich, hor meri hum koi chah nahi!!!
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Rajbir
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2006, 07:44:18 PM »
Wah Pooja

Bahut vadiya likhan lag payi e punjabi vich.
Dekhin kitte hindi ch likhna na bhul javeen :D

Veer
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2006, 07:56:50 PM »
arre nahi pooja,, jo tuhaadi poetry di theme hai,, uh bhut nice hundi hai,, awein awwa tawwa na bholi jao (awaa tawaa da meaning je nahi paata tan rajbir kolo pucho,,kam lao bhaji nu v thora jeha,,JK bhajji, GOOD NIGHT)

Har kadam de rah vich bhawein haneere hon ge
jad turreingi tu nal mere,nal saade channan baithere honge
je hoyi wakaaf hawa,uchi udaari maarange
toofan na rishte,saade pakereye honge
jugnu wang main chamka ga tere layi saari raat
jholi vich tere sajjre saveere hon ge...!!!


channan-roshni,light
pakereye-majboot,strong
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: March 17, 2006, 08:06:19 PM »
manu pata hai means blah blah blah he he he…aise waise hi na bolu… chalo ji app soye hume Punjabi ke cocin de kar… ab hum kaha jaaye  Puzzled !

hath vich tere hath, manu kisi di ki parwaah
ghana hove jina v hanera, manu ta teri bahon ki chah

chorra tera yah seena, her andhi se lega muje bacha
kaise v hun haneri aavein, manu koi sakda ni hun hatta

teri preet de rang vich rang ke, pata nai likhdi jaandi hu mai kaya
raat ho gai bahoot hi jayada, jakar ab chat per tu so ja!!!


Chungi raat te sawer wasty shubh subah!!!!
 :D
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2006, 08:21:48 PM »
ha ha,, :D,, last wali lines hun mainu saun kithe den giyan,,
je ithe dil nahi lagda tan tusi hun mere supne ch aajayio,, uthe baith ke punjabi ujjardan ,,matlab sawaarange
:D
GOOD BYE
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: March 17, 2006, 08:59:57 PM »
asli baat aa gai na juban per  :cry:
awain jhooth mooth nu likhi ja rahe se ki chunga likh rahi hu  :evil:
ajj hun kale e sowo , koi ni anna mai v supnaya vich... :evil:
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