Tallissam

by inderjit nandan on January 27, 2010, 09:19:21 AM
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Tallissam
Inderjit Nandan

Teri mohabbat da
eh keha Tallissam
ae nannhi jadugarni
k har gardan(neck) uppar
tera hi chehra ugg aya...

birkhan(Trees)wang
ek tha kharha(standing)
main tenu takkda
tere ch hi gwach janda
Tallissam tod da
sadhna ch leen hunda
Tappasseya karda
smadhi ch lehnda...

Dheyan dhardeyan
tu parvesh kardi mere ander
akkhan (eyes) kholda
terian nazran rahin takda
tere kanni sunda
tera hasa hassda
mera badan(body) tera
libas ban janda
puri di puri nu
antreev ch mehsusda
tere mohabbati tallissam ch
main shunya(Zero) ho janda
ae nannhi jadugarni...

Dheyan mudra ch bethe
Hey Rikhiwar!
eh tallissam nahi
pyar di oh intha
jad jisam nir vajud ho jan
hawa ban
sahan (Breath) ch leh jan
ptase wang
ander ghul jan...

Eh kavita da chamatkar
tu ehda sirjanhaar
shabda da sansar
ehsasan(Feelings) da shumar
k terian rgan(veins) ch
eh turdi jaye
vehndi jaye
Tu kavita nu hi
jadugarni akkhi jaye...
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2010, 10:33:25 AM »
sohne andaz ch likhya hai tussi nandan ji....bahut vadhiya...inj hi likhde rahiye... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2010, 11:55:46 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Inderjit ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2010, 10:50:15 AM »
Nice Inderjeet JI
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