Tanhai

by Brijinder on June 11, 2009, 02:00:06 AM
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Tanhai

MaiN har chehray choN jay labhda haaN kuch
TaaN eh meri aawargi nahiN
Eh bhaal hai meray tassawar di moorat nuN-
ZiNdagi di bheer choN labhan di
JiuN JiuN maiN umar day meel-pathar laNgda haaN
UdaasiaN da registaan dil atay
Ahsaasaan tay hor vi taari hoi jaaNda hai
MaiN shayad oh saraapi roo h haaN-
JazbiaN da oh surajmukhi phul
Suraj jis toN akh churai hai
Atay jisnay suraj labhan di khatir-
DiviaaN vich vi jhaati laayi hai
Har chehra ik umeed daiN da hai-
Apnay pyaar nu labhan di
Har chehra suraj da bhulekha huNda hai
Par phair jad oh chehra vi-
Hor chehriaN varga nazar aunda hai
Udaasi da ik hor teela dil tay vadh jaaNda hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2009, 02:09:05 AM »
GUD BRIJINDER,AM SHABANA,FIJI
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«Reply #2 on: June 11, 2009, 02:11:35 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Brijinder ji..

Bahut Vadhiya Likheya Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 11, 2009, 06:27:37 AM »
It is great to know that Indians in Fiji do read punjabi poetry.Thanks a lot Shab n Khwaish for the kind words of apprecition.
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2009, 06:38:49 AM »
very nice and beautiful creation Brij ji. Applause Applause Applause
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shab
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2009, 05:37:33 AM »
BAHUT ACHCHA LIKHTE HAI AAP
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ek13fakir
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 10:36:58 AM »
 :tearyeyed:Wasl Ka Sukoon Kya Hai, Hijr Ka Junoon Kya Hai, Husn Ka Fusoon Kya Hai, Ishq Ke Daroon Kya Hai
Tum Mareez-E-Danai Maslihat Ke Shaydai Raah-E-Gumrahan Kya Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron

Zakhm Kaisay Phaltay Hein Daagh Kaisay Jaltay Hein Dard Kaisay Hota Hai Koi Kaisay Rota Hai
Ashq Kia Hai Nalay Kia Dasht Kia Hai Chalay Kia Aah Kia Fughaan Kya Hai, Tum Na Jaan Pao Gay
Sheher Ke Dukandaron, Sheher Ke Dukandaron
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pandit
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2009, 12:28:46 PM »
again gud one fakir je
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Brijinder
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2009, 09:45:04 PM »
thanks a lot
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 10:15:07 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Brijinder ji..
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