tere ditte dukh sab seh laine.....:(

by chahal_sanjeev on March 23, 2008, 03:45:29 PM
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tere ditte dukh sab seh laine
jithey enne sahey ,do hor koi na,
asin karde c dilon tenu pyaar kude,
par tu eh jaan k v sadi hoi na,
shayad teri v koi majboori c
meri akh bhari c ,par tu roi na,
main tan adiye ,jeonda hi mar giya,
koi hor c tere layi ,taan hee tu moi na,
sada haal tu os garib jiha kita bekadre,
jihde kol thandd vich v loi na,
tu tan befikar hoke sutti howengi,
sanu puch jihna koi raat soi na,
tu chad gayi sanu ,chalo koi gall ni,
asin v dubaara pyar paya koi na,
jithey reh ,wasdi reh ,ehi mangde rabb kolo,
hor rab ton sadi dua koi na.....!
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2008, 03:48:20 PM »
bahut khooob...bahut acha likhde ho bro tussi...great one!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2008, 04:04:23 PM »
thanx khwahish
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2008, 04:09:45 PM »
Sanjeev

Nice sharing. Please write NM (Not Mine), if it is not your original creation.
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2008, 04:19:13 PM »
ok rajbir..thanx
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