**THOKARAN**

by neer on June 20, 2006, 01:58:14 PM
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neer
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kade wich mittran de beh ke,
  tu siftan meriyan karda si,
  ajj jaan lain nu firda ae,
  kade sade utte marda si,
  oh vela chete karke ve,
  tu phir socha wich khovenga,
  kade yaad saadi vi aavegi,
  tu aakhiya bhar bhar rovenga.......


    neer
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neer
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2006, 02:12:06 PM »
NAZAR ANDAAZ WO HUMEIN KIYE JA RAHE HAIN
  HUM UNKA HAR SITAM DIL PE LIYE JA RAHE HAIN
  PATA NAHI KYUN YAAD AATEIN HAIN WO HI
  JO HUMKO ZAKHAM PE ZAKHAM DIYE JA RAHE HAIN.
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2006, 02:17:34 PM »
too good Neer...bahut hi pyara likhiya..

oh khush hai tan koi dukh nahi
saade hisse thokran vi aayiya tan seh lawange
oh duniya waliya di bheed ch hasda rahe
assin kale beh ke ro-lange

usdi zindagi bas jaye kise de pyar naal
assin kakh barbadiya de rolange
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neer
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2006, 02:19:47 PM »
NA KHUDA MAAN KE BAITHE HAIN JINKI KASHTI MEIN
  WOH HUMEIN MAUJOO MEIN LAYEIN HAIN DUBONE KE LIYE
  WOH HAWAON KI TARAH RUKH BADAL LETE HAIN
  HUM NASEEBO SE LADE THAE JINHE PANE KE LIYE........
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neer
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2006, 02:20:52 PM »
HEY THANKS NIKKI
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA TOHANU PASAND AAYEYA
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harshmeet
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2006, 02:25:17 PM »
oh khush rawan bas,
asi gham ich zindagi guzaar lawange...
unhaa noo na lage koi thokhar zindagi which,
asi thokaraan noo apni zindagi bana lawaange!!!!

great work...
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Sonu
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2006, 08:10:20 AM »
neer... niky... tey harshmeet ji sariya ney bahut sohna likhya hia... good work everyone....
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