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by sumir on December 01, 2009, 07:47:34 AM
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jindgi tarsa rhi ae,tere hor kareeb lea rhi ae,nhi chahndi hor chahna tenu,mehram dil da bna rhi ae,ik vaar mil jayen dua ho gyi roj di, mera ho jayen hasrat ho gyi ,pyaar lyi taras gyi haan, ik yaar lyi tars gyi haan, teri hon nu reh gyi haan,aapa khon nu reh gyi haan,kaash tenu v kde ehsaas hove , dil vich tere v aas hove, ehi duavaan mangdi jindgi khatam ho rhi ae,tenu sochdeaan soch v khatam ho rhi ae,haan meri hond khatam ho rhi ae, meri atma marr rhi ae, til til marr rhi ae, fir v yaad tenu hi kar rhi ae tenu hi kar rhi ae..........................................
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2009, 03:45:14 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
sumir ji bahut hi vadiya likheya hai..... te ese nu hi 2-2 line bana k likho hor vadiya lagega.
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2009, 07:31:44 AM »
thx fr ur suggestion.
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2009, 09:36:15 AM »
jindgi tarsa rhi ae,
tere hor kareeb lea rhi ae,
nhi chahndi hor chahna tenu,
mehram dil da bna rhi ae,
ik vaar mil jayen dua ho gyi roj di,
mera ho jayen hasrat ho gyi ,
pyaar lyi taras gyi haan,
ik yaar lyi tars gyi haan,
teri hon nu reh gyi haan,
aapa khon nu reh gyi haan,
kaash tenu v kde ehsaas hove ,
dil vich tere v aas hove,
ehi duavaan mangdi jindgi khatam ho rhi ae,
tenu sochdeaan soch v khatam ho rhi ae,
haan meri hond khatam ho rhi ae,
meri atma marr rhi ae,
til til marr rhi ae,
fir v yaad tenu hi kar rhi ae
tenu hi kar rhi ae ..........................................

NICE ONE SUMIR JI
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