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akhian ne jhari la laee, fir yaad sajjan di aa gyii,jee lainde bedarda inj yaad na aa, supne vich hi shi mera ho k aa, taang aa vekhan di, nazar bnke aa, jive sadi koi aundi hai, yug jive aunda hai, meri jindgi ch aa, baag ta vekhe hone bthere sjna, aj mere maaruthal ch aa, dil mere vich aa , dil mere vich aa.
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 10:14:20 AM »
Bahut khoob Sumir ji very beautiful creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 12:17:02 PM »
aise hi likhte rahiye thumbsup
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 12:32:38 PM »
ki gal hai sumir ji tusi te chha gaye..bahut hi vadiya likheya hai tusi..mind blowing....Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2009, 03:23:54 AM »
aise hi likhte rahiye thumbsup
Bahut khoob Sumir ji very beautiful creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley.
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2009, 03:35:38 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2009, 03:36:25 AM »
ki gal hai sumir ji tusi te chha gaye..bahut hi vadiya likheya hai tusi..mind blowing....Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 18, 2010, 02:53:42 AM »
akhian ne jhari la laee,
 fir yaad sajjan di aa gyii,
jee lainde bedarda inj yaad na aa,
 supne vich hi shi mera ho k aa,
 taang aa vekhan di,
 nazar bnke aa, 
jive sadi koi aundi hai,
 yug jive aunda hai,
 meri jindgi ch aa,
 baag ta vekhe hone bthere sjna,
 aj mere maaruthal ch aa,
 dil mere vich aa , 
dil mere vich aa.
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