aaam ka qatl...A.B

by adil bechain on June 10, 2012, 09:40:51 AM
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                   huaa qatl-e-aaaam, gutliyaan bachch gayeen..,
                   qatl-e-qalam mein  ungliyaan bachch gayeen..,

                   kah  kar  aawaara  kuttey  maar  diya  sabko,
                   gharo.n mein bewafaa billiyaan bachch gayeen,

                   ek   to   zimmedaari,  uspe  menhgaai  ka  bojh,
                   jism  mein  apne  jhilliyaan   bachch  gayeen,

                   zarurat   insaan  ko  le jaaye  kahaan -kahaan,
                   mohalley  mein  sunsaan galiyaan bachch gayeen,

                   jalaa   diya   gulshan   dushmano.n   ne  mere,
                   rothi   hui  buss   titliyaan   bachch  gayeen,

                   jali    biwi    meri,  saazish   ki   aag   mein,
                   shaatir  sabhi  uski  saheliyaan  bachch gayeen.
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«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2012, 09:48:57 AM »
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adil bhaai bahut khoob aakheer ke sher men doosree line men uskee kee jagah agar meree aaye to baat bane. bahut bahut mubarak baad au dher saaree daad
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«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2012, 09:49:39 AM »
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kya kahun sir...... koi shabd he nahi chode apne
bs rau dena chahunga dil se....

vese to sare sher nagene hai par 1st 2nd or 5th to dil ko chu gaye ...
man kar rha hai bar-bar  padun
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«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2012, 10:27:07 AM »
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Adil saheb , Bahut bahut bahut khubsurat kalaam hai .
Jitni  mubarakbaad  doon kam  hai . Ye  kalaam  kisi
Rau ka  mohtaaj  nahi . Na Rau ki haqeeqat mujhe abhi
tak samajh mein aayi hai . Lekin Rau  eik dastoor banta
jaa raha hai . Sirf is liye 1 Rau bhi pesh kar raha hoon .
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«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2012, 03:37:38 AM »
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vaah vaah jee
Vaah vaah
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«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2012, 05:57:58 PM »
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bechain Sahaab Aadaab O Salaam !


Masha Allaah janab kia kahne waaH jee waaH ... bahut khoob
badi hi khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab.... behad
khoob ... kia khayaaloN ko khoobsurati se baNdha hai janab
bahut umdaa bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



Quote from: adil bechain on June 10, 2012, 09:40:51 AM


                   huaa qatl-e-aaaam, gutliyaan bachch gayeen..,
                   qatl-e-qalam mein  ungliyaan bachch gayeen..,

                   kah  kar  aawaara  kuttey  maar  diya  sabko,
                   gharo.n mein bewafaa billiyaan bachch gayeen,

                   ek   to   zimmedaari,  uspe  menhgaai  ka  bojh,
                   jism  mein  apne  jhilliyaan   bachch  gayeen,

                   zarurat   insaan  ko  le jaaye  kahaan -kahaan,
                   mohalley  mein  sunsaan galiyaan bachch gayeen,

                   jalaa   diya   gulshan   dushmano.n   ne  mere,
                   rothi   hui  buss   titliyaan   bachch  gayeen,

                   jali    biwi    meri,  saazish   ki   aag   mein,
                   shaatir  sabhi  uski  saheliyaan  bachch gayeen.
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2012, 03:35:57 AM »
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waaah adilji waaah.. bahut khub...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2012, 01:53:50 PM »
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Bahut hi achha kalam raha Aadil saheb. Saare ash'ar behad khoob rahe, sirf janwaro.n ko aapke iss kalam mein maarne ki baat mujhe sahi nahi lagi.
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2012, 04:21:57 PM »
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Bahut khoob adil bhai
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
kya kahne, mubaarakbaad dete hai aapko is kalaam par
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