aap biti

by RAJ SOLANKI on September 24, 2013, 05:47:19 PM
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jeth  ki dhupehri kasuta ghaam/dhup tha,
mai padya choobaare k kamre mai kar rehya aaram tha.

mai kamre/room mai apne mobil pai ragni chalya rehya tha
or sath sath khud bhi ragni gunguna rehya tha.
itne mai light chali gyi,
or mera g sa phookn gya
or chat wala pankha bhi dehire dehire chalta hua ruk gya.
 fir us k baad mere Bidi peen ki talab uth aayi,
or jab maine Bidi ka Bandal utha k dekhya to
us mai do bidi thi or wo bhi  tuti hui payi.
Dukhi hogya tha ab mai akela kamre mai padya padya,
fir Bidi lene mai dukaan ki taraf chal padya,
dukaan wali gali bilkul sun saan padi thi,
kahi trooli,to kahi bugi khadi thi,
mai apni masti mai ja rehya tha ,or ragni bhi gunguna rehya tha.
itne mai kisi ne mujhe piche se aawaaz lagayi,
maine piche mud k dekhya to goobar mai apne dono haath dhaanse/saandhye khadi thi ek lugaai,
mai us se bola ha bol k kaam sai,
wo boli yahan mere paas aaja dekh kitna kasuta ghaam/dhoop hai,
maine apne sar per odh rehya tha tawel/tooliya.
fir us k baad wo lugai
apne gitwaad/plot mai bad gi,
mai bhi us k piche piche ho liya.
us k paas jakar mai bolya,
kyu bulawe thi kya kaam tha mujh se ab to bata de.
wa boli ek bar mera oodhna/dupta sangwa de.
fir mai us ka oodhna/dupta sangwan/thik kran laagya.
or galti se mera haath us k gaal k laagya.
ab wa to roon laagi
or itne m uski bhabhi bhi wahan per aagi.
fir wo dono mujh se ladne laagi.
mai unse bolya mujhe maaf kar do,
or is maamlye ko yahi saaf kar do,
wo boli tera illaaz karwana padega,
ya to tu hamara kaam kar,nahi to phir tu pitwana pedega.
mai bolya jo kahogi wo kaam karunga,
kaho to tumahara paani bhi bharunga.
fir wo boli thik hai per ye baat kisi se na bataieye,
or mahara yo goobar pada hai tu saara goobar ne paath kar jaiye.
fir mai apni donu baazu sangwa kar laagya,
or do ghante ghaam/dhoop mai goobar paath kar unka fir wahan se nikal kar bhaaga.
ab jab bhi wa lugai mujhe rastye mai dekhti hai,
to mai apna rasta badal jaun hu,
kahin fir se mere saath wahi kaam na ban jaye is liye tal jaun hu.
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2013, 06:51:23 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2013, 06:16:13 PM »
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very nice
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