ADAAWAT-2.( inspired by mann.mann)

by qalb on May 02, 2012, 10:00:45 AM
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                         itnee   adaa   se  usne  daawat   kee.
                         pataa hee na  chala kaise adaawat kee.

                         ched  aaye  woh  shahad ke chhatte ko.
                         baithe  bithaaye  aisee  shaamat  kee.

                         dimaag  unkaa  patthar se sakht nikla.
                         kyon unhein samjhaane kee himaaqat kee.

                         padd   gaye  gale  woh   ta'umr   mere.
                         mazaak mein jo pyaar kee sharaarat kee.

                         dekar  jaan   apnee  aaj   hamne  qalb.
                         teree  iss  zindagee  se bhagaawat kee.


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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2012, 10:04:13 AM »
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akhir khuraafaat dikhaa hee dee tum naheen sudhroge khair aapke is haseen kalaam par dheron daad ek rau bhee dedoon
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2012, 10:14:35 AM »
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Qalb bhai aap to filmo ki tarah sayri me bhi part 2 le aate h.
 Bhut hasaya aapki es sayri ne....
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«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2012, 11:38:46 AM »
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Qalb sir ham to aapke fan ho gaye hain ye rau to hamaare haath men abhee naheen hai
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 11:48:37 AM »
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bohut khub qalb sahab
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2012, 02:11:40 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2012, 06:33:49 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2012, 05:56:49 AM »
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akhir khuraafaat dikhaa hee dee tum naheen sudhroge khair aapke is haseen kalaam par dheron daad ek rau bhee dedoon

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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2012, 08:36:36 AM »
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Qalb bhai aap to filmo ki tarah sayri me bhi part 2 le aate h.
 Bhut hasaya aapki es sayri ne....


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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2012, 03:29:30 AM »
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bahut khub qalbji..

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