~Andheri Raat Mein Pustak Liye Haat Mein~

by Sonia01 on June 15, 2008, 05:53:27 AM
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Exam jab ser pe tha toh mera mann yeh pratna kiya tha...  tongue3
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Andheri Raat Mein
Pustak Liye Haath Mein 
Padne ki ghaat mein baiti thi mai icon_study

Ser per tha imtihan  icon_silent
Toot raha tha aasman  sad3
Aafat mein thi meri jaan   Feared.
Kya padu, kya na padu   icon_scratch

Mauj udayi poore saal   Feared.
Dil kehta hai bar-bar

Hey Prabhu...!! 

Ab ki baar kar do beda par notworthy
Fir na hogi aisi bhool sad5
Padungi mann lagakar poora saal  tongue3
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2008, 08:43:27 AM »
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Very nice Sonia..aur imtihan ke liye meri bohat sari duwaen aapko
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2008, 11:56:48 AM »
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Exam jab ser pe tha toh mera mann yeh pratna kiya tha...  tongue3
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Andheri Raat Mein
Pustak Liye Haath Mein 
Padne ki ghaat mein baiti thi mai icon_study

Ser per tha imtihan  icon_silent
Toot raha tha aasman  sad3
Aafat mein thi meri jaan   Feared.
Kya padu, kya na padu   icon_scratch

Mauj udayi poore saal   :
Dil kehta hai bar-bar

Hey Prabhu...!! 

Ab ki baar kar do beda par notworthy
Fir na hogi aisi bhool sad5
Padungi mann lagakar poora saal  tongue3

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ISILIYE TO HUM KAHTE THE MUNNI PAD LO PADH LO..par nahi...to ab bhugto. NaNaNa
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2008, 03:21:16 PM »
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Thank you Honeyrose Jee and Sanjeev Bhaiya  tongue3
(Waise mai toh pass hogayi hu...)
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2008, 03:54:45 PM »
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pass ho gayi hai to kya ehsaan kar diya mujh par??
padg likh kar bade aadni banoge to yaad karoge hum buzurgon ki nasihaaton ko samjhi munni
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2008, 04:12:21 PM »
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Bujuruk logo ka kehna mana toh, Isko ehsaan kaise kehte ho?
Ehsaan toh hua hi hai na, pass jo ho gayi hu... tongue3
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2008, 09:49:26 PM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard bahoot sahi likha hai Sonia!!!

KABHI MERA BHI YAHI HAAL THA :p

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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2008, 10:14:05 PM »
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Bohot khoob Sonia...

Bohot achchhi kavita he ye, or alfaaz bhi bade achchhe istemal kiye he'n...
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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2008, 02:38:24 AM »
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Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard bahoot sahi likha hai Sonia!!!

KABHI MERA BHI YAHI HAAL THA :p

hahaha... thank you didi...... love9
ab mujhe aisa haal bar bar hona hai...  sad7
badi mushkil se 1st year clear kiya hai BangHead
aur 3 saal bakhi hai na  sad11
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2008, 08:45:33 AM »
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Wah sonia ji wah kia lika hai

mere taraf se bhi ek choti c shair aap k liyeh..

Pado ge liko ge banoge nawab,,,
pado ge liko ge banoge nawab,,,
Kehlo ge khudo ge banoge kharaab...

Sorry never mind!
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2008, 12:51:35 PM »
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Wah sonia ji wah kia lika hai

mere taraf se bhi ek choti c shair aap k liyeh..

Pado ge liko ge banoge nawab,,,
pado ge liko ge banoge nawab,,,
Kehlo ge khudo ge banoge kharaab...

Sorry never mind!

haha... bahut acche...
Sorry kyu likha jee.... Very nice sher... tongue3
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2008, 09:32:10 PM »
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sonia tum ne bahot majak wala likha he.  Giggle

Andheri Raat Mein Pustak Liye Haat Mein
mein so gayi kitab munh pe dal ke  tongue3
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«Reply #12 on: August 24, 2008, 05:22:39 PM »
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hahaha bahut accha likha hai dimpu... aaj hi pada humne. very good  Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 24, 2008, 05:24:52 PM »
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sonia tum ne bahot majak wala likha he.  Giggle

Andheri Raat Mein Pustak Liye Haat Mein
mein so gayi kitab munh pe dal ke  tongue3

Andheri raat main pustak liye haat main
So gayee ho tum Kanta, aur mai pass huyi
ke nahi yeh fikr main !!  Giggle  Giggle
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«Reply #14 on: September 01, 2008, 06:59:27 PM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard
kiya tension roja mein to pustak tension deti hu pura rat khula jo rehta he.  Giggle
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