Bhabhi Ka Belan------------------------------"Sagar"

by Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 24, 2015, 06:47:49 PM
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Bhabhi ne Tumhari Sara Ghar Sar pe Uthaya hai.!
Kehti hai Apni Behana ko Kyun Ghar Bithaya hai.!!

Apne Abba ko nahin Dekhti Line lga rakhi hai.!
Jaise Ghar mein Aam ki Bagiya Uga rakhi hai.!!

Ek se Ek Chasme-Badoor Saat-Saat Saleeyan hain.!
Karachi ke Sare Kunwaron ki Pared kara rakhi hai.!!

Behna jaane kyun Tumse Khafa rehti Jaan-e-Bahar.!
Tumne jaise Us ke Ghar ki Bhains hi Khol rakhi hai.!!

Keh dena Bhabhi ko Apna to Dum Nikalta hai Kehte Huye.!
Waqt Aate hi Byaha deinge Ishthyar nahin Nikal rakhi hai.!!

Fikar Na kar Iske Ghar bhi Jald Aayegi Iq Pyaari Bhabhi.!
Yahi Sawal karegi Inse Kyun Chaati Inko Bitha rakha hai.!!

Tab Samjhegi Behan kya hai aur Kya hai Behan ka Dard.!
Abhi to Subaha-Shaam Humko Bus Belan Dikha rakha hai.!!​
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Pyaari Behna Jaaogi Jis Ghar Wahaan Tum Aisa Na karna.!
Sakun hoga jo Sununga Tumne Ghar Zannat Bna rakha hai.!!

"Sagar" Kyun Nahin Samjhti Hain Ye Ghar-Waaliyan.!
Wo Bhi Beti Hain Kisi Ki Aag Kyun Fir Lga Rakhi Hai.!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2015, 08:00:15 PM »
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very very unique composition.
equally unique n touching was combination of humour n pathos.
very intelligently done piece.
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2015, 08:19:16 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Ravi ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, alag ki kahaani hai is kavitaa mein aapke, bahut achchaa lagaa padhke....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2015, 11:22:50 AM »
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hahahahaahahahah bohat hi khubsurat rachna Ravi sir ji dherooooo daaaaaadddd or rau due
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Quote from: jeet jainam on May 25, 2015, 11:22:50 AM
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hahahahaahahahah bohat hi khubsurat rachna Ravi sir ji dherooooo daaaaaadddd or rau due



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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 24, 2015, 08:19:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Ravi ji, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne, alag ki kahaani hai is kavitaa mein aapke, bahut achchaa lagaa padhke....!!!
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Quote from: alfaaz on May 24, 2015, 08:00:15 PM
Applause Applause Applause
very very unique composition.
equally unique n touching was combination of humour n pathos.
very intelligently done piece.
kudos to you.
Thanks Allot.
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