*Buddi Chali Sasural Re*

by Roja on January 27, 2009, 03:29:33 PM
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My First Posting In This Section... Hope You All Will Read & Comment.
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Fate paneer ka dood tapa toh aaye kadi mein ubaal re
Aadhi jawani maike guzer gayi, buddi chali sasural re..
Fagun ka jab aaye mahina beheke hai uski chal re..
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi, buddi chali sasural re..

Na toh aankhon se hai trichi.. na toh dikhne mein hai kaani
Na toh gharwalon ne uska kabhi naam rakha hai Rani
Panghat pe sakhiyan sang pahunche jab woh berne paani
Tab mohalle ke sare ladke usko pyar se bole Nani
Nani ko sunte hi ho jaye kaanon tak chehra laal re..
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi buddi chali sasural re...

 Sate ke paate mein patti bole khud ko kuwari
 Kaya uski tuntun jaise nakre meena kumari
 Koyale ke kandaan mein chamke heere ki woh katari
Badke toh shola ho jaye buje toh bas chingari
Karcha na aaye kafan dafan ka ghar mein hai ladki ka taal re
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi buddi chali sasural re...

Byahi(married) gayi per baap ke ghar se nikli naahi doli
Geetanjali hai woh takur ki ya chitrasen ki goli..
Daman uska sooraj jaisa chand ke jaise choli
Laaj ka ghoongat tod ke khele yaaron sang woh holi
Ek haat se abeer udaye dooje se fenke gulaal re..
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi buddi chali sasural re...


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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2009, 03:40:45 PM »
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Roja

Yeh kaunsi buddhi chali sasural re Winking tongue3 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Too good ! Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2009, 03:58:18 PM »
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My First Posting In This Section... Hope You All Will Read & Comment.
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Fate paneer ka dood tapa toh aaye kadi mein ubaal re
Aadhi jawani maike guzer gayi, buddi chali sasural re..
Fagun ka jab aaye mahina beheke hai uski chal re..
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi, buddi chali sasural re..

Na toh aankhon se hai trichi.. na toh dikhne mein hai kaani
Na toh gharwalon ne uska kabhi naam rakha hai Rani
Panghat pe sakhiyan sang pahunche jab woh berne paani
Tab mohalle ke sare ladke usko pyar se bole Nani
Nani ko sunte hi ho jaye kaanon tak chehra laal re..
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi buddi chali sasural re...

 Sate ke paate mein patti bole khud ko kuwari
 Kaya uski tuntun jaise nakre meena kumari
 Koyale ke kandaan mein chamke heere ki woh katari
Badke toh shola ho jaye buje toh bas chingari
Karcha na aaye kafan dafan ka ghar mein hai ladki ka taal re
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi buddi chali sasural re...

Byahi(married) gayi per baap ke ghar se nikli naahi doli
Geetanjali hai woh takur ki ya chitrasen ki goli..
Daman uska sooraj jaisa chand ke jaise choli
Laaj ka ghoongat tod ke khele yaaron sang woh holi
Ek haat se abeer udaye dooje se fenke gulaal re..
Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi buddi chali sasural re...


 tongue3 tongue3
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Roja

Yeh kaunsi buddhi chali sasural re Winking tongue3 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Too good ! Thumbs UP
Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP


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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2009, 04:01:06 PM »
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Hahaha ... very nice Roja Ji...

Bhudi haddi ankh se chokhi bhudi hui khal re
Phir bhi dekho ban-tan ke bhudi chali sarural re!!

HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2009, 04:07:16 PM »
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Waah waah,.
Bohat Hi Funnt Hai, Mazaa Aagaya,.
Nice One Roja Didi,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2009, 04:18:39 PM »
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roja ji yeh kya kar rahe ho.......

kyun uske armaano ko kose,jaane de buddi ko sasural re,
us ke bhi dil mein umang hai bar aayi,khushi se bitane de,uske din chaar re.

tujse aur mujhse khush naseeb hogi,us ko kahan saas hogi,sasural mein,
na saas ki jangat ,na sasur ki parwa,buddi toh kush naseeb hai,jaane de  buddi ko sasural re.
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2009, 04:25:49 PM »
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roja ji yeh kya kar rahe ho.......

kyun uske armaano ko kose,jaane de buddi ko sasural re,
us ke bhi dil mein umang hai bar aayi,khushi se bitane de,uske din chaar re.

tujse aur mujhse khush naseeb hogi,us ko kahan saas hogi,sasural mein,
na saas ki jangat ,na sasur ki parwa,buddi toh kush naseeb hai,jaane de  buddi ko sasural re.


 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Well... Bahut accha likha hai aapne Cara...
mujhe padkar bahut accha laga aur hassi b bahut aayi... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2009, 04:28:59 PM »
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Hahaha ... very nice Roja Ji...

Bhudi haddi ankh se chokhi bhudi hui khal re
Phir bhi dekho ban-tan ke bhudi chali sarural re!!

HumTum

haaa... nice lines...  Usual Smile

Roop ki daulat se labalab hai uske dil ka kazana
Joban uska Himala jaise sutva naak havana
Koyi angdayi ka aashiq koyi kamer ka diwana
Uske latke jatke dekh ke pagal hua hai zamana
Balkhaye jab uski jawani Nache hai phoolon ki daal re..

Aadi jawani maike guzer gayi buddi chali sasural re...  tongue3
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2009, 04:38:01 PM »
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   Giggle Giggle  Roja wah wah kya likha hai dear

 Giggle Giggle HumTum ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai

 Giggle Giggle Cara ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai ...



 
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2009, 08:01:30 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley
simply gr8..... icon_salut
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2009, 06:19:58 AM »
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 good...very funny.... Giggle
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«Reply #11 on: January 28, 2009, 12:49:32 PM »
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Wah jee jab tum budhi hona muje batana isse bhi kuch zabardast tumhare liye likhuga bilkul freeeeeeeee  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard aur usi din thread banaooga dedicate to Roja  Giggle

Waise pata nahi q is poetry me ek ajeeb dusra pehlu muje nazar aaya but yaha kehna theek nahi everyone is happy Great work Roja too good. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2009, 06:16:40 AM »
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Wah wah roja bahen kya likha hai kasam se maza agaya aur dil bhi bhar aya !!
Kya mel jhol hai khushi aur gham ka is ghazal me !!

Aur ghayel apki pari nazar ko dil se daad qobolkaren janab !! mahesoos karte hain app shayari ko !!

Is ghazal ke do pahelo hain magar yahan batana munasib nahi rooja bahen excellent work from you !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2009, 08:39:05 AM »
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hey Roja its too gud yaar.. I m still laughing. gud one
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2009, 04:25:53 PM »
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Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Roja

Yeh kaunsi buddhi chali sasural re Winking tongue3 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Too good ! Thumbs UP

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Thanks bhaiya
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