chhammak chhallo.....................

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 08, 2011, 12:31:24 PM
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Aajkal ke geet kitne superfast hain.
kaun kehta hai munni aur sheela last hain.
Aur bhi aayengi chammak chhallo
kitno ne kaha ye bahut mast hai.
Ab ghazal itni hit kyun hoti nahin.
Dil ki baat kya dheere se hoti nahin.

Nazar bhi bolti hai,kuch pata bhi hai.
Ehsaas mehkaate hain zindgi, kuch pata bhi hai.

Sheela aur munni aandhi si aati hain.
Toofan si jaati hain.

Koi Mumtaaz aaye,Tajmahal banwaye.
Kisi anarkali ke liye saleem ne taaj thukraye.
Kash wo zamaane fir laut kar aayen.
Kash wo manzar fir laut kar aayen.


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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2011, 12:34:49 PM »
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Aajkal ke geet kitne superfast hain.
kaun kehta hai munni aur sheela last hain.
Aur bhi aayengi chammak chhallo
kitno ne kaha ye bahut mast hai.
Ab ghazal itni hit kyun hoti nahin.
Dil ki baat kya dheere se hoti nahin.

Nazar bhi bolti hai,kuch pata bhi hai.
Ehsaas mehkaate hain zindgi, kuch pata bhi hai.

Sheela aur munni aandhi si aati hain.
Toofan si jaati hain.

Koi Mumtaaz aaye,Tajmahal banwaye.
Kisi anarkali ke liye saleem ne taaj thukraye.
Kash wo zamaane fir laut kar aayen.
Kash wo manzar fir laut kar aayen.





Mazahiya Andaaz mein Aapne Sachi Aur seedhi Baat Kahi..

Sach Mein inn gaano Ne To Dhoom Machaya Hai Par Abhi Ghazal Ka Rutba,Ghazal Ki Shaan Apni jagah Hai...

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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2011, 12:42:15 PM »
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haan sahi hai--

very gud thought suresh ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2011, 12:54:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
'aapne sach kaha hai inn gaano ne bahut dhoom machai hai.
Par samajh nahin aaya aisa kya tha inmein dhoom machaane wala.

Mazahiya Andaaz mein Aapne Sachi Aur seedhi Baat Kahi..

Sach Mein inn gaano Ne To Dhoom Machaya Hai Par Abhi Ghazal Ka Rutba,Ghazal Ki Shaan Apni jagah Hai...

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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2011, 12:55:09 PM »
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shukriya sarfira ji.
haan sahi hai--

very gud thought suresh ji
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2011, 02:32:48 PM »
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Aap ki ye poem na sirf hamare-aap ke dard ka izhaar karti hai bulki filmsaazon aur naazireen ke girte meiyaar per bhi chot hai.Bahut mubarakbaad is khoobsurat andaaz ke liye./
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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2011, 02:19:27 PM »
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thanks a lot siddiqui ji.
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Aap ki ye poem na sirf hamare-aap ke dard ka izhaar karti hai bulki filmsaazon aur naazireen ke girte meiyaar per bhi chot hai.Bahut mubarakbaad is khoobsurat andaaz ke liye./
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 02:21:37 PM »
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Aajkal ke geet kitne superfast hain.
kaun kehta hai munni aur sheela last hain.
Aur bhi aayengi chammak chhallo
kitno ne kaha ye bahut mast hai.
Ab ghazal itni hit kyun hoti nahin.
Dil ki baat kya dheere se hoti nahin.

Nazar bhi bolti hai,kuch pata bhi hai.
Ehsaas mehkaate hain zindgi, kuch pata bhi hai.

Sheela aur munni aandhi si aati hain.
Toofan si jaati hain.

Koi Mumtaaz aaye,Tajmahal banwaye.
Kisi anarkali ke liye saleem ne taaj thukraye.
Kash wo zamaane fir laut kar aayen.
Kash wo manzar fir laut kar aayen.




bahut acha suresh ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2011, 02:23:22 PM »
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thanks a lor sheba ji.
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bahut acha suresh ji

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