CHUDAIL......SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on August 06, 2013, 08:14:47 PM
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jabse sapno.n mein bhayanak chudail ka aana jaana ho gaya
meri to puri body mein jaise koi bhootkhana ho gayaa

uske khule khule bikhre baal uske pairo.n ki ulti chal
mera to use dekh ke khade khade thartharaana ho gaya

lal-lal aakhein thi aur eye brow  bhi kano tak theEE
use dekh dil ki dhadkan tej aur aakhon ka pathrana ho gya

mere pass aakar boli tera main khoon peekar hi rahungi
kasak hai yeh mere dil ki uska mujhe batana ho gaya

itna sunte hee mere paon tale ki zameen khishak gaii
aur sar par se aasmaan ka bhi hatt jaana ho gaya

main bola ae pari ae vishav sundari mujhe yu na darao
main to tumhari surat dekhte hi tumhara deewanaa ho gya

tum khilti kali ho manchali ho dil se badi bhali ho
yun kar pyari pyari baton se mera usko samjhana ho gya

jaane kya baat hui aur wo mere seene se lag ro padi
boli mujhse ab to tera ghar hee mera thikaana ho gya

itna sunte hee pair kampkapaye aur dil dhadka zor se
saasein meri ruk gai,rooh ka meri zaat se jana ho gaya




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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 08:29:07 PM »
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Hayeelllaaaaaa saudagar tum to MT se fast nikle.. kya khub description aur kya hi khub poem kahi h tumne mujhpar waaaaaaahhhhhh maza aagaya... dekhen ab MT kya jawab deta h ....

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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 08:36:11 PM »
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Mohbbat Pe Likhi Hain ya Darr Pe.. Chudail Pe Likhi Hain Ya Izhaar Pe..

Mujhe To Ye Ye Padhkar Na Jane Kya Ho Gya..
Saudagar Ji To Chudail Ka Deewana Ho Gya..  tongue3 tongue3
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2013, 08:43:50 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khoob likha hai bhai..lagta hai ab kuchh sikh jaunga likhna bhuto.N pe aur sath hi unse prem ki dastan pe.. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Are waah waah waah are waah waah waah..

Aisa lag ra chudail ke ishq me phir ikk insan deewana ho gaya,,
Darte darte chudail se bechare ka duniya se hi ab jaana ho gaya..tongue3

 
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2013, 09:03:13 PM »
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Hahaha rishi.... game section me subah k replies padho samjh jaoge kyu likhi h
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2013, 09:07:50 PM »
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Oyeee arjun....  bhut pe likhna sabse mushkil kaam h samjhe
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2013, 09:09:31 PM »
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shukriya kasak ji ..bas aapka signature dekh aapko chudail mein bhi pari bana dia  NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa
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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 08:59:39 AM »
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 angel11 angel11 angel11 angel11 angel11
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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bhot accha likhte ho aap
ab jaldi se baaki chudailo pe bhi likho nahee to kaccha chaba jaayengi ve aapko
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 09:07:04 AM »
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shukriya rishi bhai
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 09:52:35 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2013, 10:01:44 AM »
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bahut khoob

Ek najar mein hi chudail aapko bha gayee
Issliye seene se aapke vo pyar se lag gayee

Pyar ki najar se dekho ek bar saudagar bhai
Chudail hi jannat ki hoor najar aayegi bhai
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2013, 10:30:03 AM »
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jabse sapno.n mein bhayanak chudail ka aana jaana ho gaya
meri to puri body mein jaise koi bhootkhana ho gayaa

uske khule khule bikhre baal uske pairo.n ki ulti chal
mera to use dekh ke khade khade thartharaana ho gaya

lal-lal aakhein thi aur eye brow  bhi kano tak theEE
use dekh dil ki dhadkan tej aur aakhon ka pathrana ho gya

mere pass aakar boli tera main khoon peekar hi rahungi
kasak hai yeh mere dil ki uska mujhe batana ho gaya

itna sunte hee mere paon tale ki zameen khishak gaii
aur sar par se aasmaan ka bhi hatt jaana ho gaya

main bola ae pari ae vishav sundari mujhe yu na darao
main to tumhari surat dekhte hi tumhara deewanaa ho gya

tum khilti kali ho manchali ho dil se badi bhali ho
yun kar pyari pyari baton se mera usko samjhana ho gya

jaane kya baat hui aur wo mere seene se lag ro padi
boli mujhse ab to tera ghar hee mera thikaana ho gya

itna sunte hee pair kampkapaye aur dil dhadka zor se
saasein meri ruk gai,rooh ka meri zaat se jana ho gaya






ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha 1000 TIMES LOL ,SIR outstanding hazal with one rau
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2013, 10:53:40 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2013, 11:22:10 AM »
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VERY NICE  icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2013, 01:29:13 PM »
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क्या बात है सौदागर जी....अब वो चुड़ैल कहाँ है?Huh???
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