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               rahtey hain khafaa alfaaz bhi meri gaali sey,
               rahtey hain khafaa ustaad bhi meri gaali sey,
              
               bhauktey nahin kuttey bhi ghar key saamney,
               rahtey hain khaufzada wo bhi meri gaali sey,

               nahin detaa dastakh koi darwaazey par merey,
               dartey hain bhikhari bhi meri gaali sey,

               pukara gar saaley ko saala to chillati hai biwi,
               rahtey hain khafa sasuralwaley bhi  meri gaali sey,

               koi nahin bulaata mujhey apni mehfil main yahaan,
               rahtey hain pareshaan shaherwaley bhi meri gaali sey,
              
               kartey hain salaam mujhey aaj sabhi izzatdar
               rahtey hain hairaan wo bhi   meri gaali sey,
              
               sudhar ley aadat  apni waqt sey pahley marhoom,
               hogaa rukhsat warnaa phir tu sabhi ki gaali sey...!
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2010, 05:19:26 PM »
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Tho fir Sudar kyun Nahi jaate " MB"
Ya Sudroge apni Saali ki gaali se  !!!

 Heehhe  .." Dont mind !

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai MB ji... Bahoot Khooob

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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2010, 03:51:46 PM »
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Nice Mahroom Ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 06:34:21 PM »
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Tho fir Sudar kyun Nahi jaate " MB"
Ya Sudroge apni Saali ki gaali se  !!!

 Heehhe  .." Dont mind !

Bahoot Bahoot Khoob LIkha hai MB ji... Bahoot Khooob



thank you sophi ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 06:34:58 PM »
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badhia likha hai
kalam ko bahut pyaar se chalaya hai aapne gaali se hehehe
well i agree with Sophi ji,Bhayaat dost nice one

kuch na mila hai na milega kisi ko gali se
gali hi milti hai gali se chahe biwi se chahe saali se  tongue3

thank you kaash ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 06:35:36 PM »
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Nice Mahroom Ji

thank you rishi ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 07:11:26 PM »
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               alfaaz bhi khafaa rahtey hain meri gaali sey,
               ustaad bhi khafaa rahtey hain meri gaali sey,
               
               kuttey bhi nahin bhauktey ghar key saamney,
               wo bhi khaufzada rahtey hain meri gaali sey,

               koi nahin detaa dastakh merey darwaazey par,
               bhikhari bhi dartey hain meri gaali sey,

               saaley ko saala pukaro to biwi chillati hai,
               sasural waley bhi khafa rahtey hain meri gaali sey,

               koi nahin bulaata mujhey apni mehfil main yahaan,
               shaharwaley bhi pareshaan rahtey hain meri gaali sey,
               
               kartey hain salaam mujhey aaj sabhi izzatdar
               wo bhi khaufzada rahtey hain  meri gaali sey,
               
               sudhar jaa apni  iss aadat  sey marhoom,
               warna bidaa hoga phir tu sabhi ki gaali sey...!

very nice ji....ha ha ha ha ..behad umda dost

jaise phool murjha jaate hai, nousikhiye maali se,
log aise hi ghabraate hain mere yaar ki gaali se,

ha ha ha ha
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 07:44:40 PM »
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Ha Ha Ha..Bahut khoob M.B ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2010, 05:41:01 PM »
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Ha Ha Ha..Bahut khoob M.B ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank u khwaish ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2010, 05:41:39 PM »
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very nice ji....ha ha ha ha ..behad umda dost

jaise phool murjha jaate hai, nousikhiye maali se,
log aise hi ghabraate hain mere yaar ki gaali se,

ha ha ha ha

thank u bekarar ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2010, 12:15:16 AM »
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very nice ji....ha ha ha ha ..behad umda dost

jaise phool murjha jaate hai, nousikhiye maali se,
log aise hi ghabraate hain mere yaar ki gaali se,

ha ha ha ha

bahut achchi lines hain bekaraar ji.....
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2010, 01:53:05 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2010, 04:58:31 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Marhoom ji.beatiful creation.Bekarar ji aapne bhi bahut kaha.Sophi ji ,Kaash ji aap ne bhi sahi kaha. Thumbs UP Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2010, 02:34:51 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2010, 01:15:12 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai Marhoom ji.beatiful creation.Bekarar ji aapne bhi bahut kaha.Sophi ji ,Kaash ji aap ne bhi sahi kaha. Thumbs UP Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank u madhuwesh ji
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