haqq koi apna !!!

by sarfira on October 09, 2011, 01:03:50 AM
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thukraya bhi nahi apnaya bhi nahi
dekh tanha gale lagaya bhi nahi
sataya bhi nahi parey hataya bhi nahi
haqq koi apna jataya bhi nahi
umango ko pank lag hi jaate
haath magar apna bdhaya hi nahi
bahake ashq jala kar lahoo
do gaz saath nibhaya bhi nahi
chadhakar rang fir paani saa
khwaab koi dikhaya bhi nahi
na na karey haan haan karey
maqool jawaab dikhaya hi nahi
dikhave hain gairiyat ke qabil
saanso se saans milaya bhi nahi
bikti hain wafayen jahaan
ilm e hunar,seekha bhi nahi sikhaya bhi nahi
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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2011, 09:10:44 AM »
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thukraya bhi nahi apnaya bhi nahi
dekh tanha gale lagaya bhi nahi
sataya bhi nahi parey hataya bhi nahi
haqq koi apna jataya bhi nahi
umango ko pank lag hi jaate
haath magar apna bdhaya hi nahi
bahake ashq jala kar lahoo
do gaz saath nibhaya bhi nahi
chadhakar rang fir paani saa
khwaab koi dikhaya bhi nahi
na na karey haan haan karey
maqool jawaab dikhaya hi nahi
dikhave hain gairiyat ke qabil
saanso se saans milaya bhi nahi
bikti hain wafayen jahaan
ilm e hunar,seekha bhi nahi sikhaya bhi nahi
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2011, 09:47:06 AM »
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thukraya bhi nahi apnaya bhi nahi
dekh tanha gale lagaya bhi nahi..

Wah Sarfira Ji ...Kya baat hai...Har sher kabil-e-daad hai...Humari dili daad kabool kijiye..!!

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Khas kar antim do pantiyo.n ne to kamal kar diya...Bahut Khoob Janab..!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2011, 10:59:27 AM »
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thukraya bhi nahi apnaya bhi nahi
dekh tanha gale lagaya bhi nahi
sataya bhi nahi parey hataya bhi nahi
haqq koi apna jataya bhi nahi
umango ko pank lag hi jaate
haath magar apna bdhaya hi nahi
bahake ashq jala kar lahoo
do gaz saath nibhaya bhi nahi
chadhakar rang fir paani saa
khwaab koi dikhaya bhi nahi
na na karey haan haan karey
maqool jawaab dikhaya hi nahi
dikhave hain gairiyat ke qabil
saanso se saans milaya bhi nahi
bikti hain wafayen jahaan
ilm e hunar,seekha bhi nahi sikhaya bhi nahi
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bahut hi khoob. kya khoobsoorat bayaan hai janaab. yaqeen nahin hota sarfira ji aapne likha hai


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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2011, 05:01:19 PM »
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S firaa Jee Aadaab!

Waah waah janab kia kahne waah bahut khub ahsaasoN ko behad
pyaare Aur khub lafz diye hai aapne.. puri kalaam aik hi unwaaN
ko baqoobi bayaaN kar gayi...

Is behad khoob aur umdaa koshish par dili daad O mubarakbad hazir hai..
Par waqai yakeeN nahi ho raha ke yeH khubsurat kalaam aapne likhi tongue3

Just joking janab.. hum jante hai aapka mayaar kitna bada hai..
Dili daad kabul kijiye.. Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         



Dekhte rahe aur kuch nahi, aik dafa dekh muskuraya bhi nahi
Naa hi chahateN naa hi nafrateN hisse mere yaar aaya bhi nahi

Rahe ajnabi umar bhar youNhi, Kisi ne humse dil lagaya bhi nahi
Kaisi rahjisheN kaisa ruthna, humne na khoya na payaa bhi nahi

         

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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2011, 05:36:01 PM »
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sarfira ji,

waah kya baat hai..bahut khoob..
keep on writing...all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2011, 04:37:28 PM »
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sarfira ji ,,,,,,lakh lakh ....mubarkbaaad,,,,,,,bahud umda aasaar hain ,,,,,daad hajir hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2011, 04:40:53 PM »
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daaaad hazir hai,
sarfira ji.
bahut gehrai aur dil ke tehkhane se nikala hai.
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2011, 05:00:00 PM »
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thanx Manoj ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2011, 05:03:23 PM »
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thanx Gyan ji
Usual Smile
thukraya bhi nahi apnaya bhi nahi
dekh tanha gale lagaya bhi nahi..

Wah Sarfira Ji ...Kya baat hai...Har sher kabil-e-daad hai...Humari dili daad kabool kijiye..!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khas kar antim do pantiyo.n ne to kamal kar diya...Bahut Khoob Janab..!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 13, 2011, 05:06:45 PM »
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BAhut Khoob Sifira Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 14, 2011, 11:30:00 PM »
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bahut hi khoob. kya khoobsoorat bayaan hai janaab. yaqeen nahin hota sarfira ji aapne likha hai
hmm
thanx Sheba ji--
pata nhi mai kuch aisi sarfiriyat kyun kar jata hoon ki aapko viswaas nhi hota tongue3

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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2011, 11:50:24 PM »
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S firaa Jee Aadaab!

Waah waah janab kia kahne waah bahut khub ahsaasoN ko behad
pyaare Aur khub lafz diye hai aapne.. puri kalaam aik hi unwaaN
ko baqoobi bayaaN kar gayi...

Is behad khoob aur umdaa koshish par dili daad O mubarakbad hazir hai..
Par waqai yakeeN nahi ho raha ke yeH khubsurat kalaam aapne likhi tongue3

Just joking janab.. hum jante hai aapka mayaar kitna bada hai..
Dili daad kabul kijiye.. Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         



Dekhte rahe aur kuch nahi, aik dafa dekh muskuraya bhi nahi
Naa hi chahateN naa hi nafrateN hisse mere yaar aaya bhi nahi

Rahe ajnabi umar bhar youNhi, Kisi ne humse dil lagaya bhi nahi
Kaisi rahjisheN kaisa ruthna, humne na khoya na payaa bhi nahi

         


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«Reply #13 on: October 14, 2011, 11:53:26 PM »
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sarfira ji,

waah kya baat hai..bahut khoob..
keep on writing...all the best.

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«Reply #14 on: October 14, 2011, 11:56:43 PM »
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sarfira ji ,,,,,,lakh lakh ....mubarkbaaad,,,,,,,bahud umda aasaar hain ,,,,,daad hajir hai
thanx janaab
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